The Realm's Legacy

The book is really good. I grabbed 3 red envelopes and had to read for three minutes. I thought I was too lazy to read, but then I couldn't stop reading. Come on, author, I hope you can persevere.

The book is a good book, the writing style is also very grand, and it feels refreshing to read. Although it is written from a male perspective, I still like this book very much. If I have time, I plan to add it to my reading list. I love the ancient atmosphere, so this book It gave me the feeling that I rarely see it in thousands of books, so I couldn't put it down, so I clicked on the details page of the book by the author Da Da. I never thought that Da Da Da would only write the current one, so I'll read it first, and I will continue to pay attention to the next book written by Da Da Da in the future!

Jiang Chengzi · Scribbling The Xiao family and the Chu family were in the same court. Looking at the country and the mountains, the industry has been injured. Jintang Jinyue, Jinyi warm and cool. Mountains and rivers are always beautiful, pure and pure, and the wind resists the frost. Mu's and Lan's are hidden on both sides. Xuan Zheng is busy, too clear and confused. Introducing the Zheng to the mountains, inducing the feathers to fight against the wolf. Traveling in rivers and lakes with wine and swords, Pingliangshuo, full of madness.

I haven't recommended a female channel on Qidian for a long time. I clicked on it for the red envelope and couldn't stop reading it. I thought it was a historical novel about a male channel, but it turned out to be an ancient novel about a female channel... As long as I remember, the recommendation vote should have been gone.

Although some ancient novels are classified into the category of ancient romance, they do not read with a sense of history. "Jiangshanye" is not the case. This book has a very strong sense of substitution, and it pulls people back to the historical time and space designed by the author from the very beginning. The story of "Jiangshanye" is about court struggle, and the protagonist is a man. I think this may be the reason why this book is not popular on female channels (so the author, why don't you publish it on male channels). But this cannot take away the brilliance of this book. I believe there will be discerning readers who will appreciate such a story. The character creation in the book is also very successful. Xiao Jintang has established a tolerant, sinister and sharp image from the moment he appeared in the first chapter. In comparison, Xiao Jinhui's scheming was not as good as that of his younger brother who was more than twenty years younger than him. I feel that at this point, the author should make Xiao Jinhui stronger, otherwise how could he kill other brothers before. Then for Xiao Jintang, women may not seem so important. Such a man should love his country more than his beauty. It would be illogical to limit his love to his children. This book should be regarded as a serious drama, with a huge layout. I feel that the author would not be able to finish it if he didn't have millions of words (so why don't you post it on a male channel?), And the description is also very exciting. The only worry is that judging from Xiao Jintang's current character and past experience, he can easily lead to tragedy, which makes me feel a little pity for him. So in the end, I picked up a small whip and whipped the author, hoping to end it at the best point. I couldn't accept Xiao Jintang's bad ending.

I've long wanted to open a poetry studio like Yu Anyi, the master from "The Ups and Downs of Nations" next door! However, the author is not very good at writing poetry, and his short and long sentences are mediocre. There is no rhyme, it is composed casually, everyone should take it as a joke2333

Coming! Collected, will read it carefully. Sometimes as I write, I suddenly wonder if everyone only loves to watch time travel and rebirth, but you make me confirm that the story of Jiangshan Beauty can never be finished. I just read the first few chapters, and the writing is solid and I haven't seen it for a long time. The author must be a girl, and it's amazing that the writing is so strong from a male perspective. Mutual encouragement!

This book is probably the most venomous book I have ever read in Qidian. It was so venomous at the beginning that I was discouraged from reading it. I took a quick glance at it and found that the author's writing style was so good that you could feel that this was simply a sample essay template. So I went back and read it again. In the end, I couldn't stop at all. Let's talk about writing first. Generally speaking, writing that is too gorgeous will make people feel that it is too cumbersome to read or too emotional. If the writing power is slightly weaker, it will give people a sense of deliberate brilliance, but the author's writing is gorgeous and grand, and the wording is natural and creative. The most amazing thing is the artistic conception and picture between the lines. The narrative is melodious and meandering, making people feel that this is not a novel, but an immersive movie. Mountains, rivers and the world are drawn in one stroke. Carved beams and painted buildings, flying pavilions and beautiful palaces are right in front of you. As for the plot, the author of the narrative structure is good at using plot layers to proceed step by step, the plots are interlocking, the plot is smooth and mind-numbing, the characters are clearly drawn, and the conspiracies are intertwined. From the perspective of the Young Emperor of the Eastern Zhou Dynasty, it is gradually revealed that the conflict between the Three Kingdoms ushered in a chaotic world. At first, when the world view has not yet unfolded, it will only make people feel that the setting is ordinary. However, as the plot unfolded, I realized that the urban geography, people, and customs set in this article were appropriately detailed. The most brilliant thing is to write about war based on your own fictional setting. It is difficult to imagine that the author who describes such hard-core military formations, tactics, and arms is a girl. But the charm of this book is far from that. This is a hard-core Machiavellian novel that is rare nowadays. Many people suggest that the author directly writes it on a male channel, because the male protagonist's perspective will directly dissuade most female readers. But I think the emotional scenes in "Jiangshanye" are the finishing touch. If the hard-core plot is the bones, then the emotions are the gods. The emotional lines in this article are delicate and euphemistic yet bright and strong. People with different personalities have different attitudes towards feelings. But so many of them are not as good as the author's skill in character creation. I like the two male protagonists written by the author very much. They make me feel like they are real living teenagers. Yes, they are teenagers. They are growing up all the time. It is difficult for many authors to describe the growth of men. The two of them always remind me of the pheasant and turtle in "Jiuzhou Piaomiaolu". Perhaps like the author said, she likes men with lion hearts. I like her understanding of loyalty. In every sentence of nearly 400,000 words, one can read their growth and their lion hearts. This is something I admire very much about the author. For his control and description of human nature, I can feel that the author is also a woman with a lion heart. This article deservedly made me have a fundamental change in my view of female authors. Female authors also write about women more delicately. The daughters are beautiful in their own way, but they are by no means sad or complaining. Although their situations are different, without exception, they all have clear personalities, strong and charming, which can be said to be the soul of the daughters written by the author. But these two points are difficult to describe in many novels. I am looking forward to the author's future foreshadowing. I think the current plot is just an opening chapter. The 400,000-word opening chapter shows the author's ambition. Speaking of fictional history, I feel that this book does not describe a struggle for hegemony, but a legend. Everyone in it is a gorgeous legend.

First of all, I want to make it clear that I feel that this book is very good, so I will extend the review. It is not a criticism or dislike, but I just want to read better articles. Ask a few questions: First of all, it is best not to write a web article like a composition, with such long paragraphs, because it will make you irritated. Secondly, it is best to add the punctuation marks that should be added, so that the expression will be clearer. Third, be clear about what you want to write and the purpose you want to express. Although description of demeanor and environment is necessary and necessary, it is not enough. Fourthly, don't always abbreviate words, because if you simplify something complex once, readers can guess the meaning based on the context. However, if you simplify something complex multiple times, it will make the meaning a bit unclear. Fifth, when you first start writing, it is best to make it easy to understand. After all, not everyone can read classical Chinese, and the style and sentence fragmentation of classical Chinese are very particular. Before you control these rhythms, you will write something strange, which will be convoluted when reading, and you will lose the sense of pleasure you should have. Finally, I want to ask, is the author majoring in Chinese? Or is he engaged in a profession related to classical Chinese?

I have a little cold The decoration sound is very noisy Repair computer suddenly There is a test to take No time the day before yesterday No inspiration yesterday Today is the dead line See you tomorrow It'll be ready soon Can hand it in tomorrow I'm sorry (I'm so sorry, so sorry) As time goes by Gu Gu Gu Gu Gu wait a few more days Just a little bit last night The sea is dry and the rocks are in ruins Gu Gu Gu Gu Gu Gu Mobile phones are so fun The new show is also good to watch Chatting in the group Happy as a fairy does not exist in the morning No state at noon In a daze in the afternoon The night passes quickly It'll be ready soon (It'll be ready soon!) Will update tomorrow! Sorry (I'm so sorry!)' As time goes by Waiting for a few days (will be ready soon!) Hand it in tomorrow wait one more day The sea is dry and the rocks are in ruins Goo goo goo goo goo… ——The Essence of Humanity "Pigeon"