Dad's 1993

After reading the previous chapters, I personally feel that the author is a bit ignorant about business. For home appliances, let alone the seller's market in the 1990s, if you open a store now, no matter how big it is, it is impossible for the manufacturer to deliver the goods to you without paying a penny for the new store.

This protagonist is incredible. He has never raised children, never served in the military, has no memory of what it was like in 1993, has never been to Yanjing, has never opened a store, and has never managed employees. Everything is based on imagination!

The protagonist's nature is so cold... It's really not worth it for the heroine. Forget it, bye.

I was also drunk. You said a good proposition and it was ruined like this.

This book is very well written, and the author's writing style is also very good, but there are six problems! ...

I found that there is a very serious problem in this novel chapter, that is, one sentence is too long. There was no problem when I first read it, but after reading one or two chapters, the awkward feeling came out. So, let's say goodbye

What are you writing about? Your topic. Nima, a primary school student? Look at the title of your novel. Does it match what you wrote? What a waste of time

To be honest, I personally feel that the first few chapters are okay, but the rest is like a chronicle-style junior high school composition.

After reading it for a long time, I didn't realize that the story about the nanny is all a commercial routine. The main character doesn't just have two children and can be called a nanny. The center of the nanny story is to take care of the children.

I can understand how hard it is for the author to write a book, but no matter how hard it is, you still have to prepare the materials↖(^ω^)↗Come on

Under the guise of being a nanny, there is no warm feeling, which is a bit unbearable.

There are many places that are inconsistent with the times, and there are logical problems that are flaw😰

This book is not far away from the eunuch. After the appraisal is completed, it is updated every three days without any explanation. This behavior shows that the author may not be able to write anymore. He is struggling with the war between heaven and man. After a few days, he finds that fewer and fewer people are reading the book, and he will not want to write anymore.

Update soon, it's been two days, don't lose your character

Alas! The author was a decent person before he entered the palace. This shouldn't be too shabby. Let's finish spitting before leaving! Bah! ! !

After reading the first chapter, I didn't want to read anymore. It was so heartbreaking to leave the baby alone at home to sleep.

It feels like there is an indescribable sense of peacekeeping, so stiff. This kind of writer should write some books about fighting and killing. The author does not have enough knowledge about the type of genre he can control.

The poison test is over, it's not a poisonous weed. Not suitable for popular taste. The biggest failure in my opinion is that the mothers of the two children died at the beginning. Not much to say. It is not a poisonous weed, nor is it a food source. You can watch it. The writing style is a bit stiff and doesn't feel like it's my own. If you think of Dad's Literary Life, the whole book has a warm feeling. Very immersive. Not this one.

It's poisonous. I followed the author's idea too much. I estimate that the first day the store opened didn't make 360,000 yuan, but sold 360,000 yuan.

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