Cartoonist's Journey to Another World

The strengthening of the light ball... Is the protagonist going to be the behind-the-scenes boss of the main god space?

This book collapsed. I started writing before I even finished the setting. There is no limit to the protagonist's abilities at all.

Let me make another suggestion. This heroine is too pretty. There is nothing eye-catching about her. She feels like she is just a burden to the protagonist to eat and drink around. I hope I can add some separate scenes to make her character stand out a little bit. If that doesn't work, even adding some weird hobbies would at least make this character come alive.

It's a pretty good novel. I hope the author can stick to it and hope that the protagonist will have a positive personality in the future! Not a Holy Mother, but a good person! If it is put on the shelves, I will keep it fully booked! Come on, author! ! !

"Intelligence has not been strengthened much... Besides, doesn't it mean that intelligence is always strengthened?" You don't have enough intelligence to speak like this.