The Dynasty of the World

， Iron fan theory: The Dynasty of Shenshi has outstanding literary talent, gorgeous rhetoric, simple language, fresh writing, rich emotions, full characters, clear organization, well-structured structure, reasonable plot, ups and downs, vivid and fascinating descriptions, and strong artistic appeal. I love Yi Quehuang deeply and praise Yiquehuang, "I can't help but say that this fan is extremely talented. Overflowing, eloquent numbers clearly explain the structure of the article and indicate the characters you like. In my opinion, this fan must be a talented person and extraordinary. This son can be regarded as the talented Wang Bo, a rare boy. Whoever gets this son will win the world. Congratulations to Miss Meow Meow for winning the hearts of readers all over the world. The novel will be popular, congratulations, congratulations" Reader's Comment: When I first read it, I have to say that this novel is very special and refreshing to me because it is written in the first person. This is the first time I have encountered this type of novel. To be precise, it should be the first time I have read it, so I feel that this type of novel is quite unique.

About Shengyou This is a unicorn with a stubborn temper and cold-blooded tongue. I got it together, and I gave him a peerless beauty. But he is not bad at heart, he is just more accepting of death. Of course some people will question why cold blood is not bad? Cold-blooded means he has a cold attitude toward things and people. But that doesn't mean he has harmful intentions. Although in this chapter 120, he did join forces with the queen to pull Ad Zhuo back from Su Ge. It was also true that Azhuo used blood to keep the prince alive. But he followed what he believed was destiny. Destiny Azhuo will not be with Su Ge. So, mess it up! It's up to him! I haven't written enough about dog abuse!

Awesome, he is indeed the boss, and the newcomer has slipped away.

Thank you for the long review of UW University~ Overall rating: 90.5 Points. Number of words read: 50,000+; 25 chapters. 1. Basic perception First person, sweet but not greasy, excellent work. This book is about a woman who inexplicably traveled to a different era when she walked into the elevator (she was supposed to study painting) and became the dragon of a country. However, the heroine did not live in a privileged life, but entered society for experience under the arrangement of the emperor's brother. This leads to the continuation of the struggle for power between the Feng and Su families, from the carefree life of a noble to the common people's home. The contrast is not dramatic, but it is also true and believable. The romance with the male protagonist has a faint sweetness, and the Feng family's battle of wits and courage with the chickens and dogs ascending to heaven is gentle and chivalrous. Choosing the aristocratic student union and studying in the same house as a poor family, there are gains and losses. It is quite rare to have one's own thinking about society and the future. 2. Highlights of this book 1. The writing is excellent, the plot is smooth and flowing, and it is completed in one go; 2. The descriptions of several mythical beasts and monster kings are particularly brilliant, such as the ghostly nine-tailed fox demon Hua Qi, and the dragon vein guardian Gu Qilin Shengyou, each one is more exciting than the other! 3. Several companions are also very distinctive: Xibei Mingyue, who was born as a businessman, is lively and down-to-earth; Wu Mingxia, who was born as a warrior, is bold and righteous; Tongwenshe's stuttering brother, Pan Feiyu, nicknamed Fat Fish, and several villains are also well-portrayed; 4. Dialogue is another highlight of this book, and in general: not awkward , not wordy, with an online IQ and a high degree of restoration; 5. Delicacy may be what the female author is best at, and this book also reflects it very prominently. Even a fallen leaf can set off the mood, and the prose skills are evident; 6. The male protagonist is cold and not pretentious, praise it; he is forbearing but warm, praise him; he is chivalrous and responsible, praise him; he is innocent and not naive, praise again! 7. Dare to insist on the first person without writing collapse, which is very difficult in itself, keep up the good work; 8. Strong sense of picture, detailed description, slow and steady, steady writing; 9. The sense of innovation is always there, the plot seems to be It looks familiar, but it doesn't feel cliche, let alone old-fashioned, and it won't make people deliberately think about the ending, because the process is already exciting; 10. Female authors tend to be weak, weak, and feminine when writing male characters. This work has basically overcome it. 3. A few minor flaws 1. There are several typos in the first ten chapters, such as "promise", "again", "waves and clouds" and "revelation". Such a good writing style, so many typos are very confusing, maybe it is a shortcoming of online writing; 2. The current opening plot is still a bit bland, just Just like the main melody of the song, it is a foreshadowing. Whether the chorus can reach the climax as expected is very worth looking forward to, but it is also worrying; 3. Punctuation marks also need to be paid a little attention to, such as ":" at the beginning of the dialogue, and "," after the narration in the middle of the dialogue. They are not used particularly reasonably, or are simply omitted. 4. Some Suggestions 1. Continue the style of the previous article and write each plot realistically and completely. I am afraid it will take some effort to select the materials for the plot. The previous article does not fall into the cliché, and the following article must not fall into the cliché; 2. Don't be updated. Because of this, this work should be directed towards copyright development, so it is not suitable to use large quantities to control the situation; 3. After the love story slowly unfolds, if the struggle for imperial power can be well written, it will be successful. It is recommended to write according to the script concept , there must be a particularly outstanding section that catches the eye; 4. We must always be vigilant about going too far and being black and white, and do not fall into the trap. Whether it is chivalrous, domineering, or violent, we must be able to freely control it, and it is best to think in other people's shoes; 5. The current rhythm is particularly good, and it is recommended to maintain it even when the climax is coming; 6. By the way, let me add one more thing, because there are many characters with the same surname in the book, and the characters must have distinctive characteristics in depicting their physical characteristics and behavior, otherwise it will be easy to get confused. 5. Overall evaluation Score: [90.5] (For details, please refer to the second edition of the "Roadside Stall Review Circle" scoring rules) Suitable for: Lao Bai, physical publishing, TV series adaptations I personally think it is a very interesting work, I especially like the dialogue sections, it looks like it has a lot of life experience, mixed with some small humor, very high-end. If you polish it carefully, you will definitely make a good work! (The level of passers-by is limited, the comments are purely amateur, based on personal preferences, for reference only)

Sorry, I only read the first chapter before commenting. The first chapter is very comfortable. It is written in a narrative way and has a sense of story. I think it is a bit difficult to read in the first person. The author is very good. I would like to share some opinions. 1. The ellipsis can be directly used as the ellipsis "...". Using a period is a bit awkward, just like when we chat. 2. Divide the text into paragraphs. If you feel that you have finished speaking in one sentence, put a period or simply divide it into paragraphs. A paragraph can have up to two periods to enhance readability. This is purely a personal suggestion. If it is incorrect, please share it with us. Beautiful writing, it's a pleasure to read, hey, cheers for the author. 😁

I didn't expect that there was such a wake-up mode... A wave of rewards came at 7 o'clock in the morning, which woke me up successfully. I saw Te Cong, a classmate who bravely jumped to the top of the fan list... 🤔 Do I want to add more? ? ? ?

2019.1.13——2019.1.20 This book will have a special week in the work exhibition circle in Diandian Circle. Friends who want to understand the plot, understand the characters, and discuss the story can leave a message and discuss the plot, mood, and life.

"Two" Lingzhuo: Wandered into time and space and became a dragon. When he was young, he was accompanied by Emperor Yixian and was doted on by him. The demon king was his friend and Shengyou was his bodyguard. As he grew older, he hid his identity and studied in the academy. He was often trapped by treacherous people. He repeatedly turned danger into safety, punished treacherous people, and fell inexplicably in love with a certain boy. (He and Yi Quehuang are like stars to the bright moon, crazy hints, and if we don't change the words of fans like us, I will write a few thousand words). The second prince colluded with the demon clan to counter the rebellion, and introduced advanced concept technology and the academy. This move is unique and praiseworthy. The road to gradual growth can be briefly summarized. : The first step is to seize the cradle of talent training and transform it into a modern university. Become a teacher to students all over the world. The second step is to establish a foothold in business, then make money, and control the lifeline of the country's economy. The third step is to have a sweet and sadistic love affair with the best people from the two clans. The fourth step is to go on a trip to the rivers and lakes, stir up a storm, and get a rogue. The fifth step is to run towards freedom. Warning again to the heaven, human world, demon world, and fantasy (crazy hint: extra drama) Huang Yixian: How can the emperor of a country in the human world only be human? So-and-so boy: I don't want to mention this guy. The heroine prefers this guy. So-and-so boy, why do you need to steal your daughter-in-law? Isn't it good to live? Hua Qi: Nine-tailed monster, I don't like what the Dao beast does! Shengyou: This bodyguard is pretty good, give me a dozen! About Shengyou This is a unicorn with a stubborn temper and cold-blooded tongue. I guessed that Miss Meow Meow also gave him a peerless beauty. But he is not bad at heart, he is just more accepting of death. Of course, some people will question why cold-blooded people are not bad. Being cold-blooded means that he has a cold attitude toward things and people. But that doesn't mean he has harmful intentions. Although in this 120-chapter, he did join forces with the queen to pull Azhuo back from Su Ge. It was also true that Azhuo used blood to keep the prince alive. But he followed what he believed was destiny. Tianming Azhuo would not be with Suge. So, mess with it! It's up to him! Miss Meow Meow hasn't written enough about dog abuse! Jifang: Since ancient times, the second male lead has had many twists and turns……………… Feng Yunhe: The male supporting role is slightly, slightly, slightly, slightly, slightly, slightly, slightly, slightly Yi Quehuang: Gentle and elegant, a humble gentleman! Although there are thousands of words, there is no pen and ink to describe it all! If I were a girl, the young master would be my sweetheart. There is a gentleman who I will never forget when I see him. If I don't see him for a day, I will miss him like crazy! (Crazy hint; extra drama, this must be extra drama)

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Book Review of "Involved in the World" (1) Story introduction: The heroine Ling Zhuo travels through a different world and becomes the dragon vein of the dynasty (chao) country. The heroine's body changes from a girl to a little girl. There are three male protagonists and two supporting male characters in Loli's Growing Up. The first male protagonist: Huang Yixian, the emperor of the dynasty and the heroine's childhood sweetheart. Because the heroine is very similar to Huang Yixian's missing sister, the emperor is particularly partial to her. It was so partial that because of the heroine's identity as a dragon, the emperor was reluctant to let her go, but he still respected her opinions and allowed her to be independent and free.                                               But when the emperor Huang Yixian found out that the heroine fell in love with the second male protagonist Su Ge, the emperor felt very painful in his heart. He was unwilling to use his royal power to separate the two. The painstaking and extremely smart emperor came up with a way: to make the heroine Ling Zhuo the second emperor (even the future queen Feng Lingshuang had to give a half-satisfaction when she saw her). This also indicates that from now on, the heroine Ling Zhuo will become an insurmountable wall between the emperor and the queen. If this is an era of simple monarchy, then the fate of the heroine seems to be doomed from now on. There is no way to escape from the emperor's grasp.        ，，，， Then, everything is possible, It may be that, before the involvement of Yi Quehuang, the son of the Emperor of Heaven, and Han Li, a mortal cultivator, Emperor Huang Yixian was the well-deserved male protagonist, the second male protagonist Sujia Hope Suge, and the third male protagonist Feng Yunhe, the genius of the Feng family, were no match for him. (PS: Fortunately, the first part of the series "The Dynasty of the World" focuses on the dynasty, and our Huang Yixian is still a proper male protagonist - friends who like him don't worry.)

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It doesn't feel like watching a TV series, it feels a bit like a comic, but I feel more like playing a breeding game. . . . .

Sister Cat, I suddenly don't want to write a book review. I want to write it in a different way. I recently discovered a very interesting thing, which is storytelling 😃. I am crazy about it. I want to change the book review I originally planned to write into a short story... 😚

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The Dynasty of the World has outstanding literary talent, gorgeous rhetoric, simple language, fresh writing, rich emotions, full characters, clear organization, well-structured structure, reasonable plot, ups and downs, vivid and fascinating descriptions, and strong artistic appeal. I love Yi Que Huang deeply and praise Yi Que Huang.

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If life is just like the first time we met, why should the autumn wind draw a fan sadly? A masterpiece among fantasy novels, support me and give the author a big boost＾0＾~

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When I first read it, I have to say that this novel is very special and refreshing to me😃, because she writes it in the first person. This is the first time I have encountered this type of novel. To be precise, it should be the first time I have read it, so I feel that this type of novel is quite unique😋😋😋. Generally speaking, the novel gives me a good feeling🤔, and because this novel is written in the first person, I feel that it seems to have a good sense of immersion😁. It may seem a bit dull in the early stage, but the novel and the plot develop very smoothly, which is very attractive to me. The author writes well and the writing style is also very good. The sentences are very smooth and flowing, and every place can be switched easily. I didn't feel any discomfort while reading it, and I didn't seem to find any typos. I have a good impression of it in this regard 😉, hehe. The author of this novel boldly uses the first person, and his personal feeling avoids the harsh scenes that exist in many other novels. The author's inner description of the protagonist Ling Zhuo is also very detailed, and each character has his or her own characteristics. This novel can be regarded as a time-travel novel. In fact, the protagonist Liang Zhuo was originally modern, so some passages in the novel may have a bit of modern vocabulary, but it feels more intimate, familiar, and not embarrassing. After all, it is the inner monologue of the protagonist😌. It's been a long time since I've read a novel. I've fallen into this pit these past few days and it feels pretty good. I think I'll continue to follow it. Big boost for the author😘. I'm a novice and I don't read many novels, so I personally feel that this book suits my taste. If anyone sees it and thinks it's inappropriate, please give me some advice and don't criticize me. I want education and don't accept criticism. My heart is very fragile🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

I'm here to take a look, it's okay... I added a bookshelf, see you later!

I just realized that all your characters have images, I envy them

The glow in the sky gradually faded, the deep red color turned to crimson, and the crimson turned to light red. Finally, when all the red light disappeared, the sky that suddenly seemed high and far away took on a solemn look. A bright moon hangs upside down in the river, like a silver plate, and its silvery white light falls quietly on the river surface like flowing water. Sometimes there is a gentle breeze blowing across the river, causing ripples. The clear waves and the silver light drift away slowly, and then slowly gather together. The silver plate is erratic, like a water lily that is shy in the cool breeze. Even if you are in front of your eyes, you can only appreciate the Yingying Water, but you cannot play with it. A woman in white sat quietly by the river, with the moonlight spreading on her body. She held a sword tightly in her hand, looking up at the bright moon in a daze, and she didn't know how long she had been sitting there. "Sister?" A woman in red came from nowhere and stepped forward and walked behind the woman in white and called her softly, but there was no response. The woman in red looked at her "indifferently", her eyes rolled, and she didn't know what she was thinking. She stood up on tiptoes and walked up gently, getting very close to the woman in red, and then stretched out her hands - but the woman in white suddenly stood up. "You can always find it anywhere." The tone makes people feel a little helpless. The woman in red was so shocked that she hurriedly took several steps back, and then said softly: "There have been a lot of changes in the dynasty recently. Don't care about it? After all, you grew up there too. How can you let go of your old place for many years?" The woman in red said with a bit of playfulness in her tone, looking at the woman in white. The woman in white turned to look at the woman in red and said: "You are so concerned about the changes in the dynasty, why don't you go and solve it for me? How about saving all the people in the world?" After saying that, she turned around and looked at the bright moon. "I don't want it, it's not mine." The woman pouted, murmured, and clasped her fingers behind her hands. The corners of the lips of the woman in white rose slightly, she opened her red lips lightly, turned around, pretended to be thoughtful to the woman in red, thought for a moment, and then deliberately said: "Oh, what kind of thing is this? You have been paying attention to every bit of the dynasty every day, but now that the dynasty is in chaos, you don't help, and Why bother, what's the purpose of this? " The woman in red felt a little guilty when she heard it, and responded in a low voice: "Then... What's the intention, I'm just loving the house. If the dynasty is not my sister's, I won't bother to care about him. I'm not idle with nothing to do." After saying that, she turned her head. The woman in white looked at her evasive eyes and asked meaningfully: "Oh, Aiwujiwu, I see, it makes sense. Hey, I'm afraid it was Duke Zhuang who danced his sword and unexpectedly Pei Gong, Aiwujiwu. It's true, it's just my sister, not this house, this house -" The woman in white paused deliberately and continued without saying anything. Looking at the reaction of the woman in red, she saw a little blush gradually smearing on her face, which could not be covered up by the bright moonlight. Look at her reaction, and then continue: "This room - you guessed it right, it should be the fox, right?" "Sister, you - you are so bad." "I know whether I am bad or not." After saying this, the woman in white smiled evilly. "I wanted to look for him but I didn't dare to go, and I made excuses. When I gave you the chance, you didn't take it." After saying that, he took the sword and crossed his hands with his chest. "It's done, it's done if I don't talk about the dynasty." After saying that, he stamped his feet shyly. "It's done, I won't tease you anymore, Dynasty, let's do it. He has his own destiny. Stop thinking about it. If you miss that fox, just go secretly. I won't say anything." "Sister, oops, I even said I won't talk about him, so I won't care about you." The woman in red said coquettishly and ran away in small steps. Watching the figure of the woman in red disappearing into the night bit by bit, the woman in white turned her gaze back to the other side of the river, listening to the sound of the surging river and looking at the night reflected by the bright moonlight, which seemed to be endless in the distance. The woman in white looked at the river and said to herself: "Since I left when the dynasty was at its most chaotic, I have no plans to go back and take care of this chaos now. Moreover, the girl from another world is destined to be extraordinary. Since she is here, she will naturally have something that belongs to them. A legend, they both walked hand in hand, and the arrival of this woman is not accidental..." After talking to herself, the woman in white sat down by the river again, and continued to look at the bright moon hanging in the sky. Everything seemed so mysterious, yet untouchable and unbreakable. (ps: Hehehe, does it feel familiar? Many people should know the identity of this so-called secret woman in white. Ahem, Pi is very happy now!)