One Piece: Secrets of Thieves Island

This book review is amazing. There are three reviews, one from 150 days ago, one from 60 days ago, and one from me. . . Shivering

Improve your writing skills and ideas, write out the character's personality, share more skills with you, come to the group [⒍з⒍ハ1ззハ⒍]

Lao Tie, you are also 666. You wrote 33 chapters in half a year.

Well, since you want to learn from the comments, let me tell you. After reading the first three chapters so far, it can be said that I am deeply poisoned. First of all, online novels pay attention to the three golden chapters, which you can find by searching online. Secondly, please don't recall or ramble on in the first three chapters. If you just keep recalling the first three episodes of Naruto, it wouldn't be called a migrant manga. The novel is mainly about the plot. The first three chapters must pay attention to the plot. I can be a little bit more detailed about identity. I will talk about it in detail later. Also, the opening of the golden finger is too weird. In the world of pirates, if you think about the ability of Flying Thunder God, you'd better create a fruit that matches it and make it a fanfic. Since you're writing a fanfic, it's best not to deviate too much from the setting of this world view. You may say that there are many popular books about ninjutsu nowadays... Well, I usually won't read them anyway. In short, there are too many problems.