Douluo Peerless Era

Come on! If Douluo fan can finish writing it, it will be a great success!

Let me tell you this, normal Douluo fans with 500,000 words of recommendation votes have over 10,000 votes. For most of them, you don't have as many as others with 6,000 words. Magical reform? Haha, this is just rubbish written by you to take advantage of Douluo's popularity.

Is this an insult to my intelligence?

To be honest, I really don't know what it's about.

Come on, author! I know this is your first book, so go for it 💪

I really don't know what the author is writing. He writes something now and then another. I can't understand or understand it at all.

After reading a few chapters, I have a few questions for the author. Is the author a middle school student? First time writing a novel? Also, who is the protagonist of this book?

La la la, here I come

To be honest, I can't understand what's written.

I really can't understand it at all. Forget it, let's cheer.

The first chapter persuades me to quit, I'm sorry to the author.

Improve your writing skills and writing ideas, write out the character's personality, and share more techniques with you, come to the group [⒍з⒍ハ1ззハ⒍]

Improve your writing skills and writing ideas, write out the character's personality, and share more techniques with you, come to the group [⒍з⒍ハ1ззハ⒍]

I can see that you tried your best, so don't serialize it now. Change your writing style and replace your thinking with American logic. Everything is related. The plots resonate with each other. At the same time, come on, I pay attention to quality. So your writing style... Change it

It's so confusing, I don't really understand it, but come on

I think this is the author's self-pleasure and a waste of time

Um, I just want to know about the eating scene at the end? Is there a video of you eating it?