The Age of Immortals

I really like it, I hope the story behind it will be more exciting

I really like it, I hope the story behind it will be more exciting

This is my first time writing an article, and I know that I must have many shortcomings. There will be some logical inaccuracies, some sentences that are not refined enough, and there will definitely be deficiencies in the characterization, and I don't know how to grasp the reader's mind... When I had 30,000 words before, I automatically applied for a signature, but unfortunately it didn't pass. Of course, now I'm lucky enough to have been notified of the contract and signed the contract. But even so, I also know that I still have many shortcomings, and I also want to know where I am lacking and where I can improve. If you can see this advertisement, I hope you can help me, read my book, and tell me where I am lacking. I will treat you with sincerity. Book Title: The Trial of Infinite Death Thank you!

I feel like this idea is great. I really liked it from the beginning. 3 Votes have been sent. Mark it and wait for the meat. In addition, the author, the newbie Qingtian here, is serializing "Journey to the West Hundred Demons" and asks for mutual support [Star Eyes]

🌹Come on! Finally on the shelves 👍

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This is a good book, keep it up.