Trail to the Mountains

Every time you are passive and solve trouble when it comes. Don't you know how to take the initiative? Many things will not happen if you take the initiative. If you insist on talking, can you do something more straightforward? I always pretend to be cool, and I feel a little aggrieved...

Aren't Taoist priests called lay people? Chapter 1 Why did you call me the donor?

Why do you think both the main character and the second character, who is a woman, can take advantage of him?

I feel like the author is not good at writing, and the three golden chapters have no flavor at all...

First of all, the concept of this story is okay, I feel good about it, but the plot is too cliche and the characters are too arrogant. Author, you should think about it carefully. You are writing about the reincarnation of an immortal, not a diaosi, let alone a diaosi immersed in fantasy. What woman has never seen an immortal? Don't tell me that from him all the way to Immortal Lord, he hasn't killed a single woman? Also, let me talk about some immature personal opinions. I don't know what other people think. I will never read a novel where the male protagonist kneels down and licks a girl like a dog. These days, there are fewer and fewer novels that kill decisively. They often look like stallions, or they are more than kneeling and licking. They are worse than pigs and dogs. I really don't understand. There are some people who live and die for women. They can't move when they see women. Is it so miserable in reality that they can't even find a girl? Please kind-hearted people recommend some good-looking novels that do not breed horses, but are decisive in killing. Thank you, thank you.

I think it would be nice to add a few more heroines, not only without a harem

As long as there are updates, it will be fine. After all, health is the most important thing. Especially since the author is so young, he should pay more attention to it.

It's this kind of thing where you go around pretending to be a Taoist priest to pick up girls. It's okay, it's very cliché.

I can't stand it anymore after watching it halfway. As a former immortal cultivator who has been reborn from calamity, he is not decisive at all in this state of mind. He makes some ants jump in front of him and sometimes makes him angry. If you write about this kind of subject next time, please read more works of some great gods.

I would like to ask the author, does this book always have a single female protagonist? Just chase the single heroine, forget about the harem and stud!

It's good, but there aren't many readers. When I look at the title of the book, it's really not domineering enough. The protagonist is still very domineering. I hope the author can change his brand name and it will definitely become popular. Also, the update should be able to retain people in the early stages. Sometimes it will explode. In fact, as long as you prepare more in the early stage, it will be no problem.

As the title says, the author has created a book club by himself. There are not many people in it now. Brothers and sisters who are reading books should go in and have close contact with the author, make some comments, chat, etc. Welcome to criticize.

You can indeed be proud of yourself, but if you want to take this path, I suggest you don't finish it. Even if the update is unstable, when you finish it, you will find that you have made progress. So, keep at it, this is how great gods come. You are very young, and you are beyond the level of many, many people. So, do your best now and don't give up easily. Maybe one day, you will discover the true meaning of bitterness first and then sweetness. In addition, I suggest you not to write vocabulary such as classical Chinese. Straightforward writing is better, because it will be more enjoyable for readers and you will have to write more words 🙂. Think about it carefully.