Ace Legend

For those who want to comment! First of all, the author is a glass-hearted person. If you feel that you can't stand it after reading two or three chapters, you can just abandon the book without saying anything. But if you are really mean and can't help but comment a few sentences, please be rational. I only accept well-intentioned suggestions and will not accept malicious smearing of the book. I will definitely delete it as soon as I find it. If you really want to comment, please read ten chapters carefully before speaking. Even if it is malicious, I will accept it and silently improve it for you! For those who click here and are interested in this book, you can read my refined comments. Although they have not seen the latest chapter, I think it is quite pertinent. Whether it looks good or not, you still have to test the poison yourself.

If you want to attract a large number of readers, you should change it.

The title of the book told me that I would change the name, but the name and image of Zhang Yishan always lingered in my mind. It is really poisonous. I will save it first and come back to read it someday when I forget that the main character is called Zhang Yishan.

How come the protagonist was swallowed by a lord-level monster and turned into a monster inexplicably? How could a human become a twenty-meter-tall monster? Although it's fun to watch, it's a bit confusing. .

Saiyans have the form of children until they reach adulthood to confuse their enemies.

In the current chapter, the author's image of the male protagonist is distinctive and vivid. In the novel, the author describes the male protagonist both from the front and the side.

I've been busy lately and I'm reading the novel you wrote. It's good. Come on, come on, come on.

If possible, please change the first three chapters, or make them relevant to the work.

It looks wonderful, but the author should not abuse the heroine too much. We true fans will be very sad and feel sorry for the heroine.

It won't work if it's written before five chapters I can't understand it, it's too verbose You can understand it later Because this is a Saiyan time travel novel It wasn't mentioned before where the Saiyans came from. The golden finger came out after Chapter 5, but this golden finger has too few functions. Most people probably can't understand the experiment in the first five chapters. The person we met before time travel was Zhang Yishan, so will he remember his previous memories later? Wait, you have to fill these holes.