Be a Taoist Priest in the Future

Recommend some eunuch articles? The starting point is getting more and more rubbish.

1. Creativity is OK. 2. Writing is not. The writing is not good: the text is not concise enough, and the paragraphs are divided into too few paragraphs (so each paragraph is crowded together and difficult to see, so you should make good use of paragraphs and spaces! This can also make up the number of words. Some people divide it into paragraphs with tens of hundreds of words, but you can divide them into paragraphs with hundreds of thousands of words and squeeze them together) There are also some logical problems, such as the description of Goldfinger is unclear, its mechanism and limitations are vague, and its sense of existence is very low. For example, a little snake that is less than three days old when it goes out to the city to test its martial arts. Isn't it too humane and intelligent? It's only less than three days old! Not three years! . . . Another example is describing meeting, fighting, and leaving the city with Tang Bing. . These time descriptions are very vague (there is no use for clear descriptions such as the first day and the second day, which causes confusion and ambiguity in time) Wait. .