Traveling Through the Electromagnetic Gun

I've only read a few chapters, but there are bugs in this way of time travel! ! ! ! ! Let's not talk about the protagonist's sudden appearance and identity issues. The most important point is that after the protagonist talked to himself, he took his mobile phone to check which anime it was! ! ! ! Academy City's strapon man is full of detection hysteresis lines, is this exposed, okay? I wonder if the author will explain it in future chapters? Or is it that the author simply doesn't know that such a thing exists...

So uncomfortable! Is the author doubting the reader's intelligence? Let me talk about a few points: I know that I have traveled through time, and I have also seen where I have traveled through time on the Internet, but can I not fully understand what I can search on my mobile phone? If you don't look at the existing information, you have to explore it yourself? If you don't want to learn existing mathematical formulas, do you want to create your own formulas? If you don't read the information you search online, can't you first understand the world and take action? If you tell your story casually, do you know whether the listener is a good person or a bad person? The protagonist's power is rubbish. When it is useless, it is no:1, and when it is needed, it is a noob. That's all, I don't want to talk about anything else.

|･ω･｀)Wow, I can tell there are a lot of bugs just by reading the comments. . . Do you want to read novels or not? . .

Well~ The first books are all the same, and mistakes are inevitable. Every author is the same. I hope the author will not be discouraged. Although it's a pity that I haven't finished it, I hope that the author can make a comeback in the East after the next book or this one is remade! Come on! ! ! In addition, the flowers are finished~~🌹🌹🌹

Oh, I have finished the book. I like the abilities of the protagonist, but the writing is too messy. I gave up after reading it halfway through. Remember to write an outline in the future and determine the personality of the main character (classics, masterpieces, and good online articles all have clear personalities). After all, novels focus on shaping the characters. In fact, the novels I wrote privately are a little better than this. They are also fics. I wrote the novels at first, and then the novels were about me. After I finished writing (about 20 to 300,000 words), I didn't dare to upload it. I read thousands of novels and felt that I was at the bottom. I admire the courage of newcomers. I don't dare to publish until I reach the level of a minor god. After all, fan fiction has a main storyline, which makes it easier to write, saving a lot of the writer's brainpower. It's been a while since I've written a long review, so that's it.

After reading a few book reviews, I felt a bit reluctant to read it. However, as this is the first book I opened today, I'll save it and read a few pictures first. It might be to my taste after all.

The current Lu Zhe is probably not the real protagonist, but may be the fragment (consciousness). But author, please don't create a time traveler for me (that Li Yong is very suspicious)

... Well, how should I put it, Saten knew that superpowers existed, and was he still surprised that the male protagonist could jump 5 meters high? And the protagonist's IQ always seems to be negative.

Http://u. Qidian. Com/z8DufroP Misaka No. 19090 Was experimented in advance, and was killed by Accelerator without any suspense. Death, this is Misaka's destined fate—— Misaka has a self, repeats her own destiny in different forms of existence, and in other forms in countless dimensions, but she has the desire to change her own destiny. Can Misaka girl's wish come true? Why would she have such an opportunity? Stay tuned——

Emm The subject matter is novel and the writing is not good, but if you persist, you will definitely get results￣￣)σ, I hope you won't give upòᆺó

If the author is still willing to continue writing, then he does not need to care about other people's comments other than suggestions. It is enough to write what he wants to write.

It doesn't look cool, and it's a bit poisonous in some places. Maybe I'm blind, I really didn't find anything interesting.

It's been 3 months. Does the author have any plans for a new book? I'm a little excited. I hope the next book will be better (｡>∀<｡)

Group wear will generally collapse. . .

I watched it for a long time and couldn't understand. I went to Tokiwadai. Isn't it a girls' school? Is the protagonist male or female, or just Najib?

Just blame Saten Ruiko for being the heroine, give her a reward 🙂

After reading online novels for so many years, Zhao Qian, Sun Li have all read them, but Lu has never seen one... This is the first one!

There are several meanings in using shit brocade as a cover. .

The biggest problem with this book is not the plot. To be honest, after reading all the bugs in the first few chapters, the protagonist suddenly travels to another world and his mobile phone can actually connect to the Internet. . Someone will also send you a text message to remind you that your phone bill is insufficient (has the mobile company traveled through time with you?

How long have I been raising this...

The writing is childish and full of bugs. The reason why I can continue to write like this is probably because of my love for the original work.

Come on! (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡

Somewhat poisonous. . . . . Lots of bugs

(ฅ´ω`ฅ)Read

It's just because you didn't publish 600,000 words on the shelves. I'll save it, like it and reward it!

I am not from this world. What do you think, demons?

Where can I download this book on my computer? 😭

Dear author, see you in the next book

It really feels like it's not enough to be reasonable.

Come on! Come on, author↖(^ω^)↗!