My System Is the Most Amazing

I didn't understand it at all! ! I can only say that my cultivation is not enough, so I say goodbye! ! !

After experiencing both worlds, the current problems in the real world have not been solved yet, so just kill Zhang xx. According to this rhythm, when will it lead to the back? The important thing is that the worlds chosen are too similar. The first world has English, fighting and shooting, then the second world is still the same, and the third world is still the same. In this way, if the protagonist cannot complement other aspects of himself, but only deepens it, then the book will not be very interesting. For example, the Assassin's League in the third world often becomes the opening world in such world-travel novels where the protagonists come into contact with gun skills and fighting. Why? It is because this world has become a representative movie of extremely high gun skills, bullets can turn, and there is a kind of recovery liquid in this movie, which is very helpful for the protagonist to master the fighting ability at an extremely fast speed, so many novels of this type like to use this world. Those experienced authors know the rhythm very well, and there are almost routines for this. They often use a world to let the protagonist reach a level where he can resolve real disputes in the real world (for example, he has the ability to kill someone for revenge), and then use this to introduce contradictions (the relatives and friends of someone who was killed before come to take revenge), and then show that the protagonist is weak or weak or other reasons to lead to the next world, allowing the protagonist to find a solution in that world, and so on, constantly creating contradictions and foreshadowing, and then bringing out exciting points. There is also a common rhythm routine, in which the protagonist goes around calmly and only shows the tip of the iceberg in daily life. It is not until later that he has the power to change or threaten the country or even the world that conflicts arise. The protagonists in such novels are usually in no danger (that is, there are no injustices in the real world) and so on. They usually find a safe place to serve as a base and wait to travel through, which is the steady rhythm of farming style. And what about this book? During the transition period of the protagonist in the real world, various descriptions do not match his experience and abilities. The real world is so threatening (they are all wronged and almost die). After traveling back to save his life, there are all kinds of wanderings, no investigation, no plan, just drifting with the flow (if there is, maybe I didn't scan carefully. If there are any, please change it and encourage it), I can't see what is refreshing about it. I hope the author can change the rhythm a bit. He said that the above is just an old bookworm's advice to the author, and he is not looking for trouble. The author of Liulixin please delete this, and instead please add more content for me.

The more I watch it, the more I think the main character should die.

The protagonist's IQ is completely off the charts. He is capable and has movie experience, but the entire story is based on the IQ and EQ of a primary school student. It's too toxic. He doesn't know how to use the props he learned or is using them indiscriminately. I suggest the author read the previous ones and write down what abilities and props the protagonist has, so that the protagonist can learn to use his brain.

I copied the original version of Wolf Warriors verbatim, but changed the protagonist.

I wrote 500,000, but there was only two monthly tickets on the 24th. There is a reason.

Seriously, the comment section is better than the novel

High school student? Or a junior high school student?

Regardless of whether it looks good or not... I will never click on an introduction like this.

The protagonist will be banned by the GM of Infinite World for cheating like this. If it is serious, he will be taken into custody by the Blue and White Society.

Poison Piaopiao kills more than 300 million people a year

Jiutian Xuannv is no longer in charge, Jiutian Xuannv has come out

It is very poisonous. This is the most poisonous book I have read in the past few years. . .

The poisonous points are somewhat unacceptable.

All the protagonist's fights are just like in the movie! Totally unoriginal!

I still haven't understood what it's about. This chapter is missing. No wonder you've written five books and you're still at level one.

The rhythm is bad. It looked so good just now. Why are there so many chapters missing? ?

It's so rubbish, please don't read it, it's disgusting

The introduction to this book is too childish

What kind of fun should I write? I skipped directly from the first chapter to the fifth chapter.

It was so boring that I resisted for more than 30 chapters before I stopped reading it. It was amazing!

In the finale, the main character dies. . [Ashamed]

What the fuck is this shit written about?

I skipped the first movie and watched it. . . Probably because I don't know what movie it is

1. Wanted order 2. No. 1 In the world 3. Coiling Dragon, Star Transformation, etc.

It's so poisonous. Shen Nong has read thousands of books. I haven't seen such a poisonous novel in a long time.

Totally unwatchable! Too poisonous! Pig's feet are totally mindless! Knowing that the mayor framed him! Still wandering around! And call home! I can't use the abilities in the movie at all! So are the props! !

Seeing as how poisonous you say it is, I'll give it a try.