Cross-Border Businessman
跨界大商人
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 126k Words
- Genre
- Sci-Fi
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Time Travel
- Updated
- 9y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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0Monthly votes
211Recommends
4Fans
48Chapters
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The beginning of the first chapter is too abrupt, with no foreshadowing at all. You can't continue reading this kind of beginning unless you have a lot of fans first. I suggest you write an introduction.
Book Q group: 633.736.437. I really hope to get your suggestions
If you have any comments or suggestions, please feel free to tell me.
The writing is okay, but the plot is not.
Why doesn't the protagonist learn knowledge about other planes?
The logic of the plot is too confusing, the brain circuit is too fast, it is very tiring to watch, and it is difficult to feel immersed in it.
The logic of the plot is too confusing, the brain circuit is too fast, it is very tiring to watch, and it is difficult to feel immersed in it.
At the beginning, it felt abrupt... . Please give me a reason
Why is the protagonist able to travel through time? Why is it unknown? It drives him to death from obsessive-compulsive disorder. .
Why not play in China? How to pass the language barrier for Iraqi refugees?
This inexplicable decision to go to a place like Iraq to develop a mobile game company made me drunk.