Doomsday Talisman

Chapter 166: She was persuaded to quit by Liu Fei. As a female special forces soldier, she cried easily. How did she become a soldier? It can be said that retiring from the army is because of the strong family power, which is acceptable, but I can't accept Liu Fei's character. The author wants to change the setting so that people like Liu Fei have an intersection with Lu Fan. It doesn't have to be a military teammate, it can also be a classmate or a mission protection target, etc.

Old bookworm: I like to watch the ups and downs, not chasing after piles of troubles, chasing after waves of killings. The system is originally a cheat that develops slowly, but there is no time to develop. It is not as good as those with experience in killing monsters. The writing is good, but the plot is a bit messy. Generally, one enemy is provoked in thirty chapters, and in the development type, one enemy is only released in fifty chapters. In the early stage, even if you sell medicine, you can encounter someone who is killed on the battlefield, which is relatively fake. There are also a team of ten people and various gun fights for the protagonist, which do not correspond to the title of the book.

The protagonist is a special soldier? Just look at the first few chapters and you're just a loser...

Time travel and rebirth involve mysterious laws, which are beyond the scope of common sense. It is not a big problem to write them. The author is confused when writing, and the readers are confused when reading. But the collision and fusion of planets are too challenging for everyone's common sense. What should we do about rotation? Does gravity increase? Will the gravitational pull between the sun and the moon change? Do the air density and composition change? A series of factors related to basic human survival are all questions! I remember there was a book about how the earth exploded into several large pieces, and the people on it were still alive and entered the fantasy century. It was really laughable, and I immediately deleted the book. The children who write books now have really poor basic knowledge about the universe and nature. It doesn't matter if you write outside the universe where the earth is located. It's not within the scope of common sense anyway. If you can't understand it, there's no need to understand it. But when you write about the earth, a huge change in the natural environment of the universe, it easily collides with people's common sense and makes it uncomfortable to read. This is different from the mysterious side!

It's so sad. I'm in a good mood, but your book has succeeded. It's amazing.

Stupid money, selling a few bottles of hemostatic agent can lead to so many things, speechless

I saw the system said there is a limit per person per day. I'm not interested anymore

After reading the beginning, I want to ask the author, how can the Shangguan family survive until now? It's like the war between humans and monsters. There is a big family in the human race that traps the geniuses of the human race, and the surrounding families also know about it. So how can this family survive until now?

The writing was okay at first, but I feel like it was written by someone else after it was put on the shelves, and it turned out to be rubbish. Is it an assembly line writing process? ? ?

The author has never been in society, so how can he not give others face? No matter how much he looks down on others, he can still live up to his reputation. In reality, leaders, chairman of the board, etc. Will greet the small employees in the company cordially when they meet them. In reality, the rich people you know will sarcastically mock you when they recognize you? Who would offend people in this way? People in high positions are more likely to be close to strangers on the surface. You are lenient on the outside and strict on the inside. You worked hard to write about the main character being hit, but the way you wrote it was so bloody that only experienced students think there is nothing wrong with your writing.

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What I hate most about apocalyptic novels is that they start from the middle

"The Book of Talismans" is very similar to the author's book. The magic talismans suppress ghosts and monsters. You can read it if you have nothing to do

I was confused. What was the author writing about?

Newcomer? ? ? I've read more than ten chapters of Selling Hemostatic Drugs! Dividends will start later, an apocalyptic plot? The Rune Master plot was eaten by a dog? How many people were deceived by the title's introduction and gave up after reading more than a dozen chapters?

I can't even watch it without thinking! The whole thing is just out of the tiger's mouth and into the wolf's den! I can't tell at all that the protagonist has been a special forces soldier and is he a soldier king? Still be the squad leader! No wonder we let people take credit for their guns and let people hunt them down!

As a soldier, after being crippled, is it really okay to surrender when you see the enemy? What about the bloody nature that was promised? What a coward.

I walked away, watched the beginning and the end and felt it wasn't suitable for me 😅. However, the author must continue to work hard. Novices will definitely have poor results at the beginning.

You are a doomsday rune master, not a doomsday alchemist.

Why do I feel that the story is a bit inconsistent? Do I just write whatever comes to mind, one chapter here and one chapter here?

The more I read, the more I feel like it's not working. I feel like I just write it as soon as I think of it. The plot connection is too rigid.

I saw that the author has released a new book. Are you giving up on this book? To be honest, the data I saw is really not good.

Maybe it's because I just read a better book and picked up this book right away. I couldn't stand it after only reading a dozen or so pictures. The writing was terrible and the plot was terrible. It's like I just drank a bowl of fragrant local chicken soup, but the next bowl turned out to be sour. Abandon the pit. This is my first time complaining about a book that is not worth reading.