South Australia Ranch

The strength of this book lies in the application of golden fingers. It is not cliche, not overly dependent, and not utilitarian~ The shortcoming is the character dialogue, not to mention the domestic dialogue style of foreign characters that is common in online books~ To be honest, the problems in this book are not trivial. To put it bluntly, it is a bit childish. This is worse than the character style~ So my personal advice is to use your strengths and avoid your weaknesses~ Use long descriptions to describe the local customs and customs of Australia, as well as the operation of the ranch, animals, breeding and other plots~ Deliberately ignore some unnecessary character interactions. Even if there is, there will be less direct face-to-face dialogue. It is best to conduct it through a third party~ Just like the plot of buying Z cow for the first time~ I didn't find that dream show spoof interesting at all, but it was embarrassing to death~ On the contrary, the auctioneer plot is quite good~ Above, some personal suggestions. I don't know if the author is a newbie, but the writing style is a bit harsh~

Australia is a weird country! There are almost no large beasts... Not to mention large beasts, there are not many carnivorous animals on land... It seems that the more dangerous creatures are reptiles and aquatic creatures... Dogs can dominate in the wild...

Why are there so few readers for such a good article about farming?

Comments all say that the latter part is well written, but I don't know if I haven't seen it, but the effect of the first few pictures is really strong in dissuading people. I hope the author will take the time to change the beginning. What a farming novel wants is that kind of plainness and warmth. Your pretentious and slap-in-the-face routine at the beginning is too blunt, and the most important thing is that it really doesn't fit with the farming novel.

Why are farmers' wages several times that of others?

I just can't figure it out, how can you behave like a dog without a golden finger? A twenty-six-seven-year-old person with only three hundred in his card, why don't you die?

Sex scene, what the hell is chest heat?

The male protagonist has an aura that is loved by everyone. Except for the farm with which he has a competitive relationship, everyone else is quite friendly to him.

The author describes every Australian as a good person, with good temper and hospitality. But in reality, Australia is a country that is very anti-Chinese, just like Malay dogs.

Don't write anymore? ? ? At least let me know!

I am back with my foreign ocean farming article. I hope friends who like this genre can support it! I'll wait for you at Diamond Fishing Ground!

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Hmm, so there are no book review replies. It seems like this book is not that good.

I don't know why I particularly hate the family of the protagonist in the farming novel.

Opening an import and export company in China to sell Australian beef to rich countries in the Middle East. Is there something wrong with the protagonist's head🕳? How much more tax will this cost?

The wages of ranch employees are too unreasonable! ! AUD 1,500 per person per week! ! After reading so many articles about ranching and farming, it seems reasonable to think that the cost is between US$450 and US$600 per week! ! You probably wrote it randomly here! !