Chronicles of the Immortal Shepherd

I hope you won't be disgusted and stop reading the book just because the title is similar to Zhai Zhu's and the main character's name is similar. In fact, I published a book two or three months earlier than him, and there are traces of these on the Internet. And except for the title of the book and the name of the protagonist, the rest is completely different. I don't even dare to think about porcelain, but last year, there were many accidents at home. I couldn't concentrate on writing for a long time, and my word count was less than that of a home pig. I hope you don't misunderstand~ Under the glory of the great God, I myself am also very entangled and uncomfortable. I don't plan to change the title of the book and the name of the protagonist, just to motivate myself. Under the divine light from the top of the sky, I don't want to be the same, but I want to be a torch to illuminate myself within a radius of about one foot.

The plot is so confusing. Don't know what I'm doing. Not even a clue. Integrate the plot.

In fact, I think it is very important to be wonderful. Readers can read what they want to understand from it. Instead of hydrology, seek a moment of dopamine. I hope this book has a bright future.

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LaterWhen will I meet my sister again

When I was young, I always thought the world was peaceful, but when I saw the cruelty of war, I realized that the world was not what we imagined. When I saw the section in the novel where disaster strikes and everything dries up, my heart fluctuated along with the plot. The author writes about parents' love so well and so truly, which is really good. In the article, Mudao's parents sacrificed without regrets for their children, even if they risked their lives to keep him alive, which brought tears to my eyes. I'm thinking, in reality, our parents are not the same. They worked diligently and diligently to raise us from babies waiting to be fed to adults. I don't know how much effort they spent and how many sleepless nights we endured before we have the healthy bodies we have today. This plot touched me a lot. Thanks to the author's realism, I saw a different and more exciting fantasy novel. I gained a lot of touching feelings here. Whether it is the family relationship between Dao Mu and his parents or the friendship between him and his brothers, they are all so real and touching. Let's work hard together. Although the author's current performance is not very good, I believe that gold will definitely shine. For such a good book, you must persevere. Only by persevering can you reap a better tomorrow; just like Tao Mu in the book, as long as he is not dead, he can live a more exciting life, walk a different path, let those past sorrows disappear, turn grief and anger into strength, and become Mu Immortal!

Dao Mu has obviously only lived for more than ten years, but after just reading a few chapters, I feel that he has gone through ups and downs that ordinary people will not experience. Moreover, he was so popular when he was born. How could a child who could only laugh when he was born become a person who is less and less able to laugh? I really don't want Dao Mu to experience the story in the middle. It would be great if he could continue to be so happy! From the moment Dao Mu was born, his parents were not happy because of their newborn child. Instead, they were always worried, fearing that the child would die before the full moon was over. This always made me wonder why I was always worried about this. Moreover, Dao Mu's father didn't look like a simple person. Dao Mu's eyes should be like his father's eyes, but Dao Mu's father is more capable, and all of Dao Mu's meridians have been absorbed by his eyes. Thinking about it, it is really a miracle that such a child can survive. How can a person survive if he has no meridians? Only after seeing it later can he understand why Dao Mu's parents were worried from the beginning that their child would not survive the full moon. There is a reason for this! In fact, I have never understood the death of Dao Mu's parents. Why did they insist on staying in their own home even though everyone told them to leave? Even though they had not eaten for a month and the breath of life was losing little by little, they still insisted on staying. In the end, they gave Dao Mu a drink of their own blood. They knew that Mu Cang rushed over. I actually don't understand the causal cycle before and after, and I have always felt that Dao Mu's father is special. He should have a special identity. He always whispers words that others cannot understand, just like praying before doing things. This made me suspect that Dao Mu's father should also be a god, or his mother is a fairy. For example, their union was not approved and they could only live their own lives secretly, or the couple knew that Dao Mu's birth was not blessed, and even said that the child was cursed. Even so, they had to use their own lives to protect the child from living. This is the only reason I can think of; Mu Cang's Whispering also allowed the couple to leave without any worries. I thought that the author would write down what Mu Cang said later that made the couple let go without any worries. As a result, I haven't seen it so far. I can only guess by myself. The most is that I will take good care of your children, so that they can rest assured! It has to be said that Mu Cang raised everyone very well. Mu Cang and Mu Qing also devoted themselves to Dao Mu. Dao Mu also raised the status of the Mu family to a higher level because of the special ability of his eyes. Of course, the Li family also got a lot of glory. This does not hinder anything. As long as Dao Mu lives a good life, this is the biggest expectation of his biological parents, and everything is clear. It seems to be going on smoothly, and the entire Mu family loves each other. It is such a happy family, but such a beautiful family was ruthlessly disrupted by the author. I really felt my heart lift when I saw this. Maybe after seeing too many good things, I have forgotten that there are hidden dangers in Dao Mu. Now it is finally becoming a reality, but it is unacceptable!

After Dahei's death, Dao Mu took over Dahei's work, but this also made Dao Mu become more indifferent and unhuman. Such Dao Mu had an evil spirit that made strangers not to approach him. It was completely opposite to his previous sunshine, which was really unacceptable. I really hope that happy and sunny Dao Mu will come back, but of course I know that this will never happen again! The encounter between Dao Mu and Zhinu was also quite ironic. I really didn't expect that Dao Mu peeped on his sister and fainted while taking a bath. Now the first encounter with Zhi Nu was also such a waste. The key is that he saw everything he shouldn't have seen. Dao Mu, who was not up to expectations, fainted again. This The strange physiological reaction is really dumbfounding. I really want to know what the author was thinking when he wrote it. How could he arrange such an indescribable weird behavior for Dao Mu or something else? Could it be involved in the subsequent story? Otherwise, it would be strange for this thing to happen again and again. There is always some meaning! But no matter what the process is, after all, they meet each other, and then there are clues for the story to be written. So I am looking forward to what kind of story will happen between Dao Mu and Weaver Girl. Will they become disgusted with each other and fall in love with each other, or will they fall in love and kill each other without fighting? Judging from the current situation, Zhinu's impression of Dao Mu is at best not simple for this boy. The person who can make Jue Dao follow must have something special about him. Also, because he speaks without paying attention, it gives me the feeling that Dao Mu is a weirdo in Zhi Nu's life. I have never met such a person. Therefore, Dao Mu is different in Zhi Nu's eyes from the beginning, and what happens next will be natural!

The plot has ups and downs, the writing is smooth and natural, and the biggest highlight is the turning point. Of course, if the foreshadowing at the beginning is not well written, the turning point later will not be good. It will be so exciting. The two are complementary to each other and are indispensable. Now it has become a wonderful novel and is displayed in front of everyone. It is really This is a masterpiece of conscience. I like it so much that I stare at my phone every day whenever I have nothing to do. I really need to give it a big thumbs up to express my inner feelings. Love it! Dao Mu, the protagonist in the novel, should be said to be happy as a child, but began a sad life as a teenager, which makes people feel distressed. The character of Mu is obviously the embodiment of pistachio, but unknowingly it has become a representative that will bring disasters, attacks from people, and the death of relatives. This pair of A little boy is really too cruel. If Dao Mu's biological parents passed away because he didn't understand anything, then the departure of his adoptive parents became his The sign of growing up is that the cost of growing up is too great. It is simply a torture to the mind. If you can survive it, you will have hope of success. If you cannot survive it, He immediately became a useless person or a dead person; and the appearance of Dahei later should be regarded as the dawn of life, although his evil aura is too strong to be seen as being able to lead There is no hope, but he did let Dao Mu live, but the time was short and he only accompanied him for three years. Now Dao Mu is once again facing the challenge of life. Farewell and death, in my seriousness, it seems that Dao Mu always has to passively accept these separations of life and death, and they are all close relatives in his heart. It's just that this time his emotions are more restrained. People who don't know him will not notice his sadness, even if Uncle Dahei said that he has lived for fifteen more years. , But I am still curious about why he died. He was obviously very healthy when he first appeared, and there was nothing wrong with him. In this place, you won't get old, sick and die after three years, right?

Which one came first, "Mu Xian Zhi"? Or should there be "The Shepherd God" first? Contact the author to see if he can change the title of the book. Many people will give it a pass because it is similar to the title of a book by someone who has already achieved results or is a master.