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I read ten chapters. The opening text is very particular and has a strong sense of martial arts. Although the protagonist is named, he does not appear quickly. The first one to appear was a certain master who was accidentally seriously injured and was about to die, leaving a suspense. The protagonist gets some opportunities before the master dies, and agrees to some entrustments, and then leads to the protagonist's mysterious master. After the death of the master, the protagonist begins to go down the mountain to complete the master's entrustment. At the inn, he encounters a gangster who is interested in the treasure, which leads to the next branch line. Then there was an accident in the following branch line, he was arrested, he got to know others, he resisted, and he met a large number of female disciples. Advantages: 1. The words and sentences are very classical, with a bit of polished charm. 2. The characters are also relatively distinct. It seems that the protagonist's personality was well developed in the past. 3. The plot is natural and nothing unexpected. Disadvantages: 1. The scene transition is not skillful enough, and some explanations are needed in between. 2. After the opening chapter, there is not enough introduction to the characters, background, and time. For example, what is the master who appears at the beginning doing, and who is the master of the protagonist? This makes the first few chapters like a preface and not connected. 3. Some words and sentences are not smooth and need to be revised.

Why isn't it updated? Author?

It's simply too good! The first two chapters were confusing and told about the reasons why. I thought the male protagonist was Yun Yihai. The writing suddenly changed. It turned out that Yun Yihai was written to let Dong Chenfeng appear. Young people are the real protagonists. Perhaps Little Biscuit wanted to write about a hero emerging from a young age, from an ignorant and indifferent mountain man, shouldering the heavy responsibility of his predecessors, to coming down the mountain and blending into the world, and experiencing the different warmth and coldness of human nature. In the end, he became a complete Jianghu person, but still had his original intention. The male protagonist and the girl first met in Weimo. Even though the girl had some thoughts of her own, as far as the male protagonist was concerned, the girl still saved him from danger, and she was also shocked by her radiant beauty. I don't really like such scheming women, but such people must exist now. She represents an indispensable type of person. Why do I rate it so highly? Because the scarf is not too cute! But being cute is terrible, you can be on the stage and on the battlefield, well, little biscuit, you can give me a little fox with a scarf...😌😌😌

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I like "Scarf" very much. It's so cute. I seem to see a little bit of Huanzhu Louzhu and Gu Long in this book. Come on＾0＾~

I wish your writing will fly quickly and your subscriptions will reach over 10,000.

It's a very nice book, and the author is very attentive. I look forward to more exciting chapters in the future.

The ashes are like snow, incompatible with the dust, so well written. Are you saying that this person's character is incompatible with the world?

It's a very nice book. It's written with great care. It's good. Please support it.

The author's writing style is very good and the plot is well grasped. The book is very interesting and I recommend it.

I can't sleep, come here and read it again

Come and sign in, and wish this book a great success

Happy Chinese Valentine's Day! Come on!

I just voted for two recommendations. I checked them but they didn't go up.

I was bored in my free time, and read a few books, but couldn't find what I liked. When I came across this book, I couldn't move my eyes away. I didn't even go to bed, but I also forgot to eat. The writing skills are evident. Without further words, I will continue reading.

The author's literary talent is so great, it's really a rare good literary talent!

Let me ask a question, is the protagonist the Virgin? Is the killing decisive?

Why is the update so slow? I can't wait to watch it again.

I think it's okay... I wanted to recommend it originally, but only nineteen chapters have been updated in two months. It's too young and is being fattened up. I know there must be some people saying that there are so few updates, but it is a well-thought-out article, not a brainless post. I admit this, the quality seems to be okay so far. Keep it up, we'll have to wait and see what happens in a few months for this update.

Why can't I reward you? . . . . .

After reading so many fantasy and fairy tales, I wanted to know how flying with a sword works. Seeing how the author writes so meticulously and penetratingly, I think you must know, please answer.

Hello, author, come and check it out!

Fairy Tales 😍

I really want to have chicken soup every day, but I am afraid that my old friend will be bored by the taste. If he loses his appetite because of this, Lao Yu will be guilty of a serious crime, so he should just keep going, haha!