Future Online Games: Six Realms Allure

As a male reader, I have mixed feelings after reading it. First of all, the author should be able to expand on the subsequent plot, but since the author doesn't want to expand it, forget it. Secondly, I feel itchy in my heart when I see a bunch of big men fussing over it. . Although the world view has been changed by a certain man in reality, it is quite exciting to read this kind of novel for the first time that does not care about men and women. This author is a bit of a tiger. You can look forward to other works because Jumping off the Cliff is quite heart-wrenching to read. But does the author have a story? He doesn't like women so much. Of course, I am just talking about it. Men are not bad either.

Author, are you here? Is it because your book has ruined your own writing?

As a reader, I actually really like this book, just because I like it, so here I will mention the loopholes in the book, hoping that they can be rounded up or revised. 1: Ice Blue Melancholy disappeared inexplicably (it first appeared in Chapter 152, I just mentioned that he was in the friends list, and officially appeared in Chapter 161). After that, it was not mentioned until the heroine robbed a boss in Huaxia City. By the way, after the heroine became the leader of the gang, she didn't give Ice Blue Melancholy any position. TT, but the heroine always treated him as nothing (I am Ice Blue Melancholy~ and just passed by), so it didn't matter what position he had. 2 Binghu knew that Xiao Jiujiu was the saint in Chapter 190 (in fact, the heroine said that Xiao Jiujiu was the real face of the saint, which is really funny ~ Binghu: I feel like I ate 10 pounds of daddy), but in Chapter 1 In Chapter 93, there was this thing that didn't seem to recognize that Xiao Jiujiu was a saint. In my eyes, the character of Ice Fox should be very smart. How could he be more troublesome than Yeran Fentian in finding Xiao Jiujiu? 3 Actually, it's a matter of time progress and the age of the heroine. At the beginning of the article (Chapter 2), it is said that the heroine is 18 years old, but in the game, she becomes 16 years old again (I forgot the specific chapter, but I still want to talk about it). When talking about this time progress, in the article, it is said that the adult is 20 years old and can go to school, but the heroine appears to be 18 years old, and then she slept for another year, so how can she become 20 years old? Okay, I said this is a bit far-fetched, because I haven't counted the time for playing games yet. TT Haha, just think that I am trying to make up the word count. In fact, after all this, I just want to say: Can I review your articles before publishing them in the future? I like your articles very much, and I hope that you can write better and more interesting articles. I am looking forward to it. In fact, "Interstellar Unicorn" is very good, come on

Finally updated. I haven't updated for so many days. Is there any compensation for updating? 😍

Come on, the author. Although the exemption is limited to tomorrow, I couldn't help but subscribe to it today. Support 🌹🌹

Should we give up? The update is too slow.

It's very well written. Don't give up. I'll vote for you.

After waiting so long, show me this? ? Ending? ? ? There is still a lot to write about later, just fill in the loopholes slowly. 😭 It feels like it hasn't been long since the beginning. I finally went to campus and finally met. Can you give me an ending? ! ! ! How sad! ! ! 💔

Emmm, I feel that the heroine's character is a bit silly. Because of the heroine's character, I think the author is not very old and her writing style is a bit sloppy 🙂

I just watched the beginning. Before the heroine traveled through time, was she a T?

Looking at the introduction, a bowl full of Mary Sues comes to mind.

The meaning of the heart (｡･㉨･｡)ﾉ♡ I love you so much

It would be great if there were more updates every day Not enough, not enough I wait for updates after six o'clock every day 🥺🥺🥺

The author is so narcissistic and YY goes too far.

Dear dear, I am updating my articles, but there is a shortage of books. I am waiting for you to continue updating. Come on.

How abominable | ू•ૅω•́)ᵎᵎᵎ

. . . . . . Author, come out, woo woo

I saw Chapter 102. It's so bloody.

Yeah, Ye Ranfentian is a scumbag

I originally thought that Ye Tan was already a scumbag enough when it came to dividing the land, but I didn't expect that he could be even more scumbag. Just because Xiao Jiujiu and the heroine of the Holy Maiden Statue, I have to choose one between them? If another similar one comes along, will he continue to choose? And why should he choose? This scumbag is disgusting.

The heroine used to be a man. . . What should I do if it's so disgusting?

The five-nut mooncake is said to be unpalatable. Is the author a southerner? The reason why five-nut mooncakes are unpalatable is that the five-nut mooncakes in the south are filled with inferior fillings. Some of them cannot even be called five-nut mooncakes, so they are just deceiving people who don't know how to eat them. Unfortunately, a large number of people think that they are real five-nut mooncakes, haha.

Ummm... I don't mind a lot of golden fingers, but I do mind that the female protagonist has low quotient. If she pounces on a beautiful woman when she sees one, it will look very childish. At least you should look at her face. 🌹 The author should try to make the story flow as much as possible. There really shouldn't be too many such miscellaneous people, and the female protagonist looks too much like a gangster. . . This further highlights that the male protagonist is a face-conscious person. If you change some small settings, the quality of the entire book will be much higher.

55555～The author comes out and promises not to beat you to death