Roll Over, Mochi!

... I wanted to write about her being innocent, but the description didn't sound like it, so it became deliberate, she was innocent at one time and inconsistent with the character, and then I wrote one incident before finishing the end of many events, and the plot connection was not smooth. People just saw her defeating the Demonic Snake Elite very smoothly, and then suddenly asked her friends when she finished the mission, and also asked her to gather at the Demonic Snake Cave? ? That was a plot copy. How did he know that she must have accepted this mission? Moreover, the heroine didn't feel confused when she saw the message he sent, and started typing the copy without asking. After that, she was very speechless when she was fighting the bear. She suddenly didn't want to kill the bear, saying that she didn't know how to fight monsters. She had killed it before and knew that it was a wild boss. She suddenly felt sympathy and was really blunt. She even went up to bandage it... And said that it looked like... It made me feel embarrassed at every turn. If you want to write about her, she doesn't care about wild monsters. If you look at it like a normal player, you should prepare the ground well from the beginning instead of showing mercy to the monster all of a sudden. It seems so hypocritical. The team has worked hard to grind down the last bit of blood, and a group of people have died except for the last one. Not only did you kill the last person, but you also let go of the monster that they worked so hard to defeat. It really seems a bit pretentious.

Why did I feel that it was good before watching 72, but then I got bored after watching it? The heroine, the novice, has been following the development of the plot and has not grown up. I feel that the fighting plot is a bit boring. In the early stage, the cute and novice character can be entertaining, but the character design has always been monotonous and boring. I am a book reader and I can't bear to read it.

It would probably be a lot better if the first chapter started with a plot about Mochi's real life... In the early stage, I felt that Mochi's simplicity was too deliberate, but the rest was okay, and it was a book that could be read in the wilderness. I only found this article interesting after seeing the scene where Ji Yan came out in Chapter 42, and I felt sorry for Mochi~