Another World in Writing

After reading the post's instigation to quit, I admire the author's broadmindedness. This kind of post still exists today. Because of this, I personally tried the poison.

This type of novel simulates a world similar to the earth, and then creates a hole in the entertainment for the protagonist to fill. The problem is that this is not your family's mud pit. If you hollow it out, it will be gone. A complete world will definitely have other things to fill it. Many authors don't know how to fill it, so they set up the protagonist to fill it in and then the whole world follows GC's wise plot. In my opinion, it is better to write about a time similar to 20 years ago and let the protagonist copy online classics. Moreover, this type of novel is really disgusting sometimes. You take out other people's things and use them without any respect and think you are very powerful. What kind of mentality is this?

Cousin Chengye and Cousin Failure I have read more than a hundred chapters and I am really tired There is a cousin in the family who dreams of becoming a star. At first, I thought she was quite arrogant, but later she acted like a coquettish person and begged the protagonist for a script. What can I say? The relative relationship of the protagonist is also very complicated. The novels, scripts, and songs that they took for granted naturally came to them. For example, the eldest sister quit her job and became an agent. The second sister was a little better but was still involved. She helped read the contract when the book was published, but in fact it was nothing. It was a bit uncomfortable because the protagonist's aura involved so many family members. The third sister was a little better but still involved. Needless to say, I went to great lengths to write a script for him if I wanted to be a star. The main character is the company consultant of my eldest sister's husband It mainly focuses on complicated family relationships and content between friends How can I say that the relationship is like this at the beginning, and the people who appear later will definitely become more and more popular. The more there are, the more human relationships will be involved. Personally, I feel that it is a pity. The plots written in the first few chapters are quite good. In fact, the protagonists want us to write novels well and develop star plans. There are too many things involved in the whole book, and it is not possible to achieve the desired effect.

The author changed the title of the legendary song earlier, which was very poisonous. Later, I don't know what he did with the theme song of the Condor. When I asked some diva to sing later, I couldn't stand it anymore. The protagonist is already awesome, why can't someone else sing? Is the other heroine ***? Every celebrity is his or her idol. Is there such a person?

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After reading dozens of chapters, I just can't stand it anymore! I particularly dislike the protagonist's mentality. He always faces problems with a mentality of "I am great and I will definitely succeed." And the author tried his best to explain that this is not the case. The protagonist knows that this is normal, but he just feels that he should not be disrespected! What's the use of explaining all the time, but the way he behaves is that he's too high-spirited! I am a person who has no interest in martial arts, and I don't understand why the author wants to praise Jin Yong's novels as being particularly powerful. This is a world with extremely developed entertainment, but there are no martial arts novels. In a world where Internet literature is developed, I don't know why martial arts will be popular. When Internet literature is developed, do you think people will like the fun and rhythm of martial arts? In a world that has never had any foundation in martial arts, a well-developed martial arts novel suddenly appeared. Do you think it will be accepted by fans of chivalrous novels? I haven't read "The Legend of the Condor Heroes", but I also know that the plot at the beginning of this book is not very good. After writing it for a long time, the protagonist has not yet appeared. Do you think a novel with this kind of pace will be popular in online novels? Of course, if you insist on setting it like this, there is no problem. At least I am a little bit accepting of my incompetence! The supporting role of Linlin is really special and incomprehensible! He keeps making some particularly speechless and unreasonable requests to the protagonist. The protagonist obviously helped her, but she took it for granted and took it too far. And even though he knew the protagonist was short of money, he still shamelessly asked the protagonist for money. You must help me unconditionally and support me fully! She doesn't consider the protagonist at all, and the author wrote very speechlessly several times that she just has a good relationship with the protagonist and is a person who knows what's appropriate. Don't just talk it, show it! People with particularly good relationships do exist, and they may be able to give to each other unconditionally, but this relationship cannot be just one-way! It's just that one party gives unconditionally, while the other party doesn't think about the other party at all and demands more! Please, apart from parents and children, there is no such relationship! OK? Author, creating a character must be expressed through some details and specific behaviors! You can't just explain it in a few far-fetched sentences! Obviously, various behaviors show one look, but it is impossible to show the characters in another look with a few far-fetched explanations!

The more I watched it, the more disgusting it became, and the protagonist kept slapping himself in the face. I can't bear to read more than 900 chapters. In the early stage, praising the cousin was taken for granted, and the protagonist kept licking her. There were changes later and I stopped licking my cousin. I keep emphasizing that I was a doctor in my previous life, so I do whatever I want. . I don't understand the point of emphasizing this. Do you still want to meet an old man who is sick on the street and pretend to be a slap in the face? I said I would not invest in the film adaptation of my own work, but within a few chapters I was slapped in the face again. Also, I was a doctor in my previous life, so I have some knowledge about animation music in this life. You know how to copy songs, anime, etc. You have an extraordinary memory and can copy books without missing a single punctuation mark. But what qualifications do you have to change the settings of other people's novels? Assassin's League plus Qigong. Is Harry Potter going to be transformed into a Chinese Immortal Version? You were a doctor in your previous life, but what qualifications do you have to say about changing the settings.

After reading Chapter 140, I finally decided to give up. It's nothing, the author's other writing is okay. That Lin Lin wrote is really disgusting! ! ! Maybe the author wants to create a happy enemy for the protagonist, but every time I see her plot, I just get bored. The more I watch, the more I hate her. I really can't stand it anymore!

After reading Chapter 160, I still have to complain about some parts. As for finding illustrators for the story in Chapter 157-160, the two down-and-out illustrators living in a small house look malnourished and have little income. The protagonist provides the story, character modeling, scene design and positioning, and the two people are asked to provide illustrations according to the standards. I offered the other person a job, but was rejected at first, and it was the other person who tried to get her back (if a man did this, the author should have arranged for the protagonist to withdraw!). When negotiating the price, the protagonist always tries to guide the price sharing, making it clear that he will give the other party the best interests (the other party doesn't appreciate it either). The final price was 2,000 per piece, which was much higher than the usual price (the price for two people was usually 1,000-1,500). According to the protagonist, the other party could earn an average of 40,000 per month (the protagonist also felt that the other party earned very little, and did not understand why the protagonist felt sorry for the other party when the basic salary was only 6,000 when he first started working. His eldest sister only earned 10,000 per month). In the end, the other party raised the price by 3,000, and the protagonist happily accepted it, and also offered an additional price of 3,500 for early completion! (During this period, the other party mentioned many times that the work tasks given by the protagonist were heavy and would affect her own paintings. Haha.) Since it is a business, there must be comings and goings, and it is not that there are no other illustrators. The protagonist will agree to whatever the other party proposes, and it is so casual for more than a million. So what is the point of emphasizing her small farmer consciousness in the previous chapters? You have spent more than a million on your own decoration, and you have a lot of ink stamps on it, and now you are so rich? What about the character? –-The band that the brother-in-law invited for the wedding rehearsal (the protagonist felt contempt for the music dream of these middle-aged uncles) just wanted to invite the protagonist to sing and paid for it, but the protagonist also despised it in his heart. As the saying goes, sales cannot be done in a righteous way, and it doesn't matter if he refuses to sell, and he fired the other party in a cautious manner (he is not as patient as with women here). The most disgusting point in this book is cousin Lin Ling. The author may have wanted to describe the warmth between relatives, the close relationship between childhood sweethearts and siblings teasing each other as they grow up, but due to the problem of writing, the image of a savage princess who always asks for ideas, songs, and scripts from her cousin, but does not give what she deserves, dreams of becoming a star all day long, but has no voice, no acting skills, and no effort! After filming an online drama with the help of my cousin, I couldn't distinguish reality. When I had time, I pestered the protagonist to help recommend and promote it, but I didn't work hard to improve my acting skills. Such an offensive character appears so many times. The protagonist repeatedly mentioned his dream of becoming a star for his cousin, saying that people with dreams deserve respect, but he did not respect the band!

Most of the current time travel stories have a common problem. They lived for many years before time travel, but after time travel, they changed their bodies. Not only did their age change, but their life experiences also changed! The most annoying thing is that my IQ has also changed! Well! !

After reading Chapter 150, when the protagonist met the Hellfire band and asked me to sing, he immediately persuaded me to quit. It was not because the protagonist wrote the song, but because of the protagonist's three views. First of all, when the band came on stage, the protagonist saw that they were all middle-aged, so he thought they were the kind of losers, and then he felt a burst of contempt, saying that they only pursued their own music dreams and did not earn money to support their families honestly. It seemed that in the eyes of the protagonist, only he, a time traveler, could make money by doing music, and others who played music must be impoverished. Secondly, the band wanted to buy a song from the protagonist, but the protagonist refused to write it and gave a lot of reasons. It was unreasonable to make a request for the first time when they met. When he refused, he didn't speak well and felt that the other person had a bad temper. After this, the protagonist makes excuses to change the band. To be honest, I didn't see what the author wanted to express when he wrote this plot. The band is good and made no mistakes. They just wanted to buy a song from the protagonist, and then they were despised by the protagonist in all aspects. After reading this paragraph, I only saw that the protagonist is arrogant and rude, looks at people through colored glasses, and is completely self-centered. What he says must be right and others must be wrong. There is nothing normal in his three views. After seeing this, I really can't stand it any longer. If I keep reading, there might be something more damaging to my outlook on life.

I don't understand. You said at the beginning that China's history is different and that it is the big brother in the world. Why do you still kneel down and lick the United States later? What's the use of what you explained at the beginning? At the beginning, it was said that the economic foundation determines the status of entertainment. China is already number one, so why are they still kneeling? What about Hollywood, a comparison of foreign talents, thinking about going out? The opening explanation was completely useless, a slap in the face.

How can this brain be a doctor? I was persuaded to quit after reading only a few chapters. Whether any literary work is popular or not depends on the social background at that time. What do you think will be popular if you sing songs such as "A Date at Ninety-Eight" and "The Tracker's Love"? What's going on in your head? I can't figure this out. I don't think the protagonist will be a very good doctor.

Read the previous free chapters and tell me your thoughts. Many book friends have posted about the character Li Lin, and I can't stand it either. This is how to describe it, the protagonist licks her crazily in all kinds of ways. I don't know if you can stand it or not.

I really couldn't stand the scene when I saw the band giving songs to me. The first person invited me to ask them to sing, but the second person asked me to give them three songs! They are all classics! ! It's a waste to put it on such an inferior band! ! ! And even if I have to give it, I can change it to a way that readers will accept. I just write that the band is late, and then sincerely apologize. The protagonist asks the reason, and feels that they usually cooperate and get along well, so I help others and give me songs. I can accept it. I have to write about the band carefully, but the protagonist thinks that the other party can do it, so he just throws out three songs, which is simply sick!

The protagonist is really a super licker, he licks everyone, and licking women can also explain his desire. To the band that threatened the protagonist to invite songs by being late and not contributing, they gave three songs, "The Past You", "Chasing Dreams", and "Blue Lotus", and asked: "Brothers, are three songs enough?" It's so disgusting.

Many literary novels ignore one problem, that is, start copying as soon as they come in. How is the writing style of Pig's Foot itself? Or just copy some TV series or novels that you remember watching in your previous life! The same goes for writing scripts. I just wrote it without any knowledge or literacy in this area! Therefore, I always feel that the growth process of the protagonist is missing in Wenzhao novels. It seems that the protagonist is struggling, but he always uses the things of others in his previous life to set himself off. He becomes a god as soon as he comes, and he can become a god in whatever he does. He never considers the current era, social background, etc., And never considers whether the pig's feet themselves have the qualifications to become a god (knowledge and cultural literacy)! Therefore, many of them are written in a boring way and cannot be read. Also, in terms of the protagonist's personal character and quality, society is said to be a big dyeing vat. So where has his life experience been in his previous life? Do he only remember the works of his previous life? On the contrary, after traveling through time, there is really no sense of experience in him!

This book is really poisonous. The author is very happy to depict some characters that make you sick. The protagonist is like a bitch. The supporting characters always like to ask for benefits from the protagonist unconditionally. The key is that the protagonist gives it to the protagonist and keeps telling you that this person has a good heart... I am really speechless. Just ignore me, I am just here to complain.

Why does everyone say poison? All are ordinary members

All I can say is that this is a very poisonous book. I barely read about a hundred chapters. I died from the poison. Classic songs passed down from generation to generation. I gave them to the bands I just met for free. I used to be you, Blue Lotus, chasing dreams with a pure heart, ugh😔

I just read the book because of other people's bad reviews, and then I found it a bit to my liking. The plot is good and the details are spot on. Then I read other people's bad reviews and I understood a little bit. In fact, people will form their own tastes after reading books to a certain extent. Most of the negative comments in the book reviews are basically that the readers think the protagonist is what he is, but he is not what he should be. It makes sense. During the process of reading the book, readers find that the protagonist's behavior is not in line with their own ideas, and it is easy to feel irritable or even disgusting. I know this very well, and the reasons are based on myself. I have read a novel called Big Monkey before, and I thought it was good. The characterization and emotional details were all in place. But suddenly after seeing a certain chapter. The protagonist, as Sun Wukong, kneels down to his enemy. He also followed the enemy's words and killed a white ape who took great care of him. I was immediately disgusted. After scolding me, I abandoned the book and haven't read it until now. But I often see people say that this book is good, which means that the book's reputation is quite good. So the key to whether a book is good or not is whether the author can express what he is thinking clearly. As long as you express it, someone will definitely resonate with you. Van Gogh mentioned in his letter to Theo that there is a fire in everyone's heart, but people passing by can only see smoke. "Different ways do not conspire against each other." On the contrary, conversely, conversely, conversely, conversely, this is what it means.

If I traveled through time, I wouldn't be able to copy any of the songs. Except for the national anthem and a few simple children's songs, I don't know the lyrics, only the melody.

How could Straw Mat be written like this? This book cannot withstand the second brush. In other words, I only saw a doctor before I entered medical school.

To be honest, the title and introduction caught me at first glance. The world under the pen is a very good highlight, and with the introduction "With a pen, there is nothing I can't do, and with a keyboard", a world controlled by a time traveler's pen is born in his hands. At a glance, I saw that this should be a story about the interaction between the creator and the world he created. . . . . . It can be said that the expectations are full. . In the end, it was still a general Wenzhaogong. Shui's daily life was a bit boring and there were few exciting points (compared to some non-routine players). I could only reluctantly follow Jin Da to release the third game. In addition, the character design is really a bit unbearable, the conflicts are a bit capitalized (embarrassing), and do you really have to write blunt character descriptions when there is nothing wrong? Why don't you just write a hundred words when you have nothing to do? In a word, come with joy and return with disillusionment. With the above sentiments, after reading more than a hundred chapters, I really can't hold it in anymore. I express my feelings, but I can't do it if I don't express them. If the author sees it and doesn't like it, just delete it. 🙏