Super Plane Lottery

I can still see it, but it's a pity that I'm in the palace.

What are you writing about? Damn it.

I'm convinced, a dog can write ten chapters

6 Votes, come on, the plot and writing are not good.

The author is too stupid, he just beats up a few people, it's all nonsense, and it has to go into ten chapters, it's too much, it's all about skipping, I really can't stand it anymore~~~

A little watery, a little draggy. The author probably wrote as he pleased without an outline, hoping that the more he writes, the better.

The author's setting was wrong from the beginning. The protagonist loves the villain. But the protagonist wants to make money, but isn't that what people read novels for? Is this how the protagonist writes a novel even though he knows he won't be popular? Such a protagonist is sick.

I can write it, but it's not what I want to read.

Is the Zulong bloodline bad? Stop being funny, okay?

Are you sure the protagonist also writes novels? Please, as you said in the previous article, you are looking forward to a golden finger, and you are also an online writer. Even if you are a street writer, you still have system awareness, right? Haha, but as for the protagonist, after getting the system, all he asked were novice questions and nonsense. Also, have you seen the list of gods? Chen Haomin's version is a basic version of the Sky Eye, which can illuminate and launch attacks, but it will make you dizzy after being illuminated for a while. You can also see through it. Haha, you are really drunk. Okay, forget about X-ray, don't buy scratch-off tickets and the like, just look at yourself, haha, in reality you are also a loser

Isn't Erlang Shen's Heavenly Eye her mother's magic weapon?

I really can't stand the nosebleed thing anymore. Yes, do you have leukemia?

The writing is too watery, without much substance. I read the entire article in half an hour. Goldfinger is good, but it is too watery.

No way, starting a new book? Are you going to stop writing this book? Oh my god, although I have a lot of shortcomings, I really like this book. I reviewed it for a few days at the end of the semester, and when I came back, I saw that I was going to write a new book. Oh my god - Author, please do your best, even if you update it every week. . . If the author writes a book as a hobby, I hope the author will have more support. If the author wants to write a book to make money, I won't say more and just go with my own ideas. . . Finally, I really hope that the author will be more persistent. I will go back and read the new book, hoping that it will be better than before (to be honest, I am the type of person who gives up thinking like Ah Fu. Just let me read the book without thinking too much. Just listen to my words seriously.) As long as it is not ugly, I will support it~

Visit to "A Certain Misaka Girl's Variety Comic Journey"

Many people like the Sharingan, but don't you think it's inconsistent with Erlangshen's third eye's ability to rebound illusions and copy? People in Journey to the West don't like to play illusions and ninjutsu. They have changed directly and don't play with the imaginary ones. Moreover, the spells cannot be learned at a glance. Some even require the environment and materials. They put the cultivation methods in front of you. If you don't meet the requirements, you won't be able to learn them. It will take a long time to learn if you meet the requirements. After all, people live a long time, and the games are sophisticated, complex and powerful. It's not something as crude as ninjutsu, you can see through it at a glance!

There is a common problem among current authors: a mortal always wants a magic weapon in a lottery! The key is that you are a mortal and have no cultivation. If you want these magic weapons, what is the use of them? , This setting is quite funny every time I see it. I'll give you a Ruyi True Golden Cudgel that you can't even lift.

Dear author, what is your brother?