My Time Travel Is a Little Weird

The first one is too brain-burning. Just let the rest of your adventures happen. Why did my fellow villager have such an adventure? Just think about it. Can't you think about it yourself? You still have to write one or two pages. Just write. You still have to write. To be honest, as a scumbag, I can't understand it at all. Secondly, although I have already written that my roommate is a street bastard, his novels are too bloody. They are shitty and shitty, and I haven't written about mainstream themes, such as history, fairy tales, and so on, which are barely urban, but what does it mean to be a dragon pet in Nong Tu? The money in the third novel can be used in real life. Please, the light dragon pet can reflect the fact that the two worlds have different backgrounds, different settings, different histories, so it can be universal. If you set it, using gold coins is better than using paper money. Anyway, gold coins can be sold as gold. The most important thing is the automatic update of events. Sci-fi instantly turns into suspense. It is still a suspense with no clues and no solution. I really can't love it. The above personal opinions are not intended to criticize the book, but I am really unhappy about it. If any point is caused by me not reading the book seriously, I apologize in advance. Feel free to criticize me.

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Emmm... I've seen Japanese comics with similar settings on the Internet. What should I say... E, I'd better support it, the author has written so many chapters (:з∠)_

I feel that hat has reached a dead end. In fact, there is no need to follow the current style of online writing. It is actually not smooth to read. It's best not to say it out loud when pretending to be a pig or eating a tiger, just let the reader have this feeling in their mind after reading. In fact, even the master's book won't be able to say these words. Usually the protagonist uses his ultimate move casually, shocking all the big shots, and then the protagonist will be embarrassed to say that his performance was abnormal and he will try his best next time. This is the most typical kind. Although it has been used badly and I have read it hundreds of times, every time I read it, I feel that it is awesome. The City of Hats is actually already working hard on this aspect. Apart from the fact that the plot is really unflattering and some of the ideas are so speechless, the whole book is making progress. The aura of the protagonist is too strong (the protagonist takes out the dragon-slaying sword from time to time, but in the end, the thing blocking the way is at best a chicken.), And all expectations are basically non-existent. I think that once you have your own old readers, you must work hard. Some things may not succeed even if you try your best, but the upper limit of your efforts may be to reach the middle level writer, and that is enough for you, right? This book read like a chicken bone that had been drained of its juice. All my expectations were expressed, and the plot progressed without any sense of urgency, so I read it after 6 chapters and gave it up. As expected, this book was not suitable for me. For the continued support of hats, come on! These are some personal feelings. I hope they haven't given you too many blows (I guess you're used to it). Persistence is good, and persistence in the right direction is the way to go. Otherwise, persistence will be meaningless if you run in the wrong direction. Come on, hats. I'll give you 2 monthly passes to express my apology for not reading recently.

The main character is 4 or 4, and the roommate wants to be a eunuch. Please continue writing.

I hope I can finish writing this book 👍 Come on.

I refused to comment at first. The author has completed several million-word novels. If you have any recommendation votes, please vote for them.

It's common to find trashy books, but it's rare to see trashy books in every chapter. Chapter Zhang is so poisonous, I really wonder if the author will die of embarrassment if he comes back to take a look.

But the last few chapters have started to get a bit interesting.

With the ability to travel into other people's novels, what does the protagonist actually care about money? What he really wants to focus on should actually be the core setting of Roommate's book, or in other words, the protagonist helps the other party complete the setting and take it a step further. For example, this world appears to be a dragon pet, but it can be written that the real top level has begun to merge with the dragon through research, thereby sharing the dragon's lifespan and abilities... Anyway, that's probably what happened. I feel that the protagonist is so passive and always struggling with money and women, which makes the roommate forced to worry about these small problems, and may even cause the book to collapse. What if the book really collapses? Didn't the protagonist think about it? He just keeps making some demands, but in fact these demands are really not very good. It can only be said that this protagonist is too short-sighted. If his roommate's novel fails, then he will definitely occupy an important factor in it.

Although beaten, the benefits of this facial cleanser are still good.

Personally, I feel that this book is suitable and more similar to the style of "The First Chaotic Joy in History", so. . . . Try to keep all kinds of bad guys and bad things from happening better.

,,, The author has a good idea, let's take a look

This update is simply poisonous. You have to be fat to watch it.

This book is not popular, the author is dressed as a woman. 🤓

The key to this book is the amount of imagination. At present, it seems that the author's imagination is limited to this content, so it won't work without more supplements. I am only obsessed with using dragon pets to fight, finding ways to make money, and comics that the protagonist is good at. Is there anything else besides that? Almost everything the protagonist thinks of is thought up and arranged by the author, which means the author really needs to think more. How would I write this? First of all, we need to let the protagonist compile a more ambitious setting and let the roommate author adopt it. For example, the origin of the dragon can be written as coming from a different world. Then there will be an entrance to the different world in this reality. Only the top leaders of the world know this secret, as well as the means for reality to invade the different world, etc. In this way, there will be a plot of the different world. Since there is a first different world, there may be a second one, so all the plots will be revealed. It also broke away from a niche dragon pet plot. Then, even different worlds can be developed, but what about outer space and other planets? It's not like I can't write. This is the setting aspect, and there are many places where your imagination can be developed. Next, there is the problem of the protagonist himself. Since he has considered the comics, why doesn't he think deeply about it? What would I think if it were me? I will ask the roommate author to write a side story about the protagonist's incarnation as a rich man who accidentally discovered his secret. In fact, he was actually a great cartoonist. His debut work was extremely famous, but it just involved something that made him hide it as a secret. Everything can be rewritten, the main thing is to make a heavyweight comic appear out of thin air in the novel, and it can still be brought out. In real life, the protagonist can also find an excuse to ask his roommate to write this, saying that he was planning to draw this comic. This is a kind of publicity. You can also use this to cooperate with the roommate's author. The protagonist draws a comic set in the world of dragon pets, and then it forms a whole with the roommate's novel. The protagonist should also try to use this additional method to see if he can directly become part of the original work through the "fans" and settings recognized by the author himself. In short, there are many ideas, so the author should think more.

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I have a hunch! This comment will be included in the novel. The protagonist's main plot is to explore the secrets of time travel and improve his life. Since he can time travel into the novel, can the characters in the novel time travel out? What kind of plot conflicts would there be if we traveled through time? Well, this is all imaginary. When it is put on the shelves, the first reward will be waiting for you. PS: The reward is the one with the lowest amount.