The Cannon Fodder of Quick Travel Is Not Sad

I feel that the author was poisoned by the novels written by female channels, so he wrote this novel to please himself

The book is still good Even though everyone said that the main character only uses words too ink but I think it's okay It's this paragraph structure Are you writing a poem with a few words per line? My head hurts when I read it Especially the psychological description There are more in the first place Plus this paragraph It's like this A few words Paragraphs Annoying

The layout is a bit uncomfortable. It was okay at first, but after reading the first few pages of Alternative Journey to the West, I felt exhausted.

The dark cuisine was really dark, it was so depressing that it made me feel bad. I feel like the author writes very casually, the heroine's style changes from time to time, and so does the writing style. One section is pretty good, but the next section is the end of the story. The idea is still very good, can't you be more serious?

The word count of water is not the normal word count of water. I can't stand it, so I abandoned the article.

The author seems to have said that this is a newspaper article, so every time I read a story, I feel like I am happy, but at the same time I feel super frustrated. Especially later, the heroine helped the original owner to take revenge, but after the heroine completed the task and left. The original owner still didn't change at all, and slowly transformed himself into the person he was before the heroine came. The task was lonely.

It's well written, but it's very heavy to read. Sometimes I watch it in the morning and it affects my mood for the day, ugh😔

There was a problem with the layout at first, and it was so tiring to watch. Later, I discovered that the dialogue between the characters was not marked, and it felt like the heroine knew what the other person was thinking without speaking, as if he was talking to herself. There is also the matter of traveling into a small world to complete tasks. The original plot introduction could be more concise, with a few sentences and at most one chapter. The author's writing is too verbose and details everything. I can write one article about the original plot of a world from beginning to end, and then write it again after the counterattack. The idea of ​​the novel is quite good, but the writing is poor and has the above problems.

Why can't I see the latest chapter? (◇)

The cannon fodder is not sad, but it is absolutely refreshing. The heroine is omnipotent and invincible, and the writing style is amazing🙂666 Readers who are suitable for this style of writing will probably like it very much, (but I can only say that the style is really not to my liking🤐)

I like the fact that the heroine's personality is not like that of a virgin, and she relies entirely on her own strength to survive! I hate relying on male protagonists and virgins the most. What this counterattack novel wants is to abuse the scum and to be happy. If it is not abusive and gentle, it is a different kind of novel!

The more I write, the worse it gets. The heroine turned out to be quite lovable, but she gradually became arrogant. She completely regarded herself as God and controlled other people's lives at will. What happened to time travel and rebirth? People have a good outlook on life. She didn't do anything harmful to nature or harm others. She just lived her own life well. It's none of your business.

Big books are just different from other sexy bitches. The Dark Cuisine series is very realistic and thought-provoking. Come on

They all hang out in my Shu, and I feel friendly when I see your names (ฅ>ω<*ฅ) But plagiarism, eh Ever since I read Wo Shu, I had nothing to read. Then I saw someone recommending this book in the Wo Shu comment section, so I came to read it. Generally speaking, the two books are quite similar, but the processing methods are different. I Shu worked hard to climb up little by little, but this book was amazing from the beginning. As for the background, I am following the organization's arrangements. Is the heroine in this book going against the main god? The content of the story is almost the same, but which fast-traveling novel doesn't have campus, apocalypse, or ancient times? From the best friend incident exposed in the news some time ago, it can be seen that the author wrote it himself. Of course I am a fan of Wo Shu, but it is better not to go under other people's book reviews and say that they are plagiarized without any basis. I believe that Ning Shu's fans are rational and capable of independent judgment (๑ˊ͈ᐞˋ͈)ƅ̋

This is the first time I've read a novel and I'm so angry. Author, are you really writing seriously? There is no layout, long paragraphs of complaints, extremely colloquial descriptions, and line breaks every few words. The narrative skills are extremely poor, and it is full of perfunctory taste. There is no progress, and it even gets worse later on. The writing attitude is really bad.

Hmm... I think this article is very good and interesting. Why are there so many comments in the comment area that the article is rubbish and bad... (Cute girl is confused)

Like you, I was also attracted by the plot. Click in. The previous plot is very exciting and explosive. But the whole article, is line after line. Exactly one sentence. It seems as if I can see the author's Enter key spinning and jumping, I also seem to see the heroine's powerful mind and disdainful, hey, you are all ants, eyes. How much courage does it take to wait until chapter 250? You have shown with your actions what silent protection means. What is pampering?

Why does it seem more illogical and confusing the more I watch it, the heroine is like a keyboard warrior, just quarrelsome?

In fact, the plot is pretty good, and it's quite enjoyable to watch the heroine complaining about it. But the more I looked at it, the more I realized that there was no actual action at all, and it was almost all about talking. Otherwise, it's just that my heart is beeping, and it's quite frustrating to watch it without being able to answer all the arguments... In short, the plot is not bad, but the specific description and how to do things are not obvious. It was a mess... I stayed up all night for several hours to read Three Worlds, and decided to abandon the article...

To be honest, I can't stand it. I don't think it's hard to accept the layout that is generally mentioned. What makes me feel more uncomfortable is that my literary skills are so poor. I have to be nagging and muddled about things that can be explained clearly in one sentence. I talked about several lines, but the content was as nutritious as kindergarten kids quarreling; I didn't get to the point, I was irritating and annoying, and my writing style was so stupid that I always felt like I was holding my breath while reading it. I wanted to let the author finish the nonsense quickly. I was really depressed and panicked.

It's so tiring to read. The storyline is obviously good, but the narrative style is tiring, and there are a lot of irrelevant words. I hope the author can refine his language a little more, pay attention to scheduling, and express emotions. It seems that there should be big mood swings in some places, but they are bland. It's like the whole world is a robot and doesn't know how to express emotions. It's always a straight line that doesn't rise and fall. It's suffocating. I feel like it's a pity that books can be written like this.

? ? ? When did Qidian start paying people by line? ? ? One sentence after another, without Gu Long's writing style, I feel so tired when I read it

The author breaks off sentences so suffocatingly... He breaks into new lines after just a few words.

I see many people in the building saying they have incorrect views, and I want to defend them. I think the incorrect outlook here is not about the heroine, but people other than the heroine. Because except for the heroine in this article, it seems that the whole world is the dark side of human nature, which makes people more and more depressed as they read. Even if the heroine succeeds in torturing the scumbag in the end, she still doesn't feel that happy, as if there is something stuck in her heart... Abusing a scumbag shouldn't be happy, why do I become more and more depressed the more I read it...

It always takes me a long time to read a story. I feel aggrieved every time I read the story. . . . . Full of negative energy.

After reading a few stories, I can only say that the first ones were pretty good! But each story's foreground synopsis takes up several chapters! A little annoying! The word count is seriously overstated!

What did the author think? Some readers have always complained about the problem of paragraphing, insisting on sticking to a few words/sentences and paragraphs. The royalties are not based on the number of lines? Should I write modern poetry? I really can't hold on anymore 😅

Readers who want to criticize the author every sentence or even half a sentence come here to gather. 😁😁😁😁😁[Although the plot is very attractive.

It's all a twisted story. I suggest this book be banned.

Is this what you call good-looking? There are a lot of Holy Father and Holy Mother bitches, and the evil people are at ease. They know that their biological daughter was abandoned by her sister and suffered for more than ten years. She still has to help her brother-in-law clean up the mess and help her sister one last time before ignoring her. Ignore her. Oh, what a serious punishment. Have you asked your biological daughter? The heroine just got over it, haha, it makes me sick