The Little Chubby One's Cultivation Chronicles

The early stages are a bit goofy, but the plot is compact and interesting to watch. After all, it is just foreshadowing the rest of the story, which is about fifty chapters. The plot becomes a bit unfocused later on, and I personally don't think it's as interesting as before. Moreover, there is no description of the environment and the like, and the time changes are not obvious enough, which made me a little confused. Furthermore, why don't you have a good friend who is also Sunshine? Either the vengeful and ruthless senior sister cultivating the Dao Dao, or the little sister who is easily provoked, the other one who is careless and has an affair with that Sima at a glance, and the last beautiful little sister is a demon cultivator who is much older and has a son! Look at you, you have a lot of blue-faced confidants, why can't you have good gay friends? Is Lily Army vegetarian? ! Don't you have many close friends? What a death! There are no good gay friends who are whole-hearted! So angry! Finally, I like the plot to be more compact, the main line to be more obvious, and the development of things to be clearer, thank you! Great support for the author😁

I really can't understand the heroine's character. She has lived for so long and it feels like she has lived in vain. It's so stupid. When her parents died at the beginning, I really couldn't feel her sadness. If it's because she time traveled not long ago and has no feelings for her parents and just treats herself as a bystander, I can understand it, but Why do you have to write about being reluctant to leave your parents to die, shedding some crocodile tears, turning around and being the Virgin to save the culprit? I was really convinced, and I didn't feel sad at all afterwards. Moreover, when a person in her twenties came to this world in her previous life, she felt stupider than a child of a few years old. Is this to show her cuteness? Is she stupid and sweet? ? ? I am not Sister Li. . I don't know what will happen next, but the front is really trying to persuade me to quit.

He Ying is very good at making small moves without being discovered next to a person who is just a god, and she even deceives him. Is this reasonable? This is very reasonable, and it is reasonable if the author thinks it is reasonable. 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊🤭🤭🤭🤭

I don't know if Nan Sheng's children can see this comment. It's been two years since "Little Fatty" ended, but I can still see your comment. Thank you very much for your like. Your recognition is the greatest encouragement to young writers. It seems to be getting further and further away😊, well, to get back to the subject, before the new book "Big Brother" is finished, the stupid author, well, will not consider writing the second "Little Fatty" for now. If there is a fate in the future, there may be a second one for everyone. (PS: The stupid author's voice is not pleasant, so I won't speak anymore to avoid being disillusioned😊But I will definitely reply after seeing the question, thank you for your understanding~)

When I saw the introduction, I was thinking, does this mean I want to jump on the street? Haiyan, what about your introduction? Do you think readers will read the text directly without reading the introduction? After reading the introduction, I will send you a recommendation vote. Bye bye.

There are only 7 members in a small cultivating family. The head of the family actually has the same cultivation level as his younger son in the early stages of the Golden Elixir. The eldest son is indeed a mortal. How long does it take for the younger son to practice Golden Elixir since he was a child? The eldest son, a mortal, neither ages nor dies, and competes with monks for opportunities. It's really full of flaws!

Is there really no male protagonist? If there is no male lead, I will chase him! ! ! The introduction looks good. I hope there is no male protagonist.

Here, other people's backers are their backers. Only Pig's Feet's backer is the waiter. Only when Pig's feet are fine is Pig's Feet's backer or parent. When something happens to Pig's feet, the waiter's backer or parents don't know where to hide. Let's look at other parents who will hunt down pig's feet as long as something happens to their children. The parent who gave the pig's feet didn't dare to fart afterwards, and the parent who was beaten by other people even bowed his head and licked his feet when he came home. I just want to ask if the ancestor the author wrote about is not the strongest on the surface? The ancestor of this pig's foot is 250. This ancestor does not dare to kill anyone and does not dare to offend anyone. What can such a person do to become an immortal? What are you doing as a cultivator? What does the ancestor who doesn't work write about him? A mortal and a pig have a stronger effect than the ancestor of the pig's feet.

Isn't it bad for an ordinary little girl to cultivate immortality? Just like mortals cultivating immortals, they have different lives. This novel makes people speechless. An ordinary little girl feels that the world revolves around pig's feet, Mu Yunsheng, and mountains. This is the biggest failure! A good novel doesn't need such rubbish plots and character settings.

I don't understand if I am an immortal or a female cultivator, would anyone really like being so fat? When I was a little chubby, I was cute, but if I'm 10 years old and still fat, I'm afraid even a dog would dislike it.