The Little Chubby One's Cultivation Chronicles

The beginning is a bit melodramatic, but the plot is tight and engaging. After all, it's just setting the stage for what's to come. Around fifty chapters should be enough. The plot became a bit scattered later on, and I personally didn't find it as interesting as the beginning.

I really can't understand the female lead's personality. She's lived so long and it's like she's wasted her life; she's so stupid. When her parents died at the beginning, I didn't feel any sadness at all. If it's because she's only recently transmigrated and has no emotional connection to her parents, and is just an observer, I can understand.

It's quite remarkable that He Ying could subtly manipulate someone who's only at the Nascent Soul stage without being detected, and even manage to fool them. Is this reasonable? Yes, it is. If the author deems it reasonable, then it is.

I don't know if Nan Sheng will see this comment. "Little Fatty" has been finished for two years, but I can still see your comment. Thank you so much for your appreciation. Your recognition is the greatest encouragement for a young writer like me. We seem to have gotten a bit off-topic 😊. Anyway, back to the point.

When I saw the synopsis, I thought, "Is this trying to flop?" Haiyan, do you think readers will skip the synopsis and jump straight to the main text? After reading the synopsis, will you just give a recommendation vote and say goodbye?

A small cultivation family with only seven members. The head of the family is at the early stage of the Golden Core realm, yet his cultivation level is the same as his youngest son's. The eldest son, however, is just a mortal. The youngest son has been cultivating to the Golden Core realm since childhood—how long would that take? The eldest son is a mortal who doesn't age or die, and he even competes with cultivators for opportunities. It's truly full of ridiculous points!

Is it really true that there's no male lead? If there's no male lead, I'll watch it!!! The synopsis looks good. I hope there's no male lead.

Everyone else has a real backer, but the protagonist's backer is just a waiter. This waiter is only a backer or a mentor when the protagonist is safe; when he's in trouble, this mentor or mentor disappears. Meanwhile, other protagonists' mentors would hunt him down from afar if their child got into trouble.

Wouldn't it be better for an ordinary little girl to cultivate immortality in an ordinary way? Like in "A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality," she could have a different life. This novel is just baffling. It feels like the world revolves around the protagonist, Mu Yun Sheng, and a mountain. That's the biggest flaw! Good novels don't need such terrible plots and character settings.

I don't understand why someone who cultivates to become an immortal, especially a female one, would be so fat and still have no fans? Being a little chubby as a child is cute, but if you're still fat after 10, even a dog would dislike you.