Cultivation Farming Notes

The subject matter is good, but there are too many poisonous points. Not to mention other things, three girls appeared in more than ten chapters. They have no money and no looks, but there is a girl who loves them wholeheartedly. The "school belle" they have been with for several years is still the original product? By the way, who did their school belle come from? In fact, I think pig trotters with this theme should all be lonely. For example, will a successful emperor or a failed emperor have real friends? And you insist on writing like those in a mixed society. Seeing all that brotherly love really makes you want to vomit. Don't you feel very vulnerable in the face of huge interests? If you are given a thousand yuan and asked to kill someone, you will definitely not kill him. What about 100 million or 100 billion? Or ask, can you withstand immortality? I jumped to Chapter 89. Finally, as a Hanfu fan, I would like to ask (maybe you don't have the concept of Hanfu), is the formal attire of the Great Universe Cultivation Alliance a suit? That's really high-end.

The protagonist's life is too depressed, can he be more arrogant? !

There are a lot of poisonous routines 😅 Otherwise, the book would be unreadable at the beginning

If you hold a grudge, you want to take revenge after you succeed; if you take away someone's love (opportunity), you won't be polite.

I'll give you a monthly vote and write well. But to be honest, the development of the plot is indeed a bit slow, and there is not much excitement. There is not much to watch before the secret realm is opened. After all, the pace is slow and there are few updates. Come on

No matter what the current situation of the characters in the book is, the men are all the same (good and jealous), and the women are also the same (nymphomaniac). Basically, their words and deeds are not in line with the character's growth environment, experience, and status over ten or twenty years. Everyone is not required to be as careful as the undercover protagonist playing the role, with small movements, facial expressions, etc. At least the brain circuits and even the expressions when speaking should not make people feel the same.

"Everyone who is familiar with the protagonist knows his strange disease." Then the protagonist recovered, but his friends had no reaction... Author, you must have forgotten! To be honest, I forgot something! Regarding the setting of Xiongqi, is it an individual or a group? Are most people on earth considered potential protagonists? Huangfuqi (three levels of innateness) versus the gun-wielding killer (the day after tomorrow?), Bai Shaojun (the ultimate innateness, right) versus the gluttonous immortal (twelve magic fruits). In the only battle scene, the description of combat power is a bit vague. To what level of cultivation do firearms pose no threat? Is there no explanation for Situ Xing's rebellion, or is this a pit you, the author, buried in the Dragon Group? The remaining members of the Kunlun family have both human and grass, so why don't you go? The background characters give me the impression of blind obedience, fooling, and manipulation. They are all grass and will fall wherever the wind blows. I like the concept of "it's all the little people who change history". It would be great if the author could put these among the background characters ✊. It doesn't have to be so detailed. At least it should have a sense of individuality, with one or two sentences like "probably not" or something like that. Even if it's grass, don't let it fall down so neatly. There are three timelines: after the protagonist is reborn, three months later in the cultivation era, and ten years later (Chapter 1). There is currently a governor sent by the Cultivation Alliance on Earth, the Hehuan Sect. Are they not natives of the Earth? There are also some casual cultivators, such as the Greedy Immortal. The Greedy Immortal was able to cultivate the Twelve Magical Fruits under the current conditions of the earth. Is he a genius or does he rely on time? Then the spiritual energy revived, the Cultivation Alliance intervened, and the earth's forces were reorganized. Some people whose skills are close to the Tao enter the Tao, such as the rice-cooking immortal. From the first chapter, it can be seen that the situation of the people on earth will not be very good ten years later, and the Cooking Immortal, the Greedy Immortal and others are considered the stronger among the people on Earth, right? So from the beginning of the cultivation era to ten years later, in one sentence, how were they living? Regarding the rhythm of the story, if it is not about the plot, scene changes, or epiphany, inner vision, bullet time, etc., But to create the feeling of being watched and time slowing down, character descriptions, psychological activities, etc. Are not too long, which will affect the reading experience. Everyone fights for the treasure, and the sword breaks through the air and flies away. Regardless of the sword's accessories, texture, origin, etc., You can write more than ten chapters, and the description will only be one sentence and one sword light. At most, you can add the powerful aura and extraordinary feeling. After fighting to seize the sword, the protagonist sits down to drink tea, and the pace of the story slows down, feel free to drink whatever you want. This is how it feels. The confrontation between the two is about to break out. After writing the atmosphere, write the eyes, the collision of breaths, the environment, the weather, and the mood. It's okay to write dozens of chapters, but when it comes to fighting, unless you turn on the bullet time or something, you have to write as fast as you want, as short as you want, and you can't stop! ! The reason I have so much resentment is because the description of the teacup not only took me away from the auction (this was the original intention, right?!), But also took me away from the plot. I thought a cultivation boss from some distant galaxy was going to appear, but it turned out to be an old glass (╯‵□′)╯┻━┻