Deep Sea Technology Empire

This book is either a failure or a eunuch, as evidenced by this post!

I would like to give some advice to the author. I have read 40 chapters, of which I skipped 6-7. This book gave me the impression that the plot that should be described in detail was not described in detail, and other parts were too detailed. If your book is about black technology, you should be more detailed about the technology part, and some insignificant descriptions of life should be reduced. For example, if you don't know how to describe the details of the protagonist's trip to Australia, you can just skip it. Also, I personally think the behavior at the military base is a bit unnecessary. It is recommended that if the author wants a water chapter, he can describe the technology part and some necessary plot descriptions in detail, such as the details of establishing a company after obtaining the seeds, publicity of the seed results, the country's reaction, the public's reaction, the impact on society, and then the description of the scene of the underwater city, the planning and design of the city, etc. And reduce some unnecessary plots, such as things encountered at sea, underwater battles, giant squid displays, etc., Try to reduce plots in life that have nothing to do with technology themes, and increase technology and technology-related plots. It will look better this way! Otherwise, it's a bit unclear what type of thing you want to write!

Can the author have a deep sea feast? As science and technology develops in the deep sea, bringing deep-sea creatures to the mainland will be a feast for all the people in the deep sea! The article can add some deep-sea supernaturals. The protagonist has a point-based metal ball system to redeem. If you make a villain, is there a destruction system? The protagonist creates and the villain destroys. The world can be divided into two or three parts. If it develops into a technological struggle for hegemony, it may be more attractive!

I posted a post to thank the book friends "I Have a Courier" for finding a lot of loopholes in this book. I self-reflected that there were indeed many places in this book that were not well thought out, which disappointed all book friends. In the future, I will work harder to improve and write this book. I will not choose the book Eunuch because it is the first book I have written and it is also a practice book. The writing technique is very immature. I hope everyone can point out the loopholes. Thank you. I like people with venomous mouths, but I don't like people with bad mouths. Otherwise, I will choose to ban you. Thank you, friends. 🌹

A Zen master was traveling and met someone who didn't like him. For several days, the man tried every means to slander him. Finally, the Zen master turned around and asked the man: "If someone gives you a gift, but you refuse to accept it, who does the gift belong to?" The man replied: "Of course it belongs to the person who originally gave the gift." The Zen master smiled and said, "That's right. If I don't accept your insults, then you are scolding yourself." 🌹 To all friends, respecting others means respecting yourself.

To be fair, this book has some flaws, but it's still readable, and it's much better than the unreadable ones. It's not easy for novice authors either. If you keep writing well, with the author's mentality, I believe the writing will get better and better. Writing a novel is not easy. It takes a lot of effort to conceive the plot and write the words. I wish the author an early success! !

The last few chapters are just mixed chapters, which are of no use. Please wait two days to see.

It's eighty chapters, and there's still no topic! !

Beautifully written and comfortable to read!

The main reason is that the title "Chen'er" is too embarrassing. To be honest, have you ever heard of any parents calling their son '×'er'? It's better if it's a girl, but if it's a boy... No matter who it is, as long as they can name one example, I lose!

Collect it first, it's so young that I can't bear to look at it! ! !

Congratulations to the author! Nothing to say ~ Light a cigarette ~ 🤓 Full subscription support for new chapters!

The protagonist of the novel must be sexy and funny. It's okay to pretend to be bad. Just don't be too mentally retarded when you slap him in the face.

Brainstorming is good. But the author doesn't describe the details well. And the plot is completely personal imagination. It seems like the whole world revolves around pig's feet. Little consideration is given to overall changes and impacts. Suddenly a magical seed popped up. It will germinate in a few days and grow in a few days. After that, the sand can be turned into soil, and tomatoes can be grown on it. Okay, this is very technical. Then there was the press conference, where reporters were entertained that day and it was broadcast on the news network that day. Haha, it's like they stopped investigating. It's like they can go up there as long as it's big news. You think the country doesn't want to grasp something like this that changes the world. Won't they engage in political censorship? Won't they investigate how you came up with this thing? They will not ask the corresponding scientific research institute to reach a cooperative relationship with you to overcome the related technologies of mass production and mass production of seeds. And for something like this that can change the world, the export share is not something you can just say, the country must have a hand in it secretly.

I remember that the protagonist of a novel cultivated a banyan tree that could control water, soil and air pollution. The price was as high as 5 yuan. Yes, it was not less than 10,000 words.

Do you want me to tell you how you can write without being childish if you didn't tell me earlier?

Tens of thousands of seeds can be planted in a large area

After a quick review, there are too few chapters! Not enough!

The vote has been cast, I like this type of black technology!

I vote for you. Another step forward on the road to becoming a god. Keep my vote for more updates.

Very well written. Although there is no villain yet. I hope there won't be a situation where the villain's IQ is not online