Super Pirated Disc

I have only read the first chapter. The protagonist is worthy of being the protagonist. Even such nonsense as finding a job and having a fight will be investigated by the company. In addition, the protagonist's father must not be his biological father. It must not be the case. Young people are jealous and fight. After being imprisoned for half a month, the father-son relationship must be severed. Is the protagonist's father really not Lao Wang next door? Hey, it is definitely his father who just found out that his mother has an indescribable relationship with Lao Wang and just let him go.

I don't know what the protagonist is doing in the painting, watching a movie? Let the monster kill people at will, and just watch on the side, (haha) I still feel that the monster is good (Xiao Wei is not bad at heart, haha) She is pitiful, but what about those who were killed by her accomplices? Aren't they pitiful? They are human beings and are of the same race as the protagonist. If you can help, just help. I just don't understand. Why don't you help even though you are capable? Could it be that as one becomes more powerful, one starts to look down on civilians?

Looking at the update, 90% of the time he is a eunuch. After raising it for so long, it's all on the shelves and I can't even keep up one update...

When I read the first chapter, it was because of a certain pretty girl in school, and then she was expelled or something like that. Now I feel super disgusted, so I just skipped it. Now this kind of plot is too vulgar.

It must be a eunuch, the power system in the book is completely chaotic. Isn't it ridiculous to learn Chinese martial arts after going to Fengyun? It means that when I sat down to write, I didn't even have an outline planned.

What's the greatest power you can get by traveling to Painted Skin? I think I changed my skin with Xiao Wei and became a monster myself.

The first chapter is toxic and too cliche.

Is the protagonist's halo cheating? He managed to escape the pursuit of Prince Xia's Mansion so easily. How could he have been in power for hundreds of years? A skinny camel is bigger than a horse! What's even more speechless is that the protagonist actually kills Huo Qilin without being born. If Huo Qilin could be killed by jumping into its mouth, Huo Qilin would have died long ago. The fire unicorn can breathe fire! 😅

Can we write with some sense and logic? Why is the protagonist still in Qilin Cave after taking the things? Instead of leaving quickly? Don't you know that Fire Qilin is dangerous? Do you have to wait until the fire unicorn comes out to fight? Not to mention that the acquisition of Xuanwu true power is quite abnormal. Just saying that after getting it, still practicing in Qilin Cave is not what people with normal IQs should do. When you get it, you should leave quickly. There is a mirror to explore the way, so you can wait at the door. Also easy to run.

Like this book very much. The author should ignore those who love BB first. Follow your heart and write well. I've only heard some people say that other people's writings are so capable, so why don't you guys, who love BB first, write a book too? Dry

I was thinking, the protagonist has already killed the fire unicorn, why not eat it?