Naruto Dark Dawn

I found it quite boring. I had read the previous article and it was well written. But when I saw so many people making unreasonable comments, I became cynical. I didn't expect that these people would not be reasonable with you at all. They talked about your reproductive organs and your parents and ancestors. Actually, I rarely read novels, but I also know that reading costs money, so I just ordered them all as a small support to the author. I don't know what's going on with our country. The quality of the people has not improved much over the years. Why are they so confident in having prostitutes for free? It's a bit cold, so be it.

Very nice (compared to other Naruto fics). And the guy who said he was trying to persuade him to quit in Chapter 8 has a bad mind.

I have never understood why knowing the plot is the biggest cheat... In a world like Naruto, just knowing the plot is useless.

Knowing the plot during time travel is a huge golden finger. As an old white guy like me, I still like the author's current plot. Don't listen to those people's nonsense. If you know the plot and it's already a movie, what's the point of watching it? What other sense of substitution is there! Unless there is Jin Yong's writing power, Zhang Wuji will reach the full level before he is twenty years old, and the rest will be driven by various plots, but in my opinion, there is probably no Jin Yong in the entire online literary world.

I really don't know how to survive without cheats in the world of Naruto. I know the plot and my future. Then, when someone said to find Orochimaru, I accepted it. You just know the future and have no other effect. Orochimaru can only give you the Earth Curse Seal, so what else can you do. Rain Ninja Village, a small village, has no ninjutsu teachings, so you have to rely on yourself? Without the Sharingan, the Chidori can't do it. It can only use a Rasengan, or it can only be in the hand. How can you beat others? In the later stage, you can survive. Then, you will fight more with others. When you are saved, isn't it a dream to write the protagonist to save the world?

In the later stage, I was very inconsistent. I said that my talent was not good, and then I opened all the eight gates and learned the immortal mode at will. If your talent is really bad, you won't be able to learn it even if you are given ten thousand years. Talent cannot be made up for by hard work. I would rather the protagonist be a wise man.

Want to dominate the ninja world without blood, cheats, or cheats? Know the plot? You still know the plot after you messed up the original plot? Without plug-ins, it is equivalent to starting from scratch and becoming the richest man in the world😊😊😊

I knew that the Anti-Japanese War was victorious, so I joined the army. I knew that I would win if we attacked Chang'an County, so I joined the war. However, a bullet killed me as soon as I entered the battlefield. The same goes for Naruto. You never know if you will die if you leave the village on a C-level mission. If you stay in Konoha, you will be suddenly picked up by spies and asked for information, or if Orochimaru will arrest you for human experiments. Without a golden finger, you might end up without graduation.

The first 30 chapters can be said to be a failure. The protagonist is completely like a supporting role, but Yahiko is like the protagonist

Are those who say that Naruto fights for blood ignore scientists like Orochimaru, Yakushi Kabuto, and Hirohu? Are I, Snake Einstein, Snake Dun, Snake Tear, and Snake Dickson just decorations?

The world of Naruto is a world that relies on blood and talent. The ceiling of ordinary people's strength is the third and fourth generations and Jiraiya. This is the limit that ordinary people can reach! So in the world of Naruto, there are no golden fingers, no special blood successors, just ordinary people who are familiar with the plot can't achieve great things even if they are talented!

The author shouldn't be a fan of Naruto, right? Fans all know that Naruto is a blood-fighting era. Is it so easy to be a ninja without anything?

To be honest, it's not a problem. How to survive in the ninja world? In the end, the Hokage is all about blood. Later Kakashi rented a Sharingan. Just look at the Second Hokage, the master of forbidden arts, but he can't beat Hashirama and Madara, and later on, he can't beat Sasuke and Naruto. The five shadows are considered top masters, but they are played by Madara. Looking at Li Renhua who Xiao Li has been practicing hard, he can see the Sharingan at a glance (lion bomb). Jiraiya must be awesome. He didn't lose to the cheating Nagato. If you work hard in other worlds, it will really be useful. Kai also relied on the Eight Gate Dunjia skill and his talent in physical skills.

Don't be ridiculous, author, the world of Naruto is all about fighting for father and blood. If you write about a commoner who doesn't have a golden finger, isn't it an abuse of the master? Anyone in Naruto who doesn't have bloodline or special physique is not cannon fodder and soy sauce (Eight Gate Dungeon is not something ordinary people can practice). When writing about Naruto fan fiction, you can't avoid all kinds of pupil magic and immortal body. To be honest, the world of Naruto is not suitable for civilians to relax, because the world of Naruto is always accompanied by struggle and death, and it is extremely cruel.

Japanese hot-blooded comics are impossible without plug-ins. Take a look at the three major hot-blooded comics. Naruto is the reincarnation of the son of the Sage of Six Paths. He comes with the infinite blue plug-in Nine Tails. In the final battle, Grandpa Six Paths personally blessed the Baff. Kurosaki Ichigo's parents are Shinigami and Quincy respectively. Even Zangetsu's sword spirit is the final boss friend. Habach's image also comes with a Xubai plug-in. He possesses the three mainstream powers of the world: Death, Quincy and Void. After a little training, he can become a captain-level spiritual pressure. Wang Lufei's father is the leader of the revolutionary army, the enemy of the world government. His grandfather is a hero of the navy. The leader is the red hair of the Yonko. Without the plug-in, he can only call 666.

This is the first Naruto novel I've read in one go without interruption, and it's very good! Those comments on the homepage are undoubtedly scumbag

I am still an ordinary person in time travel, so I will fight to the end and risk my life to make Infinite Tsukuyomi successful. What I can't get in reality and time travel, I must get in my dreams. I'm really convinced. In a world where blood is supreme, let's start with an ordinary person. I can't find a sense of immersion. I don't need to watch this subject at most.

I really can't stand it anymore. This protagonist is so rubbish. It's not that he's weak, it's that his talent is rubbish. Why did you write such rubbish? I was convinced, too, and I understand the ups and downs in the early stages. No matter who you choose, your talent is better than that of the protagonist. Let's not talk about strength. The protagonist only learned a ninjutsu in more than a month, half a month later than others. I'm convinced too, I really can't stand it anymore

It's quite funny, it was okay in the beginning, but not after Yahiko died. I don't even know what the combat power system is doing Can the Eight Gates Dai do the Nine Tails? In the original work, Hachimondai killed four of the seven people. If you want to put it this way, the seven people can also defeat the Kyuubi? Isn't this just funny?

I really should have blocked this chapter from the book circle when reading fandoms. I almost laughed to death after watching it for a while. Everyone was instructing the author on how to write and making comments. It was as if no one else had seen Naruto and only they understood it. Even a familiar plot can cause quarrels. It's really 666. I still have questions about why some of them are different from the original work. It's really the same. Brother, why don't you read the original work? Really stop showing off your IQ. I suggest that if you really want to read it, don't browse the comment section. Just take a look and close it immediately. I looked at it a few times and I'm not in the mood to read anymore.

"Although I'm sorry for those who may be affected, this is a life-and-death war after all."? ? ? In the early stage, the male protagonist clearly hated Hanzo for his actions that affected civilians during the battle, but when it was his turn to cause trouble, he thought so. Was the psychological change too fast?

Damn it, you, an ordinary person, tell me the plot in the world of Naruto? Do you think the ninjas in the Naruto world are ordinary people? In the world of Naruto, it's about blood. Without blood, you just know that the whole plot is useless. As an ordinary person, who gives you the courage to stand up to the ninja?

This book is really amazing. The protagonist travels to the world of Naruto. Although his previous life was in a peaceful era, he is still an adult. After many battles, you have no adaptability at all. You behave very mature and deep at every turn, with a dangerous and cold light in your eyes, and then you are taken care of by a six- or seven-year-old homeless aborigine with peace of mind? After so much experience, no growth at all? If you say that the protagonist's mind is not as good as that of a ten-year-old child, I will tolerate it, but you can't compare to a six- or seven-year-old child? As an adult, you have seen and been forced to participate in so many ninja battles, battlefields, and traps since time travel. You are not as vigilant as Yahiko, who is only six or seven years old and lives in a safe area and has never witnessed a battle?

From the end of the third battle, it has been a purely routine and enjoyable story. What avalanche destroyed the coalition forces, the god of the ninja world. . . The reason why I can continue reading is because there are no routines, pretense, slaps in the face, Long Aotian, harem and other factors. Except for the slightly depressing writing style, this is just a white paper. It's not really a "dark text". To summarize briefly, there is nothing the protagonist wants to do that cannot be accomplished. Including but not limited to defeating the tailed beast, annihilating all seven people, establishing the Sixth Ninja Village, recruiting one-of-a-kind technology masters such as Orochimaru Scorpion, stealing jinchuriki from various villages but the villages dare not fight back due to their prestige, and recruiting various bloodline limited families in crisis. . . This way of writing is very problematic.

Support! The best Naruto story I've ever read!

To refute those who say that blood is king, the protagonist opens a shadow clone to practice kaika. He relied on Nagato's chakra to support him in the past, but he was able to survive without Nagato's chakra in the later stage. It's not a cool article. If you want to read a cool article, you can go, so as not to post something about the work later.

The author's combat power system is completely broken For example, Sasuke can open his eyes without stimulation, for example, Obito will only become blurred, for example, Bai Zetsu will fight as an ordinary ninja, and will not transform at all, for example, Hanzo is not strong in poison.

How should I put it? It was more realistic at the beginning. After all, everyone wants to be invincible after time travel, but it is really important to have a good background.

It's okay. I can watch it. I seem to have finished it on the website a long time ago. It fulfilled the fantasy of the Akatsuki organization. Unfortunately, this process is a bit sad. However, if Akatsuki is an ordinary person and has no cheats, it is basically for nothing.

I want to ask everyone, since the protagonist knew that Black Zetsu wanted to kill him, so he left Akatsuki, why did the protagonist create his own forces and be active in the ninja world? I thought the protagonist abandoned Konan and Nagato to become a lone ranger, but ended up creating a ninja village by himself. I don't understand. Isn't he afraid that Zetsu will discover his territory and be killed by the outside world? Anyway, I feel bad for Konan. The protagonist left without even explaining. Kyuubi Night had to intervene, but nothing changed. The Yondaime died without saying anything, and it may have made Hiruzen and Danzo suspicious in vain. Really 6