Afterlife from Scratch

Don't understand. The protagonist kills many times for no reason. Also a waste of time. Don't know what the author wants to express? Speechless.

If he just flirts with a woman and doesn't succeed, he will be sent to the front line, which is a very severe punishment.

When I saw a dying man suddenly sitting up in the article, I laughed inexplicably. I just remembered that I had seen a very funny joke related to this poem before.

There is no harm without comparison. Being with this pair of C-level powerhouses, I suddenly felt that Ye Canglan was so weak.

There are only three of them. It's so miserable, the author. I still won't fall into the trap. I wish you the end

The author is quite careless, and there may be typos or omissions in some places. I hope readers will point them out and I will correct them one by one. The following format Wrong Chapter Error content

My imagination is limited, so I hope you can help me (you can also go underwater if I didn't expect it, I'm afraid no one will reply...) The following is the format Power name [Detailed introduction] Class

Again, if you have nothing to do, just come and have some water, it will be embarrassing if no one responds. The following format Person's name Settings

All kinds of sexy names are acceptable, and I hope everyone can participate. The following format [Fire Rat: F-level monster] [Weight: 272 kg] Shape: About 3 meters high, 2 meters long [Ability: Flame Armor, Charge] [Magic core: F level]

It will be released at 0:00 today (distributed at 05:00). I hope that friends who have always supported me can subscribe more (although it is only one chapter). This is also my first book to be on the shelves, and I have no experience writing books for the first time, but I have been really happy these past few days. No matter what the results are, I will finish writing these seven worlds. Thank you all for your continued support.

Ye Canglan is an F-level demon hunter. He came to Area C for the first time on the demon hunting battlefield. I didn't even have to think about it to understand how big the difference between C-level and F-level was. But there's one thing I still can't figure out. According to what the aunt said, Ye Canglan was brought here only by a C-level demon slayer, but we all know that Ye Canglan was brought here by the four men she had already killed. If it is what Auntie said, then the strength of these four men is at least C-level. No matter what, it is definitely better than Ye Canglan's F level. It would probably cost Ye Canglan his life to deal with one C-level one, let alone four of them! Then the question becomes, why did Ye Canglan kill four of them alone. And it's still close to an instant kill. Although there is an explanation in the novel, Ye Canglan thinks that those demon hunters who have one sister at a time are not very smart, but I think this reason is a bit too far-fetched. After all, they are still considered C-level demon hunters. No matter how smart they are, their strength is there, right? So I was thinking, is it possible that Ye Canglan got lost before and accidentally walked to Area F later? After reading carefully in the book, it seems that there is no such explanation. I think it is better to use the reason that those demon hunters are not smart enough to explain it as the reason that Ye Canglan got lost and wandered to area C. After all, it would be a bit unfair to lower the IQ of other demon hunters too much. Another problem is the opponent. It was said before that most of the opponents are demon hunters, but this C-level couple made the previously established idea that demon hunters are more powerful than World of Warcraft collapse instantly.

Hello author, I decided to write a long review to review your novel. As a writer who also loves writing, I will not discuss the plot of the story with you. I just want to talk about something that is relatively professional or unprofessional. As the saying goes, the authorities are confused and the beholder knows clearly. So, before I start commenting, I would like to state that all my comments do not contain any personal feelings, I will only talk about the good points and shortcomings that I see. I hope that the author will not have any emotional factors after reading this review. From the setting and introduction of your novel, I can easily feel what kind of novel you want to write. But have you ever noticed that when you were writing, you unknowingly deviated from your original ideas? It's like, I easily overlooked that this is a story where the main character dies once. So I want to ask you if you have a complete outline for this novel? A complete outline is very important to a novel. If you have a complete outline and write according to the outline unswervingly, then the entire novel will be the same as when you wrote it. If not, the novel would inevitably deviate from its original trajectory. Because when we are writing, we always come up with some interesting or good ideas, and then implant these ideas into the novel. As everyone knows, occasionally such ideas will not have much impact on the novel, but in the long run, the novel will definitely deviate from the original track. Another issue is the settings in your article. When I read your novel, I found that many settings appear suddenly in the text without much explanation. I feel that this has a great influence on the novel. Just like some other levels of things, which were not mentioned in the previous stories, but suddenly appeared later, and Ye Canglan seemed to understand them very well, which made people feel a little surprised. You know, you created this novel, and you know exactly what its entire setting is like. But as a reader, it's completely different. They don't know the content of the setting. So as the author, after you finish writing according to your own ideas, you feel that there are no problems and it goes smoothly. But I don't know that when such a plot falls into the eyes of readers, they will suddenly be confused. Perhaps the reader can understand the meaning of the previous setting from the subsequent plot, but this has already greatly affected the reader's reading experience. This is very detrimental to attracting readers of your novel. So I hope that next time a new setting comes out, I can explain it clearly immediately. It would be better if there is a foreshadowing for the more important settings. Okay, finally talk about your advantages. That's why I think you are very suitable for writing novels for publications. With your ability to control storylines and imagination, it's really better to try writing some short and medium novels and publish them in publications. After all, your style is very funny sometimes, but to be honest, your serious descriptions of military operations are quite enjoyable. Well, speaking of this, I feel that your funny style is also very good. You often make me laugh inadvertently, so I felt quite relaxed when reading this novel.