Plane Universe

The author is trying to pull out the wool of a sheep, and he is holding on to Devour the World, and he is writing about it. The whole book has more than 2,000 chapters, and most of them are about Devouring the World. Why don't you travel across the world? Why don't you go to some of the vast universes, such as the world that covers the sky, the world where the stars transform, or the prehistoric world? These worlds are no worse than Devour. You are simply treating Devouring World as the main world, and the main world as the sub-world, and vice versa. Most of the entire book is spent devouring the world, and 80% of the entire book is devoted to the protagonist devouring the world. How about it? 10% Is about Panlong, and the remaining 10% is about the world traveled through. Even if the main plot is to be written, it should be written in the main universe. This is simply an inversion. The main universe is written as a sub-universe, and Devouring becomes the main universe. There are too few plots in the main world now, incomparable to Devouring, and the proportion is seriously out of balance.

The more I write, the more stupid I become. There is no way you can contribute to the tribe regardless of anything without asking for anything in return. Don't forget that this is a world where strength is paramount! ! ! ! ! !

You've written to this extent, you don't know how to be a eunuch, right?

Fighting to break the sky, I just laughed, it was not interesting at all. Don't blame me for my low contribution. I didn't watch the part about Swallowing the Stars at all. I just watched the zombie part, and then I saw Dou Po, and I was confused, I like to copy everything.

I admit, Fighting the Panlong is very popular. But I think your book is written with some sci-fi characters in mind for the two words "plane", and the rest is basically all kinds of cultivation. I personally can't stand it. Any kind of cultivation and immortality is boring to look at.

I almost got poisoned to death after reading two chapters 🤫

Besides, your book is still classified as science fiction. Do you know how difficult it is to find a science fiction book? They are all practicing under the guise of science fiction.

After reading the introduction, you won't feel like you are reading a ** book. It is full of routines. The protagonist must have a halo of wisdom. The introduction is full of all kinds of weird routines. It's better not to read it. It hurts your eyes.

Panlong has been written for too long, when will I return to Devouring the Starry Sky?

When I see Cheng Buyun, I think of Bu Jingyun

The part about the dragon was skipped directly. I feel very sorry for the author, but I don't like watching it.

I just like to help the country become stronger when I have the strength. After all, you can travel through all the worlds, and any technique or technology from all the worlds will be of great help to the motherland. And the key is that this will not cause any loss to you, and you can also arrange your identity so that you can live without worries in the real world. What's wrong with this? I hate that some people only think they are superior to others when they have a system, and then they just throw away the motherland like trash.

Do you know why your author level is still level one? It's because the book you wrote is terrible. Readers say the book you wrote is terrible.

The further you go, the more confused you get. It can be seen that the author still has too little accumulation, and his knowledge of mechanical, electrical, scientific and physical life is too shallow. Many common-sense and logical funny things written by Xie Gongzi are all nonsense. Being stubborn does not mean having a low IQ. I guarantee that you will have a clear understanding after getting rid of the experience of a young master who worked in a KTV for a month. There are also praising the government's mindless contributions. Look at Lao She's works. I love my country, but who loves me? Go volunteer and experience the life of the poor people, and stop writing brainwashing articles in your articles.

It's too silly. Panlong only has 2 million words in total. The author is probably a Panlong fan who has written 3 million words.

I don't envy those who start a book with three million words and finish it perfectly, but I envy those who are still holding on after millions of words. They don't even know what they wrote but are still in the clouds. 😁

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You don't have the ability of a great god, but you are much better than a great god. Think about how miserable Emperor Ba and Yanbi Xiaosheng were scolded. You were not scolded because there were not many people who were too lazy to scold you.

Looking at chapters 12 and 13, the author doesn't understand thermal weapons and writes them to make people laugh. In the first few chapters of Biochemistry, I didn't fire a few shots, but after a few chapters, I became a master of guns. Please watch the light machine gun shooting instruction and operation videos before writing this kind of thing. In addition, for long-distance shooting of a sniper rifle, you need to calculate the factory accuracy error radius of the firearm in your hand, the impact of wind on the bullet during shooting, gravity... In addition, when shooting at enemies at different distances, these variables must be calculated repeatedly, and then the sights must be adjusted repeatedly. None of these people understand that it is difficult to shoot an enemy 500 meters away with a gun, and they still want to roll their names on the battlefield. Even today's professional shooters can't pretend to be like this when they go to the battlefield of World War II. Also, don't look at the online reports about killing enemies at more than 2,000 meters. These are all based on ignorance. The shooter can only guarantee that the center of the bullet's impact point is on the enemy, but the accuracy error of the bullet's impact point may be about 3 meters at most. Hitting someone is purely a matter of luck.

There is content, the author wrote it very carefully and checked a lot of information, but the writing style is too poor, the fan fiction is too frequent, there is too much vernacular, the description is vague, the characters are vague, and key moments are skipped. Explain all the way, but, but, and, if, for example, because, so, of course, then, explain in a loop, using inappropriate related words, which is a common problem among low-end writers. I feel tired when reading, the rhythm is repetitive, there is no novelty, the plot is slow, there is a lot of nonsense, and there is no focus.

I haven't read this book, but my current mentality is "It's better to read reviews than to read a book". Books nowadays are basically like this. Those who have good writing skills have no brains, and those who have brains have poor writing skills. Some simply have poor writing skills and are mentally retarded. There are really not many good books. To avoid the book shortage, you can only read books without using your brain😁 My personal opinion: According to the book of plane flow, it is possible to travel through other novel worlds, but don't substitute too much to obtain resources (These skills are also resources) That is the key point (Or a certain beautiful fairy? 🤭), everything else is secondary. The main world is the king. Once the plot deviates too far from the main world, it will be useless. Pig's feet can be stupid in the early stage, but they cannot be stupid in the middle and late stages. With the system, you can go to other worlds to obtain rare treasures that increase your comprehension, talent, and physique. There is a system that can help you fly, but you are still stupid as a pig and unwilling to make progress? Reincarnate as soon as possible.

All kinds of water since swallowing the stars. I don't know why, but I feel like the protagonist stares at Luo Feng all day long with nothing to do. Apart from eating, drinking and having sex, he spends the rest of the time staring at Luo Feng. It's really unbearable. Too licking. If you don't work hard and practice hard, following the plot all day long is no fun at all. So many previous worlds have passed, but the cultivation of internal strength has not changed. I never thought about improving the skills and creating skills, so I blinded the little red queen in my mind. The same goes for technology. I don't understand anything, and everything I research and create depends on artificial intelligence. Let's put it this way, the protagonist seems dispensable and can do nothing. Another person could have done better than the protagonist. I mentioned earlier that I have been cultivating my mind. Where has all this cultivation gone? I don't have a strong heart and rely too much on the system and external things. The reason why the protagonist is the protagonist must have some irreplaceable factors. However, the protagonist created in this book has no characteristics, and is even mediocre. The great thing is that appearance is an external object, not the protagonist himself. I hope the author can improve and stop following the plot characters and write something different.

How long have you been working on the Supreme Treasure? Can you still write well? If not, go to the main universe. If not, just write an ending. My starting coins are not bought with money. Wait two days and see. If it doesn't work, I won't play with you.

You talk about time travel, why do you stay in one place for so long? Generally speaking, one main universe can be written for a long time, and one or two hundred chapters of traveling through the sub-universe is enough.

Not to mention reading the comments, I couldn't stand it after reading nine chapters. I really don't like doing things in reality at all. It would be okay if I opened a company to engage in higher technology (don't go too far) to make money. The beginning of TM is to charge the system. A bunch of people watch the protagonist being surrounded by thunder and lightning, and then the time traveler disappears. Ha, so many people watch you disappear. After the conversation in Chapter 9, teleport directly to the leader? And they talked without even covering up. . . . . I want to say how naive and naive the protagonist must be to do such a thing.

I really don't understand why this kind of garbage can still be signed.

The chief is just the chief, and the eldest elder looks awkward.

There is nothing wrong with cooperating with the country, but you must have the strength to take the lead. Without that strength, you can't really cooperate, and you can only be annexed and plundered! ! !

You can teleport now, you can't grab anything, and you still cooperate.

Just read novels, why bother with JJYY