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The super body was literally written into a romance novel

Let me tell you why it sucks. The protagonist is usually a character assumed by the reader. Let me ask the author, if someone has read all your memories, you will not punish him? Forgive him instead? This is a slight abuse of the protagonist. Secondly, it is enough to write the Super Body World until the task is completed. Your next ten chapters are too procrastinating. There are countless good movies, do you want to die in this super body? There are also emotional scenes, which really made me feel awkward, and my writing skills really need to be practiced. This is my feeling as a reader. Trolls, please don't say things like "If you have the ability, write it." Thanks

I'll go, it's been two months and it's not interesting to see this.

I came here after reading the story of Foreskin and Leather Bag, which is like a breath of fresh air in the advertising industry. .

Author, your writing style is very good, but your writing is too slow. You can write seven or eight chapters into four or five chapters. You can also read the book Fantasy World Time Travel to see how it is written.

The author still has good writing skills, but the story is not told well. He can end the super-body story as soon as possible and start a new journey.

I came in after seeing the advertisement. To be honest, the author's story telling is still good, but the story is not very attractive. It is not as attractive as the advertisement about the little girl. I will save it for now and see what the next story is like after the super body.

Who came here after seeing that foreskin ah bah leather bag advertisement?