Martial Arts Stories

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With all due respect... Six thousand ordinary people can blow up Huang Yaoshi (ಡωಡ) and then be reborn, sharing martial arts together 🙂

The author is very serious in writing the book. The title of the book is about online game deeds and has a martial arts flavor. The disputes in the rivers and lakes and the grudges are well grasped. Especially the author himself seriously responds to the readers' comments. He is really sincere and thoughtful in doing it. I am looking forward to the development of this book. I have read more than 200 chapters so far, and I sincerely offer two suggestions or reflections. 1. Martial arts characteristic system. What the protagonist has learned is complicated, the original description of the fighting scenes is lackluster, and the protagonist's martial arts system is even more chaotic. In that case, why not specialize? Even Guangbo has to have a strong point, Ye Gucheng flies out of the sky, Qiao Feng subdues the dragon with eighteen palms, old naughty boys fight each other, the protagonist's martial arts features cannot be said to be absent, but they have characteristics but no special effects. The beauty of martial arts is not visible in the fight. The protagonist originally has a blue sea, a water forest fast sword, a Yang-headed magic knife, and falls into a trap after a duel on the top of the Forbidden City. The protagonist has no special effects. The pornography and martial arts are messed up, and it's actually all the fault of the Great Bei Fu. I originally expected the protagonist to get new skills to improve his shortcomings, but in this book there are several martial arts. Without making a choice, the original ones are not at their peak, and the new ones are rushed out, making people wonder where the protagonist is strong. In the final analysis, the author has a problem with the character setting in advance, and this is highlighted. A character who excels in one area will be more distinctive than others. For example, the protagonist is set to specialize in swordsmanship in the early stage. Later in the plot, the Dayuan arsenal integrates hundreds of swordsmen, then it is logical to become a master of swordsmanship. If you want to enrich it, you can write the protagonist's three skills, Qinggong, swordsmanship, and palm skills. The result of not making a choice in martial arts is that it is not outstanding. In Dayuan Arsenal, it is an opportunity to further integrate the characters. However, because they don't know how to express it, they let go of this description opportunity. The readers do not know where the protagonist is strong, and the definition of strength is blurred. Unless the protagonist is killed later, what will the masters use to fight? The space is limited and I can only choose a few. Why don't you say no to so many other unique skills? Readers are equally dissatisfied. Second, the character setting is off track and the strategy is a shortcoming. The author wants to set the protagonist as an image of Mei Changsu, who is outstanding in martial arts. I personally feel that it is very interesting. However, since you have set the protagonist to be unsociable in the early stage, even if the personal personality changes in the game and reality, it cannot be said that he will instantly become an image of a wise man who can easily move among the major power bosses. The initial image setting with poor emotional intelligence does not make sense. It is better to set it as a lack of emotion instead of a social disorder. Not only is the image transformation abrupt, but strategies and strategies are really flawed. Author, to be honest, this aspect is not suitable for you, at least now you can't control it. If you write about side-by-side flow, some problems can be simple and crude, but when you write strategies, you have to be meticulous and meticulous to the extreme. You must know that Xiongba Zhao Min and others are the best among the best. The most important point is that the planning and layout, no matter how subtle, must be logically self-consistent. The strategy is to connect the details that no one pays attention to, plus bold speculations that are consistent with the character's personality and identity, and cannot be imagined out of thin air. Although the book repeatedly explains, some of the calculations are really nonsense. Based on the known content, the only outcome predicted by the protagonist cannot be deduced. The protagonist is not called a strategy, that is called a prophet, especially when the emperor is calculating and saying that the emperor is generous, that is compilation. The author should know that feudal society Yes, it is impossible for any monarch to allow a small person to plot against him or guess about himself. It would be a death penalty to speculate on one's true intentions, let alone scheming. Neither is it possible for the wise monarchs in history. It is difficult to beat around the bush, let alone say it directly to the face. The coffin boards of the ancient emperors could not hold it down? A talent must be able to control it. Who taught the author to set up a highly realistic game environment? I was quite looking forward to seeing the emperor give me advice the second time, but I was extremely disappointed after reading it (several of the policies are full of flaws and crude and simple logic, especially the one about severe punishment. I suspect that you, the author, have brought your subjective emotions into it. Corporal punishment was abolished in the Han Dynasty. It is called torture to kill people. It is extremely cruel. Rulers have always known that punishment should not be used lightly. In the past, it was even more difficult to punish a doctor. Zhu Yuanzhang was the founding emperor, so he killed and killed regardless of the severity. The result was that the country's official system was incomplete for a long time. The old man was so powerful that he took over all the government affairs of the country by himself. But future generations will not be able to bear the workload. This is how the cabinet came, so first of all, your punishment is not Distinguishing priorities is simply a retrograde step in history. This is what slave societies do. Secondly, politics is about compromise and coordination. Even if you are not greedy, you will harm others. The king and his ministers should respect each other and govern the world. You disrespect officials, do not follow the law in sentencing, and kill cruelly. Officials are alienated from morality, let alone how to govern the world. The killing of officials is not considered cruel and the common people applaud it. Are you saying that the emperor is actively engaging in class antagonism? The emperor and the officials are both representatives of the landlord class. Or are the common people going crazy and watching torture and killing people? How can the common people not doubt the emperor's use of people to govern when they watch them? The emperor summoned Mu Xiaojiu to have a deep talk all night, and then returned at dawn, Long Yan was overjoyed, and he was entrusted with an important task.), So if the author is not good at it, don't get too involved in this aspect. Take a quick supplementary course and read outstanding historical novels to learn some basic routines. Be patient and learn game theory and political science. You still need to have a sense of responsibility when writing. If you can't bring in subjective emotions, don't bring them in. It will affect the reading experience and spread negative energy. You still have to be objective and check the information. Finally, I don't know how other people understand the word "evil" as the character label. Anyway, my understanding is as an analogy. When I saw the refugee turmoil, the author brought a very strong subjective intention. The author's method is not "evil". I understand it to be like this. The protagonist kills with one knife and then quietly asks who else has an opinion or just kills all of them. Instead of saying so many messy words, thinking about so many messy problems, or explaining to others, in a sense, the reason why Dongxie is evil is not only that he acts both rightly and wrongly, but also that he often does what he wants and does not care what others think, but has a set of self-consistent logic for his actions. This is in line with evil. People with a clear conscience will naturally not think of explanations. Come on, author, newcomers are very sincere in writing books. I have been a bookworm for more than ten years. I have been reading pirated copies since I was in middle school. I have really liked martial arts since I was a child. I am very happy to see this book. I have said so much. I apologize if I offend you. Maybe some issues will be changed later. I am biased. I apologize in advance. I will support this book until it is completed. At the same time, I am particularly looking forward to the next book being better after the author accumulates experience.

I feel that the protagonist is not suitable to join the so-called gang. I know that the author wants to make this book more perfect. Unfortunately, the protagonist's character has been determined, and the so-called Xuanyuan Gang is really not suitable for the protagonist. If a gang member does not save him and still questions the protagonist, this is the so-called friendship. I guarantee that it will fall apart in the end, so I advise the author not to Touching those things and this book are fine now, but in the future, I don't want to be written down; of course, it is also possible to write about gangs, but you can let the protagonist build his own gang to play. Joining other people's gangs is simply a test, and there are many more enemies. In fact, there is no need for that. To be precise, it feels like pretending to be 13 but being fucked instead, anticlimactic.

It's so deceptive. I thought it was a martial arts novel, but it turns out it's a game. I don't know if it should be based on reality. After reading one or two chapters I feel like I have no appetite.

Join Peach Blossom Island to get a disability certificate. . . The author's conscience is greatly damaged. . . .

It's not about online games, it's about martial arts! That's it! The flavor of conspiracy is too strong, very ancient! Now, the conversation doesn't feel like playing an online game at all...

The author has opened a new drama-type martial arts online game novel😄

I couldn't stand the first chapter. How could you be the only player at the beginning of an online game when there should be a lot of players around you?

When I saw the Tathagata Divine Palm, I just wanted to say a few words. You must have been too poisoned by Kung Fu! Where is this kind of martial arts!

Just use wild ball punch at the beginning, you can use it until the end

Emmmm, I suddenly realized that I haven't read this book for a long time, and I forgot where I saw it 😅, but I felt pretty good when I read it, and there are so few online martial arts novels available now, which is really a pity

Wow, there are more than a thousand chapters in the novel. The results are so bad that I don't dare to read further. But after reading two chapters, I feel it's okay. Is it poisonous at the end?

I just found this book from the sea of ​​books, and found that it has stopped updating 😭 I have a sentence mmb

I don't know what other people think. To me, this book is very good. It has a martial arts flavor.

It feels like there are too many people. It seems like the beginning of Chapter 6 starts with 5 versus 1. Judging from the author's description, nearly 100,000 people went to Wudang at the beginning of the game, and a guild was an army. How can we be invincible, how can we grudge each other easily, how can we fight one against a thousand? In reality, it is a crime for hundreds of people to gather and cause trouble. I wonder if there is any limit on the number of people. Only national wars have an army. Now there are 7,000 people on any Peach Blossom Island. This is not the martial arts in my heart, nor is it the Jianghu in my heart.

A game friend's masterpiece, but now I'm told he's writing a book. But he didn't plan to write me in 😢

The writing is okay, but the characterization of the characters... Is really scummy, trying to be poetic but falling into a cliché. The fighting aspect is also okay. As for the logic, I feel that the author is a bit unstable, but don't hold your pen down, otherwise it will be bad if the writing collapses. Overall it's okay, just for relieving boredom.

It's crazy to lose chapters, and it's crazy to lose characters.

Author, are you talking about urban writing? After reading more than a dozen chapters of the game, there are only five or six chapters.

I just saw 42... When will the protagonist's problem of being distracted in battle be cured...

One question, this is a game, not a real world. It would be okay if you talk to NPCs in an ancient style. All players say so. It doesn't exist. It's a huge incongruity in a game article.

Is martial arts actually practiced in the game, or is it displayed by the data system?

If the player dies, the NPC should no longer know the player. Otherwise, if he dies, he will go find the master.

Why does the strength ranking look so wrong? Is it actual combat or internal strength and external strength? Can anyone explain it?

Actually there is a question: when the player goes offline, is the character in an invincible state or something?

It's a very good book, but not many insist on writing about martial arts. The first few chapters are a little bit toxic, but the later chapters are much better. It's quite comfortable to watch. I wonder if it would be better if there were less real-world plots.

I've only read more than 150 chapters, and I'd like to ask if Huang Rong is related to the protagonist later on. Are they lovers? I'd better continue to follow Guo Jing

Jin Yong's heroes, right? Or put all the story plot before the novel plot begins. I remember that the plot of "The Condor" started in a small village, when Guo Jing and Yang Kang were just born, and "The Condor" started when Yang Guo was a few years old and was working as a gangster. So here comes the question k. According to the game time process, is Yang Guo, Yang Kang's son, how much older than his father?

I don't know why you wrote about the players' gang? ? Simply poisonous