People in the Heavens Counterattack and Become Emperors

There are too many typos, and they are not corrected even after they are said. And some plots are really just witty, and the main characters are missing!

In fact, I have always had a question about this kind of multi-part novel, who is the main character? You can't just write this and that at the same time, right? It's almost like a group portrait article. Most authors don't have that kind of writing style. Moreover, if you have multiple points, they will definitely be integrated and unified later. So who is in charge?

Avatars of the Zhetian World can also join sects and practice martial arts on the earth. There are still many sects on the earth, such as Lingbao Sect and Longhu Mountain. In fact, they all have real sects that can be learned. However, the level of the master is not high. They only have dragon transformation. There is no need to learn the Huashan Kung Fu. Once you are rich and powerful, it will be easy to contact them.

It started off okay, but there were too many typos and garbled sentences in the end. I can only say that it was creative, but other words are hard to describe.

The front is okay, but the back is all single-player. What about the plot? What about Ning Zhongze? Where's the white snake?

How can we need so many resources after level four? Especially after arriving in Sendai. When you reach the fourth level of the Secret Realm Dharma, you begin to realize the Tao and seek a few bodies within the Great Way of the Outer World. The first few secret realms require some resources to lay the foundation, otherwise we will have to create the secret realm method of Shenma.

The author's various surnames are a bit convoluted. It would be better to add Buqun to the world name or just have different names. Otherwise it will look uncomfortable.

Navy, tell me, how much did you charge?

Brother, don't give me the feeling that I'm watching a pirated version. Pay more attention to typos.

Hope not to be a eunuch

For this kind of subject matter, it is best to only write about personal cultivation and the original plots of each world. Because modernization and development in a backward era is a huge project, and there are too many details that need to be paid attention to. At present, there are many problems and it does not match the subject matter. With this subject matter, the more detailed the content of modern farming is written, the more it deviates from the subject. If you continue to write in such a way that you can see the problem at a glance, the more you write, the lower the reader's evaluation will be. To put it simply, this kind of plot is a thankless type in this genre. If the writing is good, it will deviate from the topic, and if the writing is not good, it will be even worse. Therefore, I suggest focusing on the plot of the original work and the cultivation life of each person, and not writing about modern farming.

There are a lot of typos. The author will sort them out when he has time.

I don't want to eat it, I've been struggling for about 10 chapters, can you please be more watery?

Is the author a eunuch? I've ordered them all.