American Comic Energy Controller

Author, I would like to make some serious suggestions. I wonder if you have considered this question, regarding the growth of the protagonist. To be honest, the protagonist in your novel has always given me the feeling of a little person, full of YY, and a bit of a villain. I think you probably wanted to write a mean character, but people will grow. For a modern young Chinese to travel to the First World War or even before, the world at that time was completely different from the world he knew, so unless there is something wrong with his brain, his outlook on life will inevitably be impacted, and his personality will even change if he survives for a long time. In this way, the characters will be very distinct, and even if the vision of your story is very narrow, the background of your world will be very rich. I know that these will require a lot of personal writing skills, but this is a great growth for your personal writing style. You can try to add growth factors, let the protagonist go through hardships, and see the world under World War I. Of course, you must check the information on this. If you can coordinate the above... I will recommend it to you on the homepage. Pure reader