Abandoned Paradise

I have read this book about once. It tells the story of a girl who, guided by a dream, embarks on a journey to find the place in her dream, and meets a group of friends by the way. The relationship between everyone becomes deeper and deeper through the experience, and each character also grows through the hardships, becoming stronger and more mature. The story of finally discovering the truth about the world, unlocking the shackles of fate, and defeating the big devil (my guess) The story is relatively light-hearted. Although it is a bit like a light novel, it will never appear to be a chuuniu passion or anything like that. The plot is also handled relatively well, and there are no logical flaws (reasonable logic is very important, and it is good that there are no obvious poisonous points). The author's writing style is also okay. He is not a novice and does not look like a primary school student's composition. The descriptions are relatively delicate, but there are still areas that need improvement. The descriptions of each character are also relatively clear, but the characteristics are not particularly outstanding, and it is not easy to remember at first (maybe there are not too many characters on the scene, and there are not too many supporting characters, so it is not too difficult to have an impression of the characters). If the descriptions of the various characters' behaviors were more prominent, the characters would be more vivid and people would remember them the first time they watch it. Moreover, the author is still a newcomer and works harder than others. After all, I have rarely seen many authors who write author's remarks in every chapter. The attitude is diligent and sincere. From this, it seems that the quality of this book is still guaranteed (it should not be possible to enter the palace) Writing a novel is to share your own story, and reading a novel is to appreciate the imaginary world of others. As long as the author works hard and the writing is acceptable, and the plot has characteristics and no flaws, this novel is already worth reading. There must be something you like about the story and world described (it is good if it is not ruined)

I have been keeping it, this time I downloaded the app to take a look, and found that there was an introduction to the protagonist, so I clicked on it... A girl with a slim figure but plump breasts... I am very curious if the music box is a pair of A's, I can't afford it...

Emm, too lazy to come back after cramping. As expected, Western Fantasy is the best, and the music box is the best. I just got a QQ account, I can probably join the group soon The sorrow of primitive people...

The box is so miserable, and the rating is only two stars. .

A very good novel, I will finish it during the summer vacation

If anyone doesn't like it, I'll blow them up and kill them (ｰ̀дｰ́)

Someone is watching, you just have to hang in there.

I accidentally remembered "Minecraft Unknown Mode" that I watched in junior high school. Seven or eight years have passed. I searched everywhere on various platforms and finally found this place 😢

The direction of the Music Box novel is becoming increasingly unpredictable... The latest chapters are completely unexpected. Looking forward to the future plot development ...... It should be almost finished... Above, 2019-03-18

The author's "Unknown Pattern" should be considered the starting point for my pursuit of books. Sentimental...

500,000 Words are not on the shelves, why?

To support the sound (ฅ>ω<*ฅ)

What an amazing book. I admire it.

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