Deconstructing Another World

Don't be afraid of interruptions, but the quality must be high. I finished The Amber Sword Next Door from high school until I graduated from college. I took half a year off in between. Go back and sort out the outline, calm down and think about it. I believe you have great potential. At the very least, your writing skills are excellent and you are better than most writers. What's missing is some patience and a story that's rigorous enough and good enough. Your characters are really well drawn, making them feel flesh and blood. This is very important and even a watershed in online writing. Unlike some authors who make me feel that the supporting character is just a name, this is what a good online writing must have. Secondly, the villain's IQ must be online. You wrote it very well before. A writer should have his own fixed style. He should not be too influenced by the comment section and should not change his style easily.

I'm here to make a splash and ask for attention!

This conflict might as well be said to be behind the cold-blooded

As usual, come and cheer up and throw in your tickets!

I'm pretty sure I read that Levi's diary, he is indeed single XD Levi: "Come out, I promise you won't die"

A very long work must have some flaws, but you can't abandon the entire work just because of a few flaws. The author needs to be more relaxed.

Your transformation is so mindless! What's going on? Why did it suddenly become like this in the third volume? What was the previous one? A eunuch? It's not like the same novel at all, not even unlimited streaming...

Is it really that Levi? I was just talking nonsense before.

When I saw "four women" written on it, I suddenly felt so panicked (yellow)

The recommended accumulation is 9920, which is almost 1W.

After reading the introduction, I thought, "Oh, I'm leaving."

The collection of second-hand players is concentrated. Speaking of Loach, what kind of world background do you want for your supporting role? The previous batch of old readers are the DND backgrounds with combat effectiveness violations.

The new story is full of scientific discussions one second, and all kinds of monsters and pythons the next. It's really too dramatic and not science fiction. It seems that Star Wars can only be called a space opera now, not science fiction. It's really not as good as the previous magical stories. In fact, I think the author's problem is that the settings were not clear at the beginning and a lot of settings were added in the middle, which caused the combat power to collapse. The world view later became too complicated and he let himself go too much, so he had to keep adding new things. The settings of a good novel are just the tip of the iceberg, such as A Song of Ice and Fire. The author's writing method is not limited to setting settings. Limiting the perspective and limiting the amount of information are also very important methods. A Song of Ice and Fire never tells you that it is actually the world of Trisolaris. Westeros in the context of the world of High Demon is just a small broken island. Just like Britain in the Middle Ages, it was a remote country, and Lovecraft's Cthulhu never explained the story clearly. The novel is not a movie, and there is no need to explain everything clearly. Readers only need to know what they need to know. Good magic requires imagination and real and delicate details, and of course the depth of character portrayal, not the setting. I actually really liked this novel, but after reading it for a long time, I fell out of favor. It reminded me of another restricted-rated novel, Doomsday Syndrome, which also had a supernatural combat setting and ended with a collapse of the worldview. It was directly rewritten as a science fiction novel (but it's almost 10 million words long). I was also speechless. Let's talk about the advantages of this novel (the author). The scientific literacy is relatively rigorous. It is not a serious talk about scientific logic. The settings are all thought up by myself. It does not fall into the clichés and can make people curious about the world. Since I have to rewrite it, I'd better start from scratch as soon as possible. I got tired of this science fiction story after a few chapters. Science fiction and magic are written in different ways, and not many people in China like it. When writing about magic, just write about magic. The small adventures of small people, write about the customs and life, and slowly reveal the history and world. It's the legendary level of gods and demons. Who's to blame if it collapses? There is a comic about how to kill goblins, and another about how to make some food in a maze. They are comics with small settings but good feeling. The author can read them.

The supporting characters currently being recruited are people from the earth who were sucked into this planet (its name is Yi Xing) by a certain force. Divided into two types, namely old people and new people. Name: Identity and occupation (such as student, soldier, etc.): Character traits: Appearance: Strength (if you are an old man, you need this one): (Currently there are only two options, middle level or bottom level. If you choose the middle level, you may become cannon fodder. If you choose the bottom level, you may be easily absorbed into the protagonist's team)

Lagrusha, the abandoned evil magic sword, was once an evil magic sword that frightened the world. It was made with the blood and soul sacrifices of thousands of people. It absorbed more than ten thousand resentful souls and carried astonishing shadow power. The holder would be controlled by the resentment of the wronged souls in the sword, and then kill wildly. Eventually, it would be eroded by the shadow power, the body would die, and the soul would be sucked into the sword. However, this magic sword has only had three owners since it was made. The first was a soldier who sneaked up and killed the maker after the sword was successfully made. The second was a farmer who accidentally picked up the magic sword after the soldier died. The third was a horse bandit who was deep in the desert. When he picked up the sword, the horse bandit was already dying and died within a day. From then on, the magic sword was buried deep in the desert. After hundreds of years, the shadow energy gradually disappeared, and the soul in the sword gradually dissipated. The entire sword became an empty shell. If it were not made of special materials and buried deep in the desert, I am afraid that the shell would not be left. At this time, a mage accidentally dug it out and found that the sword contained magic power very well, so he kept it. After that, the mage and the enemy died together, and the soul was sucked into the sword. However, although the sword contained huge magic power, it could not move, so he could only spend a lonely hundred years in the cave, and then awakened the chatterbox attribute. 🤓🤓🤓The setting is like this, please let the author take over the role