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The author's writing style is very good in the fanfic, but can he be more normal in his views? I just can't stand the various intentional psychological portrayals of Harry at the beginning. Helping people is said by you to be pushy, and kindness becomes the shackles of the savior. You have to do it, and the character who becomes jealous after being helped also forcibly distorts the character. It's really too much to use the dark and realistic style to try to figure out the psychological drama of writing fan characters in children's literature 💔💔. I would be angry if I didn't say it.

Writing Harry is a waste of more than 300 chapters, and it doesn't look like a time-travel novel at all. You'd better copy the original work and show it to us.

It's really disgusting. Even if it is a movie version, the author should read it. There is no logic at all. Holding a Voldemort and mouthing a Dark Lord. Is this method of word count very clever? ? ?

I'm here to hack the author. The author is too dumb. Even 600 chapters can't be updated in a day. It's not enough to read.

I dare not read Harry Potter with more than 300 chapters.

The author gives you a suggestion. For example, the ending of the first volume of Harry Potter World is too bad. Everything else is good. I just feel that your ending is not good. Strengthen it and download it. The 2nd push will be sent in January. If you see it, please give it a thumbs up.

The first story proves that the author has not read Harry Potter. Before confirming the sorting, Malfoy had a good impression of Harry Potter and wanted to make friends with him. Your love and death in the carriage will make people think you are naive and do not understand the plot and characters. This kind of author who writes a hodgepodge but doesn't understand the hodgepodge of plots and characters he writes is really bad.

In Chapter 3, the author started licking Hermione before even seeing her, which made people feel extremely uncomfortable. I clearly know that a wand chooses its owner, but I just bought one at random. Has your system started to drift before you even stepped into school?

What does it mean that Holy Light and Dark Magic never distinguish each other? How is your system? Your profession is Holy Light Mage. It's better to be proficient in all series. In the first 3 chapters, he said he has no love for loli. Isn't that Hermione? Why don't you write emotional scenes? It's so embarrassing.

Last night, Shanshan was dragged by other authors to play cards all night, so today's update was delayed.

A Harry Potter has written 320 chapters, you are also a talent

Why wouldn't Hermione be allowed into Ravenclaw if he licked her like that? I just tried to follow the plot and make it look different from the original work, but in the end it ended up being nondescript and like a licking dog.

I tolerated licking Hermione in front of me, I also tolerated Malfoy who didn't like Harry from the beginning, I still tolerated Ron's appearance as poor Ron, I could tolerate it when the protagonist, the Forbidden Forest, beat Voldemort away, but Voldemort was no longer on the back of Quirrell's head, and Quirrell turned to ashes even after being touched by Harry. I couldn't bear it anymore, and Harry's blessing can only be useful to Voldemort. Doesn't the author know? Voldemort does not possess Quirrell, and Harry's blessing is of no use to Quirrell. Moreover, this author has been talking about the trajectory of destiny and the power of destiny. Why don't you watch Steins; Gate? There is an extra family that is not in the original book. The history is different, so why is your change missing?

To be honest, if you go to an American movie and you don't want to be a villain, you're going to be a dog.

Hermione has been mentioned in the first few chapters. When I received the Hogwarts admission notice, I wanted to meet Hermione. I went to Diagon Alley just to meet Hermione. I never talked about Hermione. It is really poisonous.

I saw it in the Dark Book List, and it turned out that Hermione appeared once in the first three lines of the review of Harry Potter. I felt really embarrassed, and I immediately told her to quit.

I have read about 50 chapters so far. How should I put it? There are too many personal things and prejudices mixed in, especially towards Harry and Ron. Is it necessary?

How much the author likes Hermione, it appears so many times in one chapter, I feel like I can't stand it

Brainless white article The author estimates that Harry Potter has not been studied carefully and there are many mistakes. And the three protagonists have all become the people the protagonists want to be. Brainless cool article I haven't read the follow-up yet, but I decided to quit because of the free chapter.

I have read it countless times, and each time it was because Harry Potter persuaded me to quit. I really have no love for it, and I have not watched a minute of the movie.

But it's too licking. I really like Hermione as the heroine, but if you lick like this, can anyone really stand it?

Picture 37, George and Fred are both hitters, shouldn't they be playing on the field? Do they all have avatar skills? Can you play on the court at the same time and also open betting off the court?

When I first entered the Internet literary circle, Hacker was the first novel I read I was only in the third grade at that time, and now I am about to take the college entrance examination I really like the book Hacker. I suddenly thought of you when I was writing the question I came to read it🌚🌚

I feel like I'm just acting silly without even watching Harry Potter.

I write one movie after another, but the protagonist is still a filler.

Recently, a friend recommended "Goodfellas" poisoned me to death 1. The male protagonist is too licking. 2. For the sake of hydrology, there are often a large number of unintentional descriptions of character names: For example, our savior is poor... So-and-so is repeatedly used 3. It can be viewed from the perspective of a domineering president: (After the protagonist Hermione joins the academy, she intends to In addition, she gained the love of the top dog-licking male partner Alvin (the protagonist of Time Traveler), and often received the help of the dog-licking boss during the adventure. The dog-licking boss (the protagonist) silently supported her, paid attention to her, and created top magic tools for her. This is the overbearing boss Wen You can change your name (Time Travel: Start as a dog-licking dog in Harry Potter)

Harry Potter was fine back then

Hp and Marvel,,,,,,, aren't the things they learned just like Sun Monkey's Seventy-two Transformations, which are heretical, and then,,,,

After reading a few chapters, I found that there were too many inconsistencies with the original work, so I didn't want to read it.

Not bad, not bad, self-recommended, Samsara Eye of All Heavens, multiple female protagonists, and has now entered the world of Inuyasha. There are some pictures to see