From Anchor to Main God

In fact, no matter what I say, the author's writing style is above the standard. Even if I am a novice, I cannot question this. The writing is for sure, but the plot is disgusting. Two books in which a god is the protagonist can turn the protagonist into a supporting character. Then it's not ruthless enough, not ruthless enough. As for writing about a god as the protagonist, the author did not do a good job. Don't keep talking about truth, goodness and beauty, and talk about being unfilial without parents. But no matter how much he says, this is a novel, and it is still a commercial novel. It has a stupid sister and too many irrelevant plots, which makes it not feel immersive. I believe that many readers want to strangle the sister in these two books. It is really a very poisonous description. If you want good grades, you can't just be satisfied with yourself. In today's commercial novels, no matter what category, the protagonists are rarely upright. For resources, for opportunities, for the possible avenue, they have all made sacrifices. Maybe it's killing, maybe it's fate, maybe it's the plot that advances and slowly adjusts. But there is no popular book where the protagonist will not kill when he still kills, and then forcefully enter the plot. I can give examples, such as Holy Ruins, The Lord of the World, Lord Snow Eagle, and even the currently serialized My Little People, Happy Dream Road, etc., There are a lot of examples. One book is not well written, the next one is improved, but readers don't like it, and then collapses in the later period. The next one is popular during the public period, but subscriptions are no longer good. This is a vicious cycle, and it is not a good thing for an author with commercial intentions. If you want to get good grades, you must write mainstream novels. No matter what subject matter you choose, the protagonist must have an IQ, the responsibility and tolerance of the protagonist, the awareness and sacrifice of the protagonist, and the loneliness and bloodshed in the pursuit of the road. Nowadays, the descriptions of women who are stallions, or who are unable to walk when they see beautiful women, who want to start a harem, or who are willing to cause trouble for themselves, have disgusted too many readers, especially the pampered younger sister and the inexplicable classmates (companions, parents, etc.). These plots are poisonous points.

Regarding author Jun Shao's decision to mention his sister, I learned that author Ji still reads book reviews. However, for some things that are difficult to agree on, such as whether the writing focuses on the first contractor of the protagonist or the advancement of the plot world, to be honest, some people like to watch the former and some prefer to watch the latter. I am of the opinion that as long as the author's plot arrangement is not blunt + interesting + not poisonous, any way I can write it will be fine. As for my sister. . I remember that in the last book (God's Clone), I also had a younger sister who was still going through all sorts of troubles and was extremely poisonous. Thinking about it now, I read most of the book God's Avatar before discarding it. There may be several reasons: ① Regarding the early identity arrangement of the heroine. I remember that she was married to a lazy and rotten man with a child. Although it was later cleared up, I really wanted to give up after watching it. The author, Ji, please give me some warning in advance or tell the truth directly when this happens again. ② Just let in the dragon from the magical world. The protagonist was very stable and planned before. As a result, when we got to this point, we let the dragon in, and then lost our consciousness due to some inexplicable feeling, and the dragon was lost. Then the dragon was nowhere to be found. In the end, it became a climate and almost killed the protagonist (forcibly thrilling is boring). Then the protagonist caught it and released the dragon because of another inexplicable feeling (it seemed to be related to his daughter, leaving her with a rival). It's too forceful and poisonous to me. ③I forgot about the third point, it's probably some kind of exile from another universe. I haven't read the later ones and can't remember them clearly. That's it. I hope the author Ji will work hard and write seriously. The author Ji's dialogue and actions on the country's handling of these matters are really fascinating. However, because these are wonderful and have a lot of words, I might be trying to make up the word count. I suggest the author Ji compress other unnecessary sentences (similar to "They took the elevator to the top floor. The so-called top floor is naturally not the top floor but the highest floor." I forgot which book I read two days ago. I imitated Gu Long and made up the word count at random. It's disgusting.). Refill. The author who is willing to work hard will not remain popular forever.

After reading more than two hundred pictures, I feel that the author is insulting everyone's IQ. After so many assessments, I feel that I have selected a group of sssbbb things that have no independent opinions, like to fight among themselves when encountering difficulties, and are ignorant and selfish.

I'll give you at least 200 recommendation votes every month. Please be more precise.

When that great, nameless and speechless being cast its sights on a certain loser on Earth, and turned his thoughts into reality, he conveniently took away his brain.

The theme is about the anchor, but he doesn't live broadcast seriously. He neglects the basics and builds a main god system, and personally leads the group to show off the plot. Escalate slowly under the rules you set. Your skills are too low. You are developing too slowly.

The novel is very creative, and the author writes it very carefully. It can be seen that the words and sentences have been carefully considered. However, after about fifty chapters, the behavior of the protagonist makes me more and more disgusted. I can't figure out why, so I can only retreat.

If you abandon your sister because of her, you have to write her as a fool, an arrogant and brainless sister. If you don't know how to write about your sister, don't write about her. You can write about a sister who is sensible, obedient, and caring about her brother. You sister is so stupid. Not poisoned by society

It's a nonsensical novel. I can't understand what the author is writing. I was confused as I read it and don't know what the author wants to express.

Good subject matter... Poor writing

No More Harem, No More Harem, No More Stallion, a wish from a book lover who has only read one chapter.

I'm not a keyboard warrior, but it's really uncomfortable to watch. I don't know what the author was thinking. He made the protagonist very stupid. He doesn't speak or act like an adult at all. There is no logic. It's all based on what he thinks. It's very baffling. There are more than 20 pictures of the idiot sister who completely persuades me to quit. If you don't know how to write about family, don't write. You can write about parents' sacrifice to heaven, which is better than this.

After reading more than 20 chapters, I stopped talking about small details and was not so rigorous. There was only one sentence that I wanted to ask while holding back my discomfort: "Is the protagonist really not afraid of death or pain, or is he just knowing that death will be okay in the fantasy world?"

What the author thinks. Live broadcasting in another world is your business alone, are you afraid that no one will watch? Knowing that there is danger, he also went to the scene where the lynx was let go. There is no system forcing you to follow the plot, you can just take your time and enjoy the "traffic". Are you crazy enough to take risks?

It is not recommended for newcomers to watch, because it is a mixture of all kinds of bloody scenes, and those who are not interested in the main god style do not need to contact it. The protagonist is indecisive, and he is always startled until the end of the article. I don't see what kind of state of mind he has cultivated. He is being plotted all day long. If it weren't for Gui Nitian, he would have thrown himself into the street. The younger sister is disgusting and pretentious, the apprentice goes crazy all day long, and everyone around him has character flaws. The author has such a creative mind, but none of his books have become popular because he only cares about his own pleasure. If this behind-the-scenes writing was as decisive as the protagonists written by Jing Keshou and Wen Chaogong, he would have accumulated a large number of fans long ago, instead of writing one after another.

Let's add a martial arts practitioner to the east side. You see, the west side has mages and knights, while the east side is all about cultivating immortals. Add an ordinary person who can also gain innate spiritual roots through training, and then choose to go on the path of cultivating immortals or martial arts! Dad, what do you think?

Why don't you write 40% instead of 99%? Wouldn't it be better to be a nanny 🙂🙂🙂

From the anchor to the main god, I thought it was a live broadcast that traveled through the infinite stream. The main god didn't see it, and the rest was boring and boring. All you traveled through was ancient times. What's the point of this?

Although the book is finished, I still want to make a complaint. Readers come here to see the story, not the setting. The author always wants to make the setting and logic of the story very detailed, but in the eyes of the readers, you are just filling in the water. The story is almost one hundred chapters and the progress of the story is not as advanced as ten chapters of others.

I write about the main character here and there, and sometimes I write about strangers A and B, which makes the novel fragmented, with a strong sense of fragmentation, and a lack of immersion. I especially like to take the camera away from the protagonist before the climax of the plot to write about other people. It's tiring, right? However, I don't like it, so I just skip large parts of the plot. The more I read, the less I want to read it. That's it.

Especially twenty or so Zhang exposed how the world came to be, which is very stupid. It is necessary to say this, but after saying it, there is no sense of expectation. You just pretend that you don't understand anything and you only know that the live broadcast is your golden finger. Then let people in real life help you make suggestions, and then give them some benefits. This way, they will feel a sense of participation, and they will not be able to give up after receiving the benefits. But what did you write?

Although the book "God's Avatar" has been sealed, I still want to say, it's really a piece of shit. Who do you like? Do you like a married woman? And she also has two children, and she also wants to marry her. The two of them have known each other for less than ten days, and they are about to get married.

Chapter 31 should be like this: "Disgusting Sister", forcibly persuade everyone to leave, and everyone should disperse.

Although the book was written a long time ago, I still want to give a warning to future brothers. This is a big book. The creativity is good, but the level is very poor. The protagonist is always thinking about interacting with the live broadcast room in the cannibal harem, and watching others being killed with sticks. Instead of being afraid, he actually thinks about eating human blood steamed buns. Moreover, the real plot is also confusing. As soon as he takes the enhancer, a beautiful woman appears. When he goes out to surf the Internet, he encounters gangsters.

Is there a book by the author that is missing?

The book Magic Changes the Earth is quite good, but why was it blocked? Plagiarism? I didn't see anything that looked like plagiarism except for the words "sequence potion"... I can't even stand the mystery.

I admire the author's efforts and feel a little distressed. I feel that the author should find opportunities to learn how to write "cool" articles and change the way he writes, so that more readers can read them. Otherwise, he will remain in the minority. In other aspects, I don't think there is anything bad about it. It's just not refreshing enough anyway.

The author is now updating 10,000 words a day. It reminds me of those writers in the past. At that time, all the routines we read were fresh and not picky. From the God of Creation game on earth to the fantasy of Oriental people using the Western cultivation system, during this period, there was the guy who stirred up troubles in the dream machine, and there were standards. The Long Aotian model was born (I personally feel that this is the earliest routine template, and then the harem party, the single-female party, the no-female party and the melon-eating mass party like me 😁 were born from this). Then Wubai rose and set the starting point, and the era of daily updates of ten thousand words gradually came to an end. . . In a blink of an eye, from primary school to work, from the pirate party to the genuine party, time flies like water The author is lucky. In the past, daily updates of 10,000 words were standard. Without it, he could not survive. The author is also unfortunate. Now he is facing more picky readers. Come on, author. Ps: These are just boring emotions. The logic and sentences are very confusing. If you don't like it, you can ignore it 🙂

The author's writing is great. I have always liked the author's books, and I read this book from Demonic Change of the Earth. I feel that the writing is very real and things develop in a normal and orderly manner. As a student party member, I would like to give you a little reward.

I saw that the contents of more than 20 chapters were extremely poisonous. I deliberately skipped chapter 20 and found out after chapter 30. The poison fell on the princess sick woman. . Is this necessary for the plot or are the women around the author poisonous? The author was contaminated.