American Weird Tales

One book is not as good as the other, and it feels good to hide the Tao.

Overall, the writing is really good. There are two things I don't like about it: it's invincible from the beginning, and the mother's heart is overflowing.

This,,, this is the end????🥵

The author knows that if you write about cultivating and becoming an immortal, you can actually write it in conjunction with other types of articles. For example, the magical cultivator cultivates immortality in the world of swords and magic; the Chinese historical immortal cultivator, as a cultivator in ancient times, communicated with historical celebrities, and even participated in the change of dynasties; the foreign historical immortal cultivator went to the European Middle Ages to bully the upright white people; Modern Chinese cultivation, this must be done well, after all, if you are not careful, you will get 404; science fiction cultivation, including apocalyptic mode and interstellar mode; what I have mentioned above has been written by someone, but, such as the background of primitive tribes, different worlds (martial arts world, virtual game world, high-tech world, ancient Chinese fantasy novels such as Liaozhai, etc., Modern times, etc.), The modes include preaching type (developing Taoism), Shinto type (being a god), transcendent type (game world), fighting monsters and upgrading, etc.

Starting from Dao Zang, the subsequent books have been in the United States. It is enough to write one book on this subject. It is useless to write more. It is like playing a game. It is time to change the map. Therefore, I think the fundamental reason for the author's failure after Dao Zang lies in this. I know it is easy to be harmonious when writing about China, but is it okay to jump out of the earth? You can go to another world to carry forward the essence of Taoism. Don't worry about those who upgrade and fight monsters, or it is equivalent to medieval Europe with a bit of mythology, or the homeland of high-tech alien civilization... These are all good backgrounds. How to set the storyline, you don't need to be taught. The so-called game fans, look forward to a good article with a new background! !

It is still the highest level of Taoism. It can be considered a new trend, but Weixia is much worse. If it weren't for Daozang, I wouldn't even collect it.

Chinese: I'll make the soy sauce. English: it's none of my business. I come to buy some sauce. German: ich bezogen, was ich kam zu einer soja-so? E. French: je lis ce qui, j'en suis arrival une sauce de soja. Dutch: ik gerelateerd wat, kwam ik tot een sojasaus. Russian: я,касающихся того, что я пришел к соевым соусом. Spanish: relacionados con lo que yo, me vino a un salsa de soja. Italian: i relativi cosa, sono venuto a una salsa di soia. Japanese: privy relationship したどのような, privy relationship. Greek: i σχετικ? ? τι ? ρθα σε μια σ? λτσα σ? για?.

Ah, it's over so soon? Not enough yet! Please tell me about the new book here, I will read it!

Domestic novels are just a bunch of pig opponents and easy-to-pick-up women.

The writing is good, but why do I not want to read it after reading it?

If the author wants to improve his performance, he may need a chance to be seen by more people.

First of all, I must affirm the author's writing skills and scene portrayal. Secondly, there are several problems in this book. The first is the portrayal of the protagonist. The supporting role is better than the protagonist. The protagonist himself has no personality and basically plays the role of show-off. As a reader, he cannot see the motivation for his actions or his thinking. It does not mean that he is a Taoist inaction, nor is he like Lu Zu. It is free and easy in the cognitive sense, but similar to a mechanical program. It only takes one step when the outside world gives a signal, and then stops again after taking this step. The action feels like it is verbal. Every time it is passive and waits for the plot to reach a dead end, it only relies on the protagonist to suddenly jump out and make a twist. It feels a bit like a deus ex machina. This is what several book reviews have said about the abrupt transition. The second is that the story is discrete. The previous story line was not consolidated, so the venue was abruptly changed. Some people say that this is a copy-style chapter-turn feature. I just want to say that the author can refer to the early letters and the current eyeballs. The protagonist is the unchanging core. The story advances the protagonist's changes, rather than writing a travel diary. You can't always think about competing with Tomato Three, right? The third is the inconsistent feeling of power fluctuating at any time. This is not obvious, but I still hope that the author can not forcefully drag out the scene, and he will die. Finally, I can't stand the typos.

I suddenly came across this book these days. It's really interesting. I'm looking forward to the author's next work.

Come as usual to check in and cheer up!

As for new books, hurry up and open a new book. Two books in a row hit the streets. If you don't hurry up and open a new book, your popularity will disappear. Write a book to practice Taoism and live in Hollywood and promote girls.

I have always been following Banxian's books, but the failure of this book does not mean it is bad. At least Banxian's description of foreign countries is great and has a very foreign flavor. The characterization is very profound, and each character has distinct characteristics. I like Banxian's description of the characters' movements the most, it's very graphic. I hope the half-immortal can persevere.

I got the wrong name and was so embarrassed that I got cancer 😅

It was pretty good at first, but then I didn't know what to write!

Even though you are capable of helping others, you say things to others that are incomprehensible to them. How could an ordinary person believe the incomprehensible words of a pig's trotter. It can also be called a beautiful name. I gave him a chance and stuff like that. It's up to him whether he can grasp it! Oh, you are so pretentious! It feels very well done!

The more I write, the more I regress. The more I write, the less I like reading it.

As usual, I'm here to check in and cheer up the half-immortal!

Still not as messy as Greek mythology…

The writing is quite good, but if the plot were returned to China, it would be even more confusing.

71 73 76 Chapters missing

Now it's okay to treat the symptoms rather than the root cause.

In The Bear: Rebirth, the guy is bald and strong, and he looks great.

The novel is quite good, but it feels like the progress is a bit slow, or dragging. I read it twice before I really finished it. Sometimes I even skip chapters because I can already guess the general situation.

Banxian, keep up the good work and support as always

Tao Zang is the best book to read. It is true that each book is a step down from the previous one, but it can still be written well. Just get back to the level of Tao Zang. I really didn't read much of this Tao Zang book.

It's really annoying when foreigners talk, oh! Honey, hey man, oh my god