Naruto's Supreme Being

Abandoned, Uzumaki Naruto can't watch without destroying Konoha. The purpose of writing a fanfic is to make up for the regrets of the original work. Also, unlike the original work, Naruto in the original work is not called a hero, but a chess piece and a weapon. The three generations of brainwashing were very successful. The reality is that I have been bullied for so many years. No matter who it is! Even if his parents treated him like this, he would kill them if they didn't pay attention if he had a knife in his hand. The novel does not need a Madonna. We don't need a hero, we just want a living Naruto with blood and tears, not a brainwashed Naruto. As the old saying goes, repay kindness with kindness and revenge with hatred! . If this cannot be accomplished! Then the author will stop writing. I will only say one sentence. I just want a living Naruto.

Nowadays, there are many people who have no self-awareness and just write whatever they want. They write when they see other people writing novels and make money. They write without thinking at all. They just write whatever they think. They dare to write an outline of a hundred words, and they write without bothering to save the manuscript. As a result, they write a lot of disgusting things, which makes me search for a long time to find a good novel! As for the book review area, it is originally written and posted online just for others to read. Readers who read the parts they find disgusting still give you face by criticizing a few sentences. You Zz who love to read, just read it, and if you have the ability, you can come up with reasons to refute those who think this book is rubbish, and say, "If you have the ability, write a book yourself." I really think you are the rubbish, and you talk without thinking. If you don't say this, it will be fine if others criticize it; if you say this, others will definitely tell their friends nearby that this book is rubbish, and the book will not even get clicked! I really don't know if people like you are really kind or if you are deliberately helping the author to promote readers!

Writing about Naruto but not about defecting is a joke. No wonder his grades are so bad. It's not without reason.

Naruto is also known as the filial son Black Zetsu who split the moon to save his mother for thousands of years.

I've read too many stories about Naruto, and it's nothing more than making friends with the Kyuubi in advance, dating Hinata in advance, learning the Rasengan in advance, and just doing all the things Naruto did in the original novel in advance, and wearing a god robe at the same time. Is it interesting for you to write such a book? Or are you feeling excited just after taking the Hokage exam?

I think the author's writing structure and description of the situation are pretty good, but they didn't attract me enough to make me want to read more. But, plot wise. . . After all, it is a 2D fanfic. The impression of the original work coupled with the author's originality creates a great sense of conflict, to put it mildly. I don't like the Holy Mother. In the original description of Naruto's life before he was 6 years old, it was the hostility and rejection of the villagers and the guidance and encouragement of three generations, and he became a middle-aged boy with a strong character but a prank. However, in this book, the 6-year-old Naruto is roughly designed by the author to be submissive. The three generations of stealth are not revealed, but the villagers are malicious and murderous. Among them, the invisible ANBU highlights the dark character of the three generations of insiders and decision-makers. The above is the feeling that the author's writing style gives me. These successful background descriptions have no other content added, but the author's Naruto directly applies the original work in the hope that everyone will agree with it, etc., Isn't it too holy? Soldier soul. . , Who survived being forced to eat dogs since childhood, joined the army and fought all the way, but after seeing the life of the protagonist Naruto, he didn't have much bloody reaction, and he completely agreed with the fusion. . . . Great, Two Holy Mothers 1+1>2

I just read Chapter 5 and I really can't stand it anymore, it's so poisonous! ! !

Chapter 9 exploded. Naruto was able to steal it because of his identity. The others might have been caught by ANBU before they got close.

Real water. What's the point of a time-traveling killer who hasn't watched Naruto?

Emmmmmmm Regarding whether Naruto will defect or not. . . . . There must be a reasonable explanation. Unless they wear it until graduation is imminent, normal people will defect. Unless he's a hot-blooded idiot like Naruto himself.

I feel like Naruto here is even more stinky than Sasuke in the original.

I have the habit of clicking on the comments before reading a book. After reading the comments, I found that they are all a group of rhythmic idiots. What's wrong? Do you start complaining when a novel doesn't suit your ideas? Got the rhythm? Then why are you reading novels? When you read a novel, you just want to see if the author has a big idea. If you want to read it, keep reading. If you can't stand it, leave. This is great. However, there are always a group of idiots who think that the earth cannot turn around without them. If you want to read defection novels, go read defection novels! What are you looking at? Still have rhythm? And there are actually people who have been led to the rhythm. Really, those who have been led to the rhythm are very popular, welcomed by those MLM organizations, because they are so easy to deceive.

This is the worst fanfic I've seen in years, bar none, it's disgusting

Is the author of this book the Virgin or the "Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles"? The people in Konoha Village hit and scolded the protagonist, but the protagonist still used love to influence him? If that's the case I won't watch it. The book review goes too far, saying that massacre of villages is unnecessary. It should be someone from Konoha who beats the protagonist and scolds the protagonist. The protagonist wants to beat him back. If he can't beat him, he will beat him back when he can't.

The author should take a good look at the original plot before writing it, the changes are a mess

Since it's free, just take a look. In the first chapter, the combination of chakra energy and spiritual energy pops up. Shouldn't it be the combination of physical energy and spiritual energy into chakra energy?

Cheating on the basis of cheating, boring

Damn, it's very poisonous. He just graduated. He said he's grown up. He put his arms around Sakura's slender waist and kissed her. . . . . . So disgusting. . . .

I gave up. The update speed is no different from TJ.

I'm back, do you still remember me?

The content is out of order! A bit embarrassing!

Why Uzumaki Naruto, I, Uzumaki Iron Pillar, are not convinced!

It's poisoned to death, don't look at it, another Konoha licking dog

When writing about Naruto fan fiction, you should at least read the anime, manga, and official formula books, right? Naruto didn't go to school until he was nine? Are you kidding me? In peacetime, how many years does a ninja school last? Do you know the author or something? Also, when Naruto has a harem, it would be more enjoyable to read related H stories. Naruto's background is roughly related to Japanese culture. Up to the daimyo, the shadows in each ninja village only have one partner. Or stay single. Because of the war in the Naruto world, the average age of people is only in their thirties. Also, when you become Naruto and never become a ninja hero or Hokage, marrying Hinata is no different from daydreaming. Hinata, like the Uchiha, is a bloodstained family. Unlike the secret arts families such as Yamanaka and Nara, Hinata practices intermarriage within the clan in order to prevent the bloodstains from leaking out. If the Uchiha clan is immortal, no matter how much Sakura kneels down and licks Sasuke, it will be in vain. The clan leader's son will only marry an Uchiha girl. After Naruto became an invincible wall-mounted warrior, he married Hinata Hinata, and the entire Hyuga clan only agreed because they couldn't beat him.

How did this click minus one come out?

I may be a bit... Why do I want to read it even more when I see so many book reviews criticizing the author?