Immersed in the Movie World

After seeing how he was successfully persuaded to quit during the special forces training in Chapter 12, although he has never been a soldier and has watched so many movies, normal people will know that the first priority in the army is discipline. Although there will be small conflicts, the friendship between comrades is not lost. The protagonist will knock out people's teeth at every turn. Hey, there is a conflict, and he is kicked out by the army. He may have to go to jail. After all, although the army values ​​talents, it does not like individual heroism. What's more, this is not a hero at all, more like a thorn in the head and a lawless person! ! ! ! ! ! The author still needs to think more about the rationality of the plot and make people feel immersed in it!

The skills are based on Western fantasy, the power is based on Japanese comics, all Jiu Shu's teachings are prohibited, Kung Fu is Buddhist, Taoist magic is prohibited, Taoist Kung Fu does not exist, and then the Taoist temple is opened, the world is not stingy, the way of heaven is fair, the great road is simple, the setting is really poisonous.

There is no sense of immersion at all! It feels like writing a running account!

This book is poisonous. I can't bear to skip reading it. I have to go straight to the table of contents... Just pull it to the end and leave.

God Tamar is finished! If it wasn't for watching Fengshen, who would care about Journey to the West!

What the hell are you writing? I vomited when I read it.

Another piece of shit written. Toxic routines

A lot of swear words, it doesn't matter if it's a big dick or a dick.

The realm of cultivation has completely collapsed. Before the protagonist has become an immortal, he often talks about being a quasi-sage. He often crosses several realms of immortality to fight against enemies. It feels like there is no division of cultivation at all. Even if the protagonist is just an earthly immortal, he can still stare a saint to death. Moreover, the protagonist's character is too emotional. He does everything according to his temper and does not know how to calculate. To put it nicely, this is called immaturity. To be honest, he has low emotional intelligence.

You can travel and bring things with you. After passing through two worlds, he said that he had to work as a security guard because he was short of money. He forcibly started the plot of protecting the unruly young lady, poisoned people, and abandoned books.

The hodgepodge system, the first one is Uncle Jiu's Taoism, the second one is special forces, the third one is magic, and the fourth one is martial arts. It's too complicated and gives rise to indigestion.

After reading this book, I just want to ask the author: Why do you hate teeth so much that you will knock out the teeth of anyone you catch? What a painful past you have.

I can't help but think that in the world of immortals and Buddhas, I am a low-level person and dare to provoke others without any trouble, and then abuse them casually. I personally don't recommend watching it.

To be honest, if you use Gongde to practice, it always feels like you are using someone else's things.

I could barely watch the first few worlds, but once I got magic, I realized that there was no love anymore and gave up trying to save them.

A person who can travel through time and carry things, after working as a special soldier, actually said that he wanted to be a security guard because of lack of money, and then started to protect the eldest lady. This ***, poisoned me, abandon the book

Let's not talk about anything else. The strongest combat power in Dragon Ball is at least quasi-Saint family level. If you practice Dragon Ball to perfection, then go to Journey to the West and practice Yuanshen. Isn't this a defeat for everything?

Someone is plagiarizing your work (Wanjie Universe Shuttle System), copying it directly, and even making few changes 😃😃😃

The more I write, the more outrageous it becomes, without any logic at all.

After reading the table of contents, why do I feel that the protagonist of this book is a funny loser?

I won't watch the part about Nalan's death The reality is gone The more I watch, the more confused I become.

The next day, you were really fooling around. You couldn't stand it anymore and died of poison!

In fact, the Invincible Golden Bell requires a set of exercises, otherwise it will not be comparable to top-notch exercises. Huangji Zhenshen Dao can break the upper limit of martial arts.

This book is still very good, skip ahead and read, the later the better, the main character has a very good character ✪ω✪

The author must be a newbie, I feel so embarrassed when I read it

The classification label of this book is "Three Thousand Beauties, Science Fiction, Time Travel". Which science fiction planes does the protagonist travel through?

Author, you are so cowardly! You have a super plug-in that can travel through all the worlds, and you don't lack any skills and resources. Are you still afraid that you won't be able to prove the Tao with your strength? ! Do you have to be so cowardly as a man? ?