Little Demon Can't Go to Heaven

I gave up when I saw the deer demon. It felt so stupid. When the protagonist of the deer demon was engaged, he showed a lonely expression and I knew something was going to happen. Later, when the deer demon got the stupid medicine, I was more sure of my idea. And then, the deer demon sacrificed his life because he wanted to save others because of his own troubles? Or is it because Diandian looks a bit like the protagonist? First of all, let me say that I don't like harem stories, but the author obviously can't handle this kind of place well, and I'm obviously not the first one to find a place that is poisonous

Some people in the comments said that the author has too little understanding of immortality and has too many poisonous points. I just want to ask who stipulated that cultivating immortals requires a certain routine. Lack of understanding of cultivating immortals? Is it possible that if you know more about it and practice it, you can really become an immortal? Isn't writing a novel just about letting your imagination run wild? There is no point in setting such strict rules for yourself.

The bookis a good book and is unconventional, but it is a pity that it is updated too slowly.

I'm looking forward to the author's next work. Although I couldn't bear to abandon this one after seeing the drama "Suddenly Opening a Shop and Seizing the House", the author's writing style is still good. I feel that the author is very serious about comedy themes, but I feel that he didn't do a good job in the outline, so it will make people feel that it is watery. It will be much better to spend more time on the outline of the next book.

To be honest, the author should adjust the update time! I think it can be adjusted to 8 a. M. Or noon. This has two benefits: 1. You can no longer cover up interrupted updates with chaotic update times. 2. I no longer have to wait for you to update.

This is one of the few novels that allowed me to read the latest chapters directly from the beginning. After reading many reviews, most of the negative comments were about A'duo. First of all, this book has a single female protagonist. The protagonist is very emotionally dedicated, and A'duo is just a temporary supporting character who appeared later. She is not beautiful, nor powerful, nor has much writing. I don't know why some people regard this as a poisonous point. Why does the female supporting role have to be the protagonist's?

I always thought that after the Journey to the West, the Age of Ending Dharma was slowly coming, but I didn't expect that it was before the Journey to the West. Brother Monkey is mighty, Brother Monkey is domineering.

The front is so beautiful, why is the back useless?

This book is very good. I really enjoyed reading it in the first half. But I really didn't like the plot until the protagonist opened a small restaurant. I just skipped through chapters 40 and 50. If it was a little demon in the early stage, it would completely change when I opened the small restaurant. It felt like it was no longer the same story as the previous one.

What does the part about seizing the body add to the whole story? Only points deducted

Can this be so bad as to send a girl away? Never seen a woman?

It's so annoying that Snake Queen is a family, everyone is a busybody, and there is also a male protagonist who doesn't stay with his wife when she is pregnant.

As long as I am a eunuch before Chapter 500, I will blow it up

I feel that this book was a difficult work before the opening of Sanjie Restaurant, and the works after Sanjie are just chewing the bullet and trying to make up the word count. With such a good beginning, why don't you create a bigger structure to expand the plot instead of just turning over and over again every day? It's a pity, it's a pity.

It was really frustrating to watch, even though I jumped to see 587 later? I finally feel a little more comfortable, mainly because the plot completely collapsed in the middle. I don't know what happened. The originally big world view was directly dragged to the bottom, which made me feel aggrieved.

He almost became a minor god, but his first book has such an achievement, which is enough to make most authors proud.

They suddenly lost their lives. How can their meows be the same? The two protagonists have different personalities. How can I watch it with peace of mind? This is unfair to the yellow badger!! I hate you, author 🔪

I won't complain about the emotional scenes, but I really can't bear to forcibly reduce the protagonist's intelligence. It feels like the protagonist has become a different person after joining the Gu Que Clan. His IQ has plummeted and he is always being plotted against. Even the mini-boss level can trick the protagonist, but the protagonist still thinks that he is cruel, and in the end, all his cruelty is used on the little people. In addition, the protagonist has a tendency to kneel down and lick humans. Is this the same little demon who even had the desire to eat people?

When I first read this online article, I was a little moved. The quality of the later articles is difficult to describe, but the first article is indeed good.

Stick with it until chapter 34, the plot is extremely dragging, and the golden finger is a gimmick

The subject matter is novel, the protagonist has upright views and single-minded feelings (there is only one female protagonist, I didn't write about other characters, it's very natural, and there are no strange plots about other characters having a crush on the protagonist). I quite like it

The early stage is okay, but there are a lot of pitfalls in the middle and late stages. The plot feels a bit forced and a bit impatient. The setting of Tiandao is a bit inconsistent. Tiandao = the way of imitation?

Such a novel subject has to be watered down, and it makes me have a heart attack.

I just saw this book recently. I have been reading it for a long time. It is also quite to my liking. But there is a bit of a dissuading factor in the middle (the part about the fat raccoon demon). I am a little bit too villainous, and I feel like I am a villain for the sake of villains. The rest of it feels pretty good. Come on, author.

The fat-headed fish is forever a god! ! !

To be fair, you could consider writing a food article or something. I wonder if the author has ever watched life-style games.

Can book friends recommend some novels about strange beasts?

Let's start directly from entering the human sect.

Cultivation novel, "The Rebellion of Immortals" ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥ Doomsday novel, "Killing the Abyss" ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥ Fantasy novel, "Fights Break the Sphere" ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥ Hard science fiction novel, "The Three-Body Problem" ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥ Ten-million-word novel, "From Scratch" ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

To be honest, Aduo is not worthy of the Yellow Badger. As the protagonist, a little demon who will definitely go against the will of heaven in the future. If you marry a little demon like Aduo, how will the plot develop in the future? However, it is okay for her to be Brother Huan's concubine. But Keren'er is different. It would make more sense if she was the heroine. After all, he is a genius of the human race. He can set off a huge craze in the future plot promotion, and he can also play an important role in changing the situation of humans, monsters and even the entire world together with Brother Huan. So, support Kerener