Naotianji

Stop making trouble! This book is so well written, don't be a eunuch! And in one chapter you wrote the lion as Bai Qi. Awkward. . . Stable and more stable! This book is very good!

I look forward to the day when the lion will become a lazy monarch on the battlefield, and on the battlefield he will be an iron-blooded god of war with a shirt on his body.

This book, to be honest, I think it would be a pity if you didn't write a thousand chapters! I don't think you should be anxious. Now that your mentality has calmed down, you should work on it carefully and finish it! The novel market is too complex, gold will always shine!

Elder brother! ! ! Forgot about this book! More! This book is so beautiful! Why isn't it updated? ???????

If it doesn't work, just be a eunuch, don't force it.

I suggest that you don't change the outline of this book, don't relax, and still stick to logic but don't be constrained by logic. In terms of style, I strongly recommend the author to read the book "Heaven's Blazing" written by Jiang Nan. I think you can learn from the world view in it, which would be great! Especially the same worldview with a strong family and religious atmosphere! Moreover, if possible, don't be limited to the standardized chapters of standard online novels. You can write long chapters!

I feel sorry for the author 😐. If that doesn't work, just change the subject. In fact, novels with this subject have very high requirements on writing style and rhythm. I think it's better to write a short story first 😄. Even though that's not the case, some people support it. 😁