The Big Shot Who Farms on a Desert Island

The author seems to lack understanding of some things. A snake weighing tens of kilograms dies instantly with a slingshot from the female protagonist?? Several chili pepper seeds, with some failing to germinate, grow into a crop weighing tens of kilograms?? A wild goat plus ten birds yields hundreds of kilograms of meat?? There are just too many plot holes.

The beginning was unremarkable, but it got increasingly exciting, especially after the female protagonist drifted to Flame Island. The writing details still need polishing, but the plot and overall structure are well-conceived. Here's my first recommendation vote, keep it up!

The island has everything you could want, how can it be called a deserted island? It's even more comfortable than a vacation.

I've adjusted the article's publication time; it's now at midnight, instead of 6 PM and 9 PM. I hope readers won't stay up too late.

It's my type of game, it feels like a survival game, but the resources are too plentiful, so playing it as a game wouldn't be as immersive (for some players who enjoy a challenge). This is like a localized version of the game, it has everything you need, leveling up is fast, rare resources are easy to find, and it's super fun to play! I really like it 💕 Wishing your desert island adventure great success.

I thought it was quite good. I didn't find it verbose at all, because the protagonist lives alone on a deserted island, and compared to her past life, her inner world must be much richer—this is the difference brought about by a different environment. Another thing that really attracted me was the description of food and the relationship with animals.

I feel the book is generally well-written, but it feels like you've been focusing too much on the female lead's inner thoughts and not enough on the actual events. Seriously, if you revise that, it would be much better. You can't keep telling us her every mood and thought. This is just a suggestion; please don't criticize if you disagree.

It was written quite well at first. But I couldn't stand the first-person perspective, so I'm leaving.

The protagonist is a woman? No joke, it really won't work. She lacks physical strength, endurance, and the environment is too harsh. Even running out of toilet paper each month could drive a woman crazy. Forget surviving on a deserted island. A whole group of us went into the mountains for a week, and we didn't want to bring any women. We all agreed that whoever brought a woman would be responsible for her.

Fellow desert island author, keep it up!