The Big Shot Who Farms on a Desert Island

The author seems to have no idea about some things. How about a snake weighing several pounds and the heroine dying with a slingshot? ? When some of the pepper seeds failed to germinate, the remaining ones grew into dozens of kilograms of peppers? ? How many pounds of meat does one wild goat and ten birds have? ? ? ? There are too many bugs here

The early stage is lackluster, but the later stage becomes more and more exciting, especially starting from the heroine drifting to Fire Island. The details of the writing still need to be refined, but the storyline and overall framework are well conceived. The first recommendation ticket is given to you, keep up the good work!

The island has everything you want, can it still be called a desert island? More comfortable than a vacation.

The article publishing time has been adjusted from six o'clock and nine o'clock in the evening to twelve o'clock in the evening. I hope that friends who are reading this article will not stay up too late.

It's my favorite type, it feels like a survival game, but the supplies are too abundant, and there is no sense of experience playing the game (for some players who feel a sense of challenge). This is like a Chinese version of the game. Anyway, it is not lacking in all aspects, it upgrades quickly, all rare resources are easy to find, and it is also fun to play! ! ! ! I quite like it 💕 I wish Desert Island a prosperous future.

I think it's pretty good-looking. I don't think it's verbose, because the protagonist lives alone on an isolated island. Compared with her past life, her inner world should be richer. These are different changes brought about by different environments. Another thing that attracted me was the description of food and the relationship with animals.

I feel that the writing of the whole book is okay, but I feel that you have been writing about the psychological state of the heroine, but not much about the actual situation. Really, it would be better if you change this point. You can't always let us know the mood and thoughts of the heroine. I just suggest that if you don't like it, don't criticize it. The most talked about in the whole book is When explaining the heroine's mood and mentality, otherwise we always talk about the heroine's psychological state in a chapter of this book. Look at how much is written about the heroine's psychological state. Can you write more about the heroine's mental state? It also shows that you are a very wordy person in reality, or you don't have many friends, so as soon as you read the novel, you will babble! Writing too much of this mental state will be very contradictory and annoying. Really, I'm just suggesting that you change this

It was originally written quite well. I couldn't bear to say goodbye when I saw it in the first person.

Are pig's feet female? It's no joke, it's really not possible, my physical strength is not good, my stamina is not good, the environment is too bad, even the paper towels that are not blocked every month can make a woman go crazy, let alone survive on a desert island. A group of us went into the mountains for a week, and we were not willing to take a woman with us. At the same time, we all agreed that whoever takes the woman will be responsible.

We are both desert island flow authors, come on!