Hua Shu

The author's writing is super beautiful, the plots are interlocking, and the heroine's revenge is really cool

The biggest problem is that the heroine Xin Xie clearly cares about her family. Because her mother Xin Xie comes from a wealthy family, everyone says the heroine is the daughter of the Xie family. Even my girlfriend's uncle said this? ? ? Is the heroine's father a wife? Obviously he lives in his father's talisman? ? And the heroine also feels that she is the daughter of the Xie family. Are you sick? You say you love your father but you don't think you are a family girl? ?

Concubine Cheng is still very resourceful, using both soft and hard tactics. It's no wonder that the heroine was defeated by his scheme in her previous life.

I can't stand it anymore after reading more than 90 chapters. There are too many jokes. The elder brother takes his grandson to visit the 13-year-old heroine's house. Isn't there any protection between men and women? The heroine's second uncle is appointed as the county magistrate of Fujian. Is Fujian a county in the story? After returning to Beijing, he wanted the hostess to find a concubine and enter the Hanlin Academy. How can someone who has never participated in the imperial examination become a shujishi? What rank of official position does a shujishi have? The heroine's home is the Dingguo Palace. The Dingguo Palace appears countless times in the article. What the hell is it? Moreover, all the current people in the Dingguo Duke's mansion are civil servants, and the heroine's grandfather is actually the elder of the cabinet. Isn't Duke Dingguo a noble person? How can one rule a country without military power? Is the country decided by words? What kind of concubine is the concubine of the eldest son of the Hou family? Pay back two. Is there any son of the prince named Shisun? What does the maid call the heroine "eldest girl"? I have seen eldest lady, eldest lady, and this is the first time I have seen the name eldest lady. In addition, the scene jumps inexplicably. For example, when two people are talking, after the author adds a background introduction, the next step inexplicably changes to a few days later. What about half of what was originally said? I thought I skipped a chapter, so I read it several times. There are many such places. Fortunately, I bought it for 100 chapters, so I wasted 20 chapters of money.

I hope the author will be more rigorous in writing books in the future, and not ignore the rationality of the character just to follow the trend and make it easier for people to see. The character of the heroine's mother, Xie, is from a century-old family, with very good rules and education. She is also very smart, good at housekeeping, and most of the people she serves are sincere people brought from her parents' family. She also favors boys over girls, and will ignore that the heroine's focus is on the heroine's younger brother. For such a person, the heroine's younger brother's yard is messy In this situation, the wet nurse is controlling the heroine's brother, saying that she can't leave the yard if she can't. Seeing that her sister wants to sneak out, all the maids in the brother's yard are irregular, as if all the maids don't know this man. As the future heir to Duke Dingguo's mansion, she doesn't take Xie seriously at all, but as I said at the beginning, all the maids are very respectful to the heroine, because the heroine's parents are the future masters of the mansion The heroine's mother seems to have no son in her life. She doesn't care whether there is a sincere person around her young son, and she doesn't care about what her son's life is like. She allows a wet nurse to climb over her son casually Not every reborn heroine needs to save a younger brother and teach a lot of disobedient servants in the brother's yard. This does not make the heroine particularly awesome, it only shows that the heroine's family is about to end. The heroine's house is so weak that it makes me angry. Originally I wanted to ignore it, but every time you write about the mistress teaching her principles and how to deal with things, I can't ignore the character of Mr. Xie at all.

Speaking of which, Wang Youjun is not important. . . I think it is more important that Xiao Yan (crossed out 🤭) cannot marry a good wife! Let them be exposed! Expose it! No high-ranking family will marry their daughters to a sick and weak prince who has his own heart 🤓 PS: My irresponsible guess~ Zhao Maola loves power so much, it would be great if Ping Yi gave Xiao Jiu a concubine. . I always think Wang Youjun occupies the position of the principal concubine very well! (This guy's fighting ability is relatively poor, but she is protected by Xiao Jiu, so if there is a powerful concubine from a famous family, she will not be able to fight her for a while; and the concubine being occupied will definitely hinder Xiao Jiu from attracting civil servants and generals. The conflict between his sweetheart and the throne will occur over time ~ ahem ~)

After reading the previous 25 chapters, the character of the heroine's mother is "a shrewd daughter of a wealthy family + patriarchal preference", and I don't see any shrewdness at all.

The plot is very clichéd and has nothing new. Rebirth stories follow the same routine: unjust death → rebirth → seeing a (good or bad) maid → protecting the younger brother → meeting the sisters → meeting the old lady…

All the plots are exactly the same as Phoenix Returning to the Nest! The names in the article have been changed, the dynasties have been changed, are there any other changes? I just don't know if the Phoenix Returns to the Nest now or this book came first?

I feel like there is something wrong with the introduction. "Assistant" is not suitable to be used in the heroine's situation. After all, the heroine was just a pitiful and incompetent puppet in her previous life. She does not have great power. Only those with power can assist. She has no power and cannot assist regardless of her identity!

Wang Youjun and Xiao Yan can be considered to be in love with each other. As long as they don't base their happiness on the pain of others, there is nothing wrong with it.

After reading the comments, it seems that the male protagonist is not his cousin. I don't want to read anymore. I'm so tired.

I feel that the writing is not very rigorous. There are many grammatical errors, typos, wrong names and titles, etc., And there are many unreasonable things.

Accompanying a king is like accompanying a tiger. The emperor will have a fit every once in a while.

I couldn't keep things in perspective. I grabbed things, tore things, scratched my sister's face, and said bad words. As a result, I was punished by having to kneel down, and I gave her something to compensate for it afterwards. This is not the way to be spoiled. She blinded me.

Why do I feel that this plot is similar to "The Phoenix Returns to the Nest"~ I thought I watched it again? They were all reborn as Queen Mothers, and the relationship between mother and daughter was not very close. They all had a good uncle and borrowed someone else... Really similar

This is the first time I see the heroine's mother is not stupid, what a surprise!

Is there a male protagonist

The emotional development of the male and female protagonists is so awkward, I can't help but complain every time I see it!

It feels a bit awkward, so forget it.

I feel it's a pity for Xie Yun. I hope he is the male protagonist, or that he is not too happy and changes his mind midway. I always feel that the past life is meaningless. It's a pity that it would have been better if he had told, or shown, hints to the heroine of his love in the past life. Because of family ties, I have never thought about it, or the Xie family's mission has never been thought about.

This article is procrastinating. The heroine, the Queen Mother, has been reborn for dozens of chapters. A maid who betrayed her has not been dealt with yet. To deal with this maid, we need to make some preparations and give her some good things to make her more public. Then we can deal with this maid! Whatever happened, I just watched the show indifferently. It was so uncomfortable that I couldn't stand it anymore! His younger brother was abandoned by the nanny Kasumi, and he was treated as the legitimate daughter of both his parents. The nanny had to check the background first, and then entered the younger brother's yard and saw the younger brother's maids and wives gambling and gossiping. She also quietly covered her mouth and walked away slowly. Slowly lay the groundwork and get rid of these people. Let me go. You are at the pinnacle of power in the ancient prince's family. When you are dealing with a slave, you still have to worry about something. Are you afraid that your brother may be different from the previous life, and Gaji was killed by a slave in the past two days?

I don't quite understand, is the heroine's mother such a vase?

I don't know why so many people are talking about the problem of the heroine and the character of the heroine's mother. It's just a novel, a good read, nothing else. The author's writing style is quite good

There are so many mistakes, you can't even figure out who is who, right? After a while the name turns into that person

In the 2018 book "The First Died" (2017), in the main plot, there is a relative who is a concubine, and there are second wives who persuade the hostess to enter the palace and put in good words in order to get promoted. It's just that in this book, the heroine's father is more up-to-date, while the eldest daughter's father is more useless.

It is similar to Feng Hui Chao, but the writing, plot, and character settings are much better. After reading this article, Feng Hui Chao abandoned the article...

The author is very researched! Original text: The senior eunuchs of the Ming Dynasty all held political positions, so they called themselves ministers. However, in order to show their closeness to the emperor in order to be humble, they could be called old slaves. )

Xiao Yan wanted to stop the marriage between the Cui and Xie families and help Xu Chengjun marry Xie Yun. Then he would not start with Xie Yun. He originally thought he would start with the Cui family and kill or destroy Cui Zhiwan. Unexpectedly, he just asked the Wei family to ask Cui Zhiwan's mother out in order to kill her mother. Then Cui Zhiwan had to observe mourning for three years, so he would postpone the marriage of the Cui and Xie families to give Xu Chengjun time? I hope nothing happens to Yuan!

The heroine can still choose to poison her brother even though she has discovered the clues. First of all, you can know the opportunity and take the initiative. After all, the second wife will always take action. This method is familiar at least. If you remove it, you don't know what method you will use next time. After all, if you only commit a thief for a thousand days, how can you prevent a thief for a thousand days? Secondly, there must be a complete way to ensure that his brother is safe. After all, if the method of poisoning is found, the antidote will be much easier. Xie's death was due to a bad life. If Ziyu was fine, it would be a matter of time before Xie recovered from the illness. Although he might not be able to live long, at least in the short term, he should not be able to breathe. And Gu Jingxi... The old man personally sent people to follow Gu Jingzhao. Knowing the whole story of the incense stick, how could he let him harm his eldest son? How can someone with no level like this be able to sit in the position of senior minister? You know, there are only a few of them in the whole country. In fact, the heroine's biggest skill is to think of ways to arouse the suspicion of the old man Gu Zhengde. Gu Yanjin probably didn't expect that the biggest masterstroke of all this was actually not the heroine Gu Yanling. By the way, I think it would be great to send Gu Yanjin to Zhuangzi, right? Besides, once you get married in the future, won't you just let the tiger return to the mountains? I think this kind of love-deficient psychopath with a pit in his brain deserves better.