The End of the World

Looking at the introduction, it's a fantasy novel dressed up as science fiction!

I just started watching it and it feels good! See updated date. . . . Not updated? ?

I went back to the previous comments and took a look at the author's final ending outline. I have to say that it is too vicious. The author's fault is not the writing, but the arrangement of the plot. 1. Arrange to escape to CD City and start working hard from the bottom of CD. The protagonist is a person with special powers, a person with a golden finger, and has experienced a lot of time, so he should be able to He is a little master now. Isn't it too fake that you arranged for the CD market to be full of masters? Why should others surpass the protagonist? Is the protagonist a pig? 2. Arrange to find your parents, see the blood, then blame yourself, go crazy until you wake up. Is this plot too fake? It's normal for parents to die, isn't it? After so long, the protagonist himself should be mentally prepared. Who can guarantee that he will not die in the end of the world? Who in modern times would go crazy because of something like this? The protagonist is He is not even as good as ordinary people, is he useless except for his golden fingers? 3. After awakening, he was plotted by humans, but he continued to protect humans wholeheartedly, without retaliating against those who hurt him, and without changing. This is a typical Madonna-type poison point. This does not mean that you should not protect human beings, but you should also take revenge on people with bad intentions. If you kill too many people, people will naturally rally around you. Don't always admit it The will of the top is the will of all. Most people are actually people who don't know anything and are being represented. 4. Death together with the enemy in the end is also a poisonous point. The protagonist is written as too noble, and there is no sense of empathy at all. You are forcing the protagonist to be noble, solve it There are so many ways to go about the problem. If you can't take humans away, can't you hide humans? It doesn't have to be all humans. It's not easy to hide tens of thousands of humans. Just leave a seed. OK.

The good villain obviously has superhuman speed, but when he hits someone with the first move, he can still talk for ten seconds. I asked, are their movements all turtles? They all started to move. The master can only take one turn in a fraction of a second, and there is still time to give you so much nonsense. The villain also likes to popularize all kinds of knowledge, for fear that others will not find a way to deal with him. It really feels like reading the article 20 years ago.

The book is good, but the subject matter is a bit poor. There are too many baptisms of the apocalypse, and I am tired of aesthetics! If the author writes heartwarming urban novels such as rebirth, he will definitely be popular!

In fact, writing a book is not for income, but more for giving something different to my hobbies. I will write a book again when I have time in the future. Thank you all friends! !

I was going to go to bed after reading this. Who knew you had missed a good chapter 😭

There are too many books on the bookshelf. After changing the name, it took me two days to find it 🤫

Well, actually Wenyuan doesn't have an outline, so it's so painful to write every day. I just have some things I want to write, and when I'm typing them down, I connect them in series, hoping to form a complete line. I wrote a part of the outline before, but when I coded the words, I often deviated a lot from the outline. In the end, I ended up rearranging the outline according to the written plot. However, I still find that even an immature outline is better than nothing. So I just sorted it out carefully and wrote an outline of more than 2,000 words. If nothing else, it will be enough for me to write about 20 chapters. I hope the next chapters will be easier to code! I am busy on weekdays and have various things on weekends, so updates are very slow. I hope you can understand. Sorry! (Exactly 250 words.)

Chapter 5 Why use a knife? An ax with armor-piercing critical strike but not used?

Hey, I'm really speechless after reading a few chapters. There's a lot of nonsense in almost every chapter. Sometimes it even takes up a whole chapter, just to explain something clearly to you. Please, does anyone here want to see you babbling?

The author who read it for 5 minutes said, I just want to say: If you are satisfied with the story you wrote, it is a success.

I can't stand it anymore after seeing Chapter 44, just the dark flow, hack that little girl to death!

After looking at the comment area, the author is still very hardworking and serious. You are included in many comments. Personally, I feel like your plot is a bit draggy and uses too many words. This should not be the main plot! I don't really want to see it. 😴😴

The preliminary preparation is a bit long. I suggest you revise it and shorten it to 1W words.

I skipped through chapters 60 and 70, not to mention anything else. Pig's trotters are lazy or wasteful enough. Pig's trotters can be upgraded by killing monsters with a plug-in. The first time a monster is killed, the strength is increased by 0.5, The agility is increased by 1, and everything except spirit is increased by 1 after killing a person. This proves that the attribute increases are still very fast, although it may be decreasing. And more than 30 days have passed in the apocalypse, and the attributes of pig's trotters are only a dozen points. On average, it may take one or two days to kill a monster? There is really no one who is too lazy. Besides (waste material), pig's feet are just a level one spiritual evolution. I recognized a big brother who evolved to level 3 with all attributes. It's normal for the eldest brother to be awesome, but I met a younger brother, one evolved to level 3 and the other evolved to level 2. Finally, Pig's Foot taught the younger brother martial arts and found that the younger brother's spirit has also evolved and it's not level one yet. At least it's much more awesome than Pig's Foot. In the end, what I just want to say is that it doesn't matter if the pig's trotters are useless, there are plug-ins, just work hard to defeat monsters and upgrade, but if you are so lazy, you are hopeless. Maybe the author's pig's trotters aura is bigger? Can a pig's feet become a god even while lying down? Ps This book always talks about God. I just don't know if this God is the God of Gui Lao or the Chinese Haotian God?

Doesn't the country have reserves and militia? It feels like there are at least 20 million people in total!

Okay, okay, these two people feel comfortable killing each other.

The routines of Dawn of Anno are not as clever as his conception, nor are they as profound as An Anno's description of human nature. His skills are more than one step behind. .

When writing an apocalyptic article, not many people will read the protagonist, the Virgin Mary.

How should I put it? I was a little excited when I saw this book. After all, the author and I have a lot in common. I have actually been imagining a world, but I suffer from the fact that there is no world [after all, the student party], so I share my own things and hope that the author can adopt it. Setting 1: Wu Zhu [equivalent to the Dantian] must first be solidified. 3 Wu Zuo [Daoji]. Different Wu Zuo have different functions. For example: punch a hole in the Wu Zuo, and you can stuff the soul of the killed Origin Beast [Monster] into the hole. You can make your own Wu Zhu change the form and then turn yourself into the Origin Beast. [Lastly, there is another setting of Wu Zhu, which is the candle wick, which is the life energy. I haven't conceived it yet, candle wick. You can condense the martial arts into a small piece of core and merge it into the martial arts candle, so that your own power without the martial arts candle can explode into the final combat skill] Setting 2: Soul String Condenses the essence of one's soul into a thread, which is composed of lines and surfaces, which are composed of surfaces... At the extreme, the soul string can be directly transformed into an entity [the soul string and the martial arts candle are combined to form the military form, which is equivalent to Susanoo] The most important setting: the original object. Everyone has their own characteristics, and each object has its own compatibility. Then you can turn certain objects into original objects [different qualifications, the number of original objects is different, and they can also be of different quality]. Just like the equipment in the game, it can be used or have the characteristics of weapons [the original object is like the natal weapon in Xianxia novels, but it can be repaired by itself. This is one of the characteristics of the original object] Example: The original object is a mecha. The original object is a poker. [The original object can be anything, but it must conform to one of its own characteristics. For example, the original object is underwear. .

Name changed? I almost thought I had entered the wrong book. . . .