Legalist Disciple

Why do you have to show off your literary talents? There are thousands of poems and songs in the Tang and Song Dynasties. You can choose them as you like. If you have to show off your literary talents, it doesn't matter if you are really talented. But... Forget it, I thought it was quite good. From the time you started showing off, you instantly became a novice. I hope you won't be a eunuch.

It's finally released, but luckily it hasn't been deleted from the bookshelf. I really don't know what's going on at certain points. To be honest, I approve of this book!

It's a very good material. It looked good at the beginning, but in the end it became more and more confusing as the writing progressed. The preface didn't match the postscript.

Come on! It's so full of flaws that I don't even bother to vomit! Goodbye!

It's not worth reading what the hell is written!

Where is Legalism? I didn't see it, it's not even Confucian…

The author is also enough. The protagonist is shrewd at one moment and mentally retarded at the other. It is impossible to read 😭

In the world of high martial arts, freedom and equality are played. Not to mention high martial arts, now you go and see the rich and senior officials to see if they are jealous of you. What is the difference between this and being an emperor who divides power and being a landlord who divides land? The first person to kill you will probably be the people around you. There is no point in messing around with you.

Please change the title of the book. You are deliberately slandering the name of Legalism by hanging on to the legalist skin. How should the law be written?

Emperor Qian previously recited the Great Wind Song of Taizu Liu Bang, and you immediately created a substitute for Liu Bang. The chronological order is too confusing. You are basically plagiarizing Yangshen. The main part is called Yu Xuanji in the front and Hong Xuanji in the back. Little brother, I won't mention the typos you made. He actually turned Wang Yangming into Hong Xuanji, still retaining the principles of nature and destroying human desires. Doesn't anyone ask you for royalties like this?

What a legalist. . . Han Feizi, Shang Yang, and Li Si knew that the coffin boards of this book could not be held down! As soon as I read the fourth chapter, the author used a series of violations of the law, forced buying and selling, and commercial fraud to persuade him to quit. Farewell.

The plot is confusing, the title of the book is wrong, and the force settings are also broken. As a protagonist, his breakthrough is earth-shattering. In fact, no one can defeat him. (Others are the protagonists who are basically invincible at the same level, or fight higher up. This book is the other way around. The villain is beaten by two levels and three levels.) I feel safe every time when I am beaten back to my hometown (I can't complain, In fact, I don't know what I'm writing after I read it, Yang Shen + Confucianism, Taoism, and some other hodgepodges.) Moreover, this book is really good. I can write 5 or 6 chapters of poems. (In the end, I didn't know that the atomic bomb was so powerful. A person who can fight with the law of heaven and break space would be afraid of the atomic bomb. I'm afraid it's not the kind of atomic bomb that can blow up the planet.)

All the logic of the system's personality collapsed, from the very beginning! I tried to force myself to read it but found that I really couldn't embarrass myself. I couldn't ignore it because of my embarrassment. I finally understood why I hadn't seen so many words before. Gold always shines, but dirt certainly doesn't attract attention.

This book is poisonous, and the setting is broken from the beginning. It is about a knight who enjoys grudges and uses force to break the ban. Legalists and Xia are fundamentally opposed to each other, and the Yang Shen Gai is just a cover-up....

How should I put it? The idea is good, but the author is not strong enough to write the feeling, and the plot is a bit confusing.

Has this book changed several authors? A bit inconsistent. The first Pan Emperor's favorite heir was the prince's son. It is written and written that it is gone. Secondly, since they are all fantasy. Why would a medical king (Chu Feng) be forced to do nothing by a little poison? Third. One of Pandi's three great masters feels like an ordinary person. There is also the strong luck and momentum. And where did the grand masters from those aristocratic families get the innate courage to kill a martial saint. . Sometimes the Martial Saint is written to be extremely awesome. Sometimes it's just a few ordinary people who dare to fight. . . I feel no respect at all. . Not even afraid of death. .

The protagonist studies Legalism, and the basic principles of Legalism should be based on the way of heaven. . . The emperor is under heaven. . . It should not be based on dragon energy. . . The rules of heaven and earth are laws. . . Dragon energy is nothing. . . .

The beginning of the book is amazing, and it feels strange to read it, but the more you read, the more puzzled you become. The protagonist has traveled through eighteen years. Including the years he lived in his previous life, the total age is probably thirty or forty. Generally speaking, the character of a person of this age should be finalized. Moreover, living in a big family after time travel is still a direct lineage. Even the eldest girl in the Red Mansion cannot be compared to the young lady from a small family outside. This is what Juqi Qi nourishes the body, but under such circumstances, the article still has a sour smell, and the teacher pointed out that it is necessary to nourish Qi. So when and why did he start to become extraordinary? When they entered the first secret realm, the Confucian leader came to the conclusion that this man was extraordinary, and the teachers who attended the poetry gathering of more than seventy chapters also felt that he was extraordinary. So the question is, what did he go through to have this change? In this process, only one Ma Wu (that's probably his name) was killed. In an ordinary treasure-hunting murder plot, according to common sense, he should have changed from a poor scholar to a not-so-poor scholar, with a little courage to make a decision. But somehow he has such a magnanimous bearing that he is extraordinary. Even if there was a turning point such as a fever that almost killed me or a fart that blew me away, I reluctantly accepted it. And just reveal a little bit of knowledge before time travel. It won't be so miserable that he will be expelled from the family, but when the protagonist arrives, he suddenly has no scruples and recites poems and articles casually. So what did he think in the past eighteen years? It would be better to set the time when the protagonist was already eighteen years old, so that the protagonist's change would be a matter of course.

After the 400th chapter, I feel that some chapters are not connected. For example, in the previous chapter, I wrote about the beheading that did not arrive after the third drumbeat. Later, I wrote about the one who did not arrive and slept in the brothel until dawn, and then started to write about correcting official documents. Can the chronological order be sorted out? The scene jumps are too abrupt, and many things are left unfinished. For example, what happened after the third drumbeat is not mentioned. There are many similar ones

I feel that the author's thinking is confused and the power system is not clear. One moment, the martial arts saint destroys the world, and the other moment, he is as timid as a mouse. I don't understand. They are both as powerful as gods and demons, but they are walking on thin ice and trembling. The swordsman can use ten thousand swords in one second, but he still throws a rat weapon to save a person.

However, the author does not know much about Baijia. Legalism comes from Confucianism, and Han Feizi and Li Si are both students of Xunzi. Moreover, many parts of what the author writes are contradictory, either thick and dark, or ruthlessly objective. It's a mess. When I first started reading it, I felt that the author's setting was very poor.

Well written ᵎ(•̀㉨•́)و ̑̑ Come on

The protagonist joins Legalism just to have a backer and to hide his secret plan, but not everything is for others.

We need to take care of the book review section, there aren't any good reviews 😥

Expose it, expose it! If you let him go, others will know about it. If you don't let him go, others will know about it. If you kill him first, you will make a profit. If others find out, he will not necessarily die. Keep him as an eyesore. If you let him go, it will cause trouble and then it will be difficult to kill him.

Does the author not have a fan title?

No matter how good the strategy is, it is useless if there are no soldiers in hand.

It feels like letting the token fly away means that the coward's prison is too weak. Doesn't drawing a prison block a space? To be honest, if you just let a token with some space ability fly away casually, the cowardly method will not be beaten by the sect magician. After the token flies away, you will probably abuse the master. Let's see what happens next.

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