War Agent

I have read about 50 chapters and entered the academy chapter. I can clearly see the author's outstanding advantages. The overall plot rhythm, character portrayal, and character shaping are all very outstanding. In this aspect, I can see that this is completely the author's strength. Whether it is the tutors in the academy, the female pirates, or the maintenance worker, the three supporting characters in the factory have very eye-catching character traits! Several so-called poisonous points in the process are actually within the acceptable range. It is far from achieving the effect of instantly persuading people to retreat. Take the section where the rich second generation wants to kill the protagonist. At the very least, the author clearly explains the cause, process, and result. Although the logic and rationality are lacking. But it does not affect the overall plot advancement. However, there is still a lot of room for improvement in terms of the design of this scene and time alone. Why do many people feel uncomfortable when they see this section. The reason actually lies in the author's creation of the villain. Especially the creation of passerby villains. Too perfunctory. The author writes this kind of plot in the novel. There is 800 even if there is not 1000. Why do some authors write such plots that make people feel comfortable while others make them uncomfortable. The reason lies in the rationality and logic of the incident. The relationship between the two characters wants to develop from passers-by to mortal enemies. This requires a reasonable process. First there is an intersection, and then there is an entanglement for some reason, and then it escalates to a conflict, and then the villain suffers a small loss and becomes unhappy. Only then will you want revenge, and only then will you suffer a big loss, and then you will feel resentment. Only then will it escalate to the point of wanting to kill people. Only after you have suffered a loss can you use rhetorical techniques such as a malicious look when describing something. Before that, the most we could use was contempt to describe the gap in social status. The superiors would have an innate sense of superiority over the inferiors. No one would look at a bug with resentment before being hurt by it. (To exaggerate, it's just because the protagonist took one more look at the girlfriend the villain is chasing, and has a chance to answer the teacher's question. The villain looks at the protagonist with resentment, and wants to kill the protagonist. This is a standard routine in Xiaobai's novels. There is no logic and rationality. Just because the plot needs it, the villain is given a mental aura to promote the development of the plot.) The depth of the author's skills is reflected in such small details and small plots. In fact, the author's character creation and description have such outstanding advantages. Why not think differently? Rather than mentally retarded villains, readers in Zai prefer to see highly intelligent villains with charismatic personalities who have no right or wrong in confronting the protagonist. Some are just conflicts of interests, or conflicts of positions, or conflicts of ideas, or conflicts of beliefs, or conflicts of race. In short, they are all irreconcilable. It is destined to be a conflict of life and death to advance the plot, which is much more advanced than Xiao Baiwen's pretentious and slap-in-the-face routine. I'll give you a thousand-word comment again. You delete the previous one. That comment can easily attract new readers.

I passed by and cast two votes. I like science fiction, I like mechas, I like battleships, I like giant ships and cannons. This is a man's romance. I don't like science fiction in which someone can make fireballs.

I'm not going to be published, so I didn't add a skirt. I'll save the book first, and then I'll kill it after 1 million words.

I'll give you two monthly passes this month. 😏Looking forward to becoming a god

I have been saving for a long time, but as long as I remember to vote for recommendations, I will keep voting. The student party has no money, so it can only subscribe to support.

I've been keeping it,,,, taking a nap

The update feels so slow. Is it an illusion?

If pure mecha is true, at least I would be interested in watching another super series high kxsmdbcz

After two days of reading, I finally saw it on the shelves. Leave a comment to support the author 🤭

Dragoon shit. . What the hell is Titanic? Why is it not an undead but a dragon rider?

I just discovered the book. As a fan of mecha literature, I will read it first and review it later. The results don't seem to be very good, so I hope you won't be disappointed. As an encouragement to the author to write about this topic. No matter what, please vote for recommendation first to show your encouragement.

It was amazing at first, with wasteland exploration and battleship survival, and Leah's shooting was also surprising. But the plot after the rescue is full of poisonous points. Why is there inexplicable hostility everywhere!

I like Gundam anime and I also like mecha-type novels, but to be honest, the way Gundam drives is just like farting and unrealistic. I haven't read this novel yet, so I don't know if the driving method is the same as Gundam or neural link driving.

This is the time to become popular. The author, please come on, don't be a eunuch.

When I saw Xinghai, I thought it was another game routine added by the academy, but it turned out that there was no game in class and I was not interested, which was surprising 👍

This is a second-hand building, please feel free to use your character design...✌️