Lazy

Just a rant, there are so many people with the surname Yun in history literature.

Was the protagonist really over sixty years old before he was reincarnated? Why is this life experience so naive in ancient times! It would be a really good book if we ignored some of the protagonist's flaws, which would be a pity. . .

I felt very good about this book before, and I kept following it until I saw a ship as big as the Liaoning being built. This is simply extremely poisonous. Although it is just a YY novel, it still requires basic logic and cannot be written blindly. Oh, let's get together and part ways.

Look, the pig's trotter is called Yunhao! I simply want to imitate Tang Zhuan, but I don't have the writing style to portray his soul. I imitate him, and what I see is a smart little guy who is no bullshit but likes to pretend to be talented, high-profile and low-key. In other words, this pig's foot (you can just call it the author), apart from having some modern insights, has negative IQ and other abilities! At most, it has not reached the passing line of the elites of the Tang Dynasty. You are still playing for 78 cents. The ancients did not have as much knowledge as modern people, but the ancients were not idiots! ! You have to believe in the great achievements of your ancestors

I don't understand why so many people kneel down and lick Li Er, what a barbarian there is! The emperor who changed history and became one through the ages.

After reading more than ten chapters, I was almost poisoned to death. Without any power background, he had to break the legs of Sihu (I think he was called Sihu) because of Qin Qiong's gratitude to him (helping Qin Qiong pay the bill). If he didn't leave a good impression on Qin Qiong, such a vicious 7-year-old child would have to repay his flaws. Who would want to date such a child? What is Qin Qiong's personality? Viewers beware!

What annoys me the most are the types who say they want to eat and drink and wait to die, but in the end they are busier than anyone else.

It's really rubbish, has no skills, and looks down on this and that. The character of the protagonist is really disgusting.

Writing fictional history, without any historical knowledge, and using countless modern words, seems awkward and inconsistent. Adding in some jokes that the author thinks are funny, it looks really awkward! Is the protagonist in his 60s? I thought I would end up in a dog's belly when I was sixty years old in my last life! I really can't stand it.

Regardless of the plot, writing techniques, and writing style, the first thing to write a historical article is to understand the background, culture, currency, and military power of that era... During the founding years of the Tang Dynasty, the people directly used silver as currency, and also embossed silver. This is like someone telling me that the common currency in China in the 21st century is Yuan Datou. I didn't read the others, so I just asked them to leave.

The writing is so rubbish, and you have no ability to protect yourself and are messing around. What can a seven-year-old do? He is too naive.

Seeing the sixteen-seven-year-old Wu Yuanshuang and the young Li Shimin, Qin Qiong and Shan Xiong believed in these people. I think the timeline is wrong 🤐

Shen Nong tried the poison himself, but he didn't expect the poison to be too powerful.

I, Shennong, have tasted all the articles in the world. However, one chapter was poisoned to death! Okay, let's talk about it. The protagonist is resurrected in a coffin, and he is only 7 years old, so there is no need to watch it later. Let me ask you, the author, what can a 7-year-old child do? Given the conditions at home, a 7-year-old child has the mind of a demon. I will definitely invent various things later. Otherwise there is no means of survival. You are resurrected from the dead, and your mind is like a demon. In those days when people believed in ghosts and gods, it would be weird if you didn't get beaten to death.

He looked bitter and resentful when he came out. How dark is this mentality? I can watch it. The IQ of the protagonist is hard to describe.

I saw seventy or eighty pictures! It feels like the author is just writing randomly without a unified timeline. Everything is put together into a story. The background of the times was not considered, and the causes and consequences were not explained. It always feels a bit put together

I think this free offer is poisonous. What the hell is that?

Speaking now, it's really not that good. It feels a bit similar to Tang Zhuan. The protagonist's surname is Yun and your surname is also Yun. Why is the writing style of the question so messed up? It's not like imitating Tang Zhuan.

You have been seeking death! Do you know why the ancients kept emphasizing etiquette? The etiquette here can also be called principles, it is to protect oneself. Can a person like him who seeks death survive to grow up?

Aren't you particular about time travel? The beginning is in the mourning hall. The original person couldn't help but be dead, and suddenly he came to life! Please consider the feelings of the ancients!

Without electricity and large machinery, how were trains made? Molds? What could be produced with the level of technological production at that time?

These chapters are directly copied from the original text of Qin Qiong's Selling Horses. .

Was there any examination in the Tang Dynasty? I didn't want to read it after reading the first page.

How to say this, I just read the beginning, torturing the main character, giving up, and if I don't show pretense when reading a time-travel novel, and if I don't engage in some high-intelligence, conspiracy, then it's a hammer!

What is written in this? Did the editor get paid? Piece it all together, no outline and no linearity

Religion was originally the earliest MLM organization

There are no good people in this book. The author is too murderous and there is a river of blood.

I can't understand what's written at all, maybe I'm not smart enough.

There are so many missing chapters in this book, I currently see 51 chapters. Chapters 1 to 51 are missing 5 chapters.

Although the first hundred or so chapters in the book do not specify the year, it is assumed that Li Er had just been married for about a year, that is, he was about 16 years old. Li Yuan started the army when Li Er was about 18 years old! But Yang Guang hasn't ascended the throne yet?