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It is recommended that the author correct the typos. There are many typos in each chapter, which looks very laborious 😢😢 and seriously affects the reading experience.

Phew, let me tell you the author, even if Chongzhen took control of the military, he could not eradicate the eunuchs. Chongzhen should have eliminated the aristocratic family. The aristocratic family is an autonomous region. Except for counties, towns and cities, most other places are controlled by the aristocratic family. Do you think you won't be afraid if you have military power? Do you live with a family? Needless to say, when Chongzhen dies, the family will dare to seize military power when Chongzhen is old. Let's not talk about how difficult it is to take control of the military. Zhengde wanted to take control of the military, but he fell into the water and fell ill and died. Apocalypse also wanted to regain military power, but fell into the water and fell ill and died after eating the elixir. The eunuchs are the emperor's eyes and the emperor's arms. If you dare to get rid of the eunuch family, they will show you every minute. And the correct thing is to hold the military power and support the eunuchs (Jin Yiwei is not reliable at this time). Then they win over failed scholars, implement land reform, and secretly encourage farmers to overthrow aristocratic families. In the early stage, they will push forward every aristocratic family, and in the later stage, they will win over a group of them and defeat them. After participating in the land reform, farmers must cling to the emperor's lap to avoid being liquidated by the remaining aristocratic families. Change the policy from a small government that can only go to the county to a big government that can go to each village (I learned about this from reading Wanli 1592, and I think it makes sense, so I will discuss it with everyone). Only in this way can the plight of the Ming Dynasty be completely reversed. Otherwise, after a hundred years, Chongzhen will die and reincarnation will happen again.

The paragraph is too long and I'm tired of reading it. Are there any sentence breaks like this? Densely packed

Thank you all for your support. To be honest, Ruying wanted to give up many times when I was writing this book, because as everyone said, the book is really not very good, and the average order has not reached 200 until now. When it was first put on the shelves, there was not even 100, but It is your support and encouragement that have made me go till today. Ruying is really grateful to everyone. Whenever I want to give up, I will think of your support. Ruying grits his teeth and continues to study. Here Ruying just wants to say that although the results are not good, I will write down well. Also, if you have any good suggestions, please leave them here and Ruying will consider them carefully.

Sorry, I only read one chapter and come back to comment! To actually say that because he eradicated the eunuchs and then pacified the country is ridiculous! To be honest, if Chongzhen had not killed Wei Zhongxian in history, the Ming Dynasty would probably have been able to survive for a few more years!

It's so wordy that I can't stand it. . . . , A tank external armor test was written for four or five chapters. . . From 75mm artillery to more than 100 calibers one degree at a time. . . Of course, for the sake of rigor, the experiment must be done this way. . But you can't write the question like this. . . . .

There are too many typos, the sentences are not smooth, and the paragraphs are too long.

The writing is too poor, there are too many typos, it's embarrassing to read, and the view of the universe is too small.

This book is very tiring to read. The paragraphs are long and the word order is problematic. Confusing words and failing to convey the meaning are the norm. The typos and spellings are even more serious, and the language of the narrative is very protracted. I could explain it clearly in one sentence, but if I had to break it into two or three sentences, I would feel embarrassed and almost have cancer, so I decided to abandon the book.

Let's not talk about the writing style. Let's talk about Chinese characters. There are a lot of typos. Not to mention that I have spoken Mandarin since I was a child. I have been speaking Mandarin since I was studying in elementary school. The author just made the sentences fluent. The author can write more than one million words. He is really a talent.

The first chapter writes that Chongzhen eradicated the eunuchs and avoided the destruction of the country. . It's so simple

The most terrifying thing about this type of book is that the author's information is not checked. If nothing else, let's take civilization level as an example. Other god-level civilizations can play with the universe as a ball. This book is nothing 😥😥

Anyone with a younger sister will not watch it. I don't know what your mentality is. Can't you bring a younger brother?

Apart from anything else, the strictness of the article makes me very irritated. It's not poisonous.

I've been chasing you for so long and you're in trouble! ! ! ! ! ! !

This is the book with the most typos that I have ever read, bar none.

Because, after all, because, so, and too many! Always go back one step at a time and explain too much.

Typos are not mentioned from the beginning to the end. Also, the power consumption of the gold battery is a serious bug. Author, have you ever written and don't know how to read it yourself? How can you be good if you are not serious about your work?

Technology is technology, don't do anything about cultivating immortals.

Start by eradicating your own power. This is the first time I read this article 😄

After reading chapters 7 and 8, there were so many typos that I felt like vomiting, and the overall feeling was that it was messy and complicated. Dissuaded

What a bad article. I can't stand the second chapter. Has the author watched many domestic movies? I can't stand it anymore with a maid.

There is no logic in developing science and technology, and there is no rigor in scientific research.

Has the author graduated from primary school? Even a primary school student is not as good as a person who has a lot of typos and illogical sentences that can be explained clearly in one sentence. It takes you a few sentences to make it clear and it is still nondescript.

This novel was written a long time ago and from today's perspective, it's really boring.

Why are you contradicting yourself? I said before that mobile phones and computers did not appear, but immediately even computer systems appeared.

I wanted to watch it, but the front part was too poisonous. . .

Chapter 3 as soon as it comes? Moreover, the writing skills are still poor, and I am also drunk.

There are a lot of typos and the sentences are not fluent!

Advanced civilizations will start a war because of lack of food! ~(￣▽￣~)~Are you kidding me┐(─__─)┌